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The content itself isn't too bad; at least it's a pleasant read. The main problem is the interface design, which is really mediocre. Could you please optimize it? Either it's a dense, useless bunch of text, or the use of a brief, abbreviated word interrupts the immersion. For the Talisman Path, I think you could just write "First-Order Talisman Path" to encompass all Talisman Paths.

Don't describe Xiao Yurou too much; it's so awkward. The two didn't have any emotional foundation, and since they separated, they broke up. Their subsequent reunion and acting like an engaged couple, even asking if she wanted to be with him, was really cringeworthy. Everything else is great; above average.

Why add a female character? This woman is completely useless to the male lead. It would be better to just report to the leader and handle this diplomatic issue directly. Isn't it risky to make things worse by taking matters into one's own hands?

You wrote about so many women and didn't play with any of them, what a load of rubbish.

Author, sorry 🙂, I didn't lock the screen and it was in my pocket. I kept bumping into things and somehow I accidentally clicked the report button 😥.

Other authors eat three meals a day, while you only eat one. Don't you use your hands and feet? People can type faster with their toes than you.

It's truly a great game. Everything unfolds naturally without overshadowing the main character. The protagonist develops steadily away from conflict, while the game character roams freely and lawlessly, satisfying both the invincibility and survivalist desires in one go.

The game characters are good-looking, but the protagonist is not.

Can you please stop riding the coattails of the game's popularity? It's a system where hard work pays off, but the pace is a bit slow.

Aside from the frequent inclusion of nonsensical romantic subplots, everything else is well-written. I almost gave up on the book when that Xiao Rou character appeared.