Cast Off the Flesh, and Only 206 Bones Remain

The way you write it is hard for anyone to read. Reborn in a modern city, but has no memories? What's the point of being reborn then? The protagonist isn't even mentioned until Chapter 3.

This is a reflection from my reading experience many years ago, from a reader's perspective: story writing should be like a feather falling, not like a stone falling. A story that readers can easily understand is not a good story. Unfortunately, I've seen many stories where the plot simply unfolds as the stone falls.

This is the truth.

The main protagonist only appears in Chapter 3; author, you dare to write that?

Don't worry, this book will definitely be abandoned. Most of the chapters that are released after 20 or 30 chapters are likely AI-generated works from a studio.

The logic itself is inconsistent. First, how long was the protagonist kidnapped, to the point of turning into skeletons? Second, you said it's a world without supernatural beings, and you yourself don't possess anything extraordinary, like a system or anything like that. So how did you become active after being reborn as a skeleton?

That would be incredibly stupid—to be so scared that you run to the police station despite the possibility of being imprisoned.

I have a few questions now: It was mentioned earlier that the bones couldn't be missing any parts. Was the bone scraped with bone powder (the bone's strength must be extraordinary), or was it drilled or something, leaving a defect? ​​Then, the flower of the Three Flowers Gathering at the Top was so easily removed—wouldn't that damage his cultivation level?

I feel like there's foreshadowing here, and I'm already prepared to drop the book. In my experience, the later parts are definitely toxic.

This description looks very familiar... Isn't this that Earth Demon Ancestor thing?