I Log into a Game in the Cultivation World

There's nothing wrong with the content, at least it's enjoyable to read. The main thing is that the panel design is really average. Can you take the time to optimize it? It's either densely packed with words that are useless, or abbreviated words interrupt the sense of substitution. I think if you want to write a first-level talisman to include all the talismans, we don't need to know the specific spells. You just need to tell them when you use them. The same goes for spells. Those are obviously just used in transition and have no trace in nearly ten chapters. I feel that it would be very comfortable to find a name to include them all. Let's not talk about the plot. The system panel really needs to be optimized.

Don't describe Xiao Yurou too much, it looks so embarrassing. The two of them had no relationship foundation. Since they were separated, it was a breakup. When they reunited later, they acted like an unmarried couple and asked if they wanted to. It was really awkward. Everything else is pretty good, above food and grass.

Why is there a plot about a woman? Is this woman of any use to the male protagonist? Why not report it directly to the leader to deal with this diplomatic issue, and make your own decisions without fear of self-defeating?

I write about so many women but don't play with them, thanks Mao Xian

Author, I'm sorry 🙂, I didn't lock the screen and put it in my pocket, bumping here and there, I don't know why I clicked on the report 😥

Other authors have three meals a day, but you have one meal a day. Don't you use your feet with your long hands? Others can type faster than you with their toes.

It's really good-looking. It doesn't overwhelm the protagonist and everything goes as it should. The protagonist's body is far away from disputes and is steadily developed. The game character wanders around lawlessly. The two pleasures of invincibility and righteousness are satisfied at once.

The characters in the game are good-looking, but the protagonist is not good-looking

Can you stop taking advantage of the popularity of the game? It is a system where God rewards those who work hard, with a slightly slower pace.

Except for always writing some inexplicable emotional scenes, everything else is written very well. When Xiao Shirou came out, I almost wanted to give up the book.