Destruction of the City

It feels like a fairly mature author is writing this.

Cao thief? Why do you keep portraying other people's wives😰

The recent plot is very mysterious. First, during the war, the protagonist ran to kill his teammates because of his inexplicable compassion. Moreover, his teammates were forcibly killed when they were surrounded by Yao, who had previously enslaved the protagonist. Which side is the protagonist on? Even if you want to kill, you can't let Yao consume a wave first, and then kill after rescuing him? Moreover, brother, you are still fighting. You have killed the leader of the team. Can you save your apprentice's father? Can you complete the mission given to you by the leader? Will the other tribesmen panic, will the camp be breached by Yao, and will they all be killed by the Yao people? The second is to just kill, but no one was killed. For the first time, I thought I was dead, and I didn't need any skills to hit him. Before I left, I was beaten up by Yao Guo and was injured. The second time, I found the enemy of Yao, but I didn't kill him. Instead, he was beaten to a pulp by the bullets that the Yao people used to deal with their teammates. The third time, I found that my teammates were resurrected and that something was very wrong with my disciple's father. I had seen black liquid from dead people and crazy people before, but I told myself that I didn't find anything unusual, and then I was ready to leave. . . . . Don't you want to kill your teammates? He was resurrected and you left? ? ? Forcibly create an enemy with the same strength as the previous personal guard who was valued by the Ice God, right? The author, you are a literary youth, you can say it bluntly, the political and military descriptions are also extremely naive, it is really a pity for such a good idea and good narrative ability

A bunch of guys, I looked at these pictures and the theory and logic didn't make sense. The most important thing was that there was no sense of involvement at all. I felt the fun part, and there was no desire to continue watching. There is no foreshadowing, this ee can see through this, the flow of the story.

Support the author greatly, it's great!

I read so many chapters. I feel that low-level transcendental ones are also rubbish. It's like fighting for eggs that are not raw or undercooked

Have you confirmed the heroine so early? Describing the emotional scene too early is a bit afraid of collapse later.

Did the author want to write a story about two male protagonists? Why does Huang Shang have so many scenes?

The writing and story are excellent, and the key is stable updates!

I've read a few chapters, they're pretty good, I'll bookmark them.

Why did the author spend so much time writing about Huang Shang? The protagonist was clearly ambushed. Or is it that the author wants to write about two protagonists?