Fairy, I Am Such a Good Person

What I wrote in the front is quite logical, but what follows is a mess. Since Tianchong Mountain is an illusion, why not write that the protagonist sleeps until dawn, and then finds out that it is the end of the illusion?

There are a lot of useless dialogues. It was quite interesting at first, but I got tired of stressing it over and over again. It's still like this when it's on the shelves. This book won't go far.

In a word: A heifer carrying a parachute - flying all over the sky! Too strong! ! !

I've read more than 30 chapters and I have no idea what the protagonist wants to do? Various modern words, several in one chapter, and the experience looks like traveling And the heroine, she is short, she is 53 in every sentence, 53 in every sentence, it is just the two of you, forget about shouting, get closer, there are outsiders around, her brother is here, still shouting 53, isn't this sick? Isn't this the same as your wife, who keeps calling you "3cm" outside? Also, I feel that the protagonist definitely has an unlucky physique. He is really non-stop. Wherever he goes, something goes wrong, just like Conan.

The writing is quite interesting, but the updates are too slow. It seems that the author will automatically upload a chapter at a scheduled time every day after finishing writing. .

The beginning is super catchy, but then it depends on the protagonist's cultivation progress and the plot.

? ? ? Brother, don't stop updating. I voted for you 4 times this month.

Could it be that when you read a new book and read it little by little, you ended up cutting it?

The opening of Fairy, Please Hear My Explanation is similar to the opening, but the "evil" setting is quite interesting to cover up the flaws of the character. Starting from Qingshui County after escaping from the mountains, the plot moves towards a transitional period. 1. Mediocre and brainless description of the characters. 2. And the lack of polishing of details. 3. Some strange settings (spirits). It makes the hidden shortcomings appear, so it changes from interesting to mediocre.

The book is well written. The copy of Tianzou Mountains at the beginning attracted me firmly. The plot doesn't have too many poisonous points. From the current point of view, this book should be a proper harem. The two existing heroines are very unique. I feel that the only shortcoming is that the update is a bit slow. People who want to read the book can still read it first, subscribe to it, and upload the data to the author. Otherwise, I am really afraid that the author will cut off the current data. What a good book😫

It's okay, but a bit plain. The heroine's brother really affects the perception, and the sister's control is a bit too much. There is also the magistrate who is so strong, he sets up a series of inequalities, and finally seeks out the enemy in vain. Although it is a joke, it is very defiant. Finally, I have to say that it's too plain (at least that's how the previous plot is)

The character design of the girl controller is really bad. I suggest you find a plot early on where you get raped and then kill it. As for the rest, it's pretty good.

The author is really short and weak

It was modeled after Fairy Please Hear My Explanation. It was quite well written, but the male and female protagonists fell in love too quickly, and the male protagonist always used foul language to give people a bad impression.

Judging from the introduction, is it the Alien Beast style? The protagonist is a skunk who upgrades his farts into supreme supernatural powers? A fart floods the world

The male protagonist's xxx is all common sense. Then there are too many scenes where other people are shocked and so on. It's so boring. Although I roughly know what the author wants to express, the description method is a bit too single.

So far, the interaction between the characters is pretty good, and there are no riddles. The plot is still unfolding, but I am quite interested in the characters' responses and follow-up. However, some of the dialogue and rapid development of the male and female protagonists in the first few chapters of the comments may make some people feel offended and abandon them. I think it is quite a pity.

Did you see the good brother at the back and tell me if the male protagonist's name for the female protagonist has changed? If it hasn't changed, I won't waste any money 🙂

The writing is pretty good, but the author feels that he is a little lacking in shaping the atmosphere. Often, when the atmosphere is tense or sad, there will be some inexplicable and out-of-the-box dialogue. It feels like the protagonist has not integrated into this world, not even the heroine. As a result, the originally attractive plot was completely destroyed.

The plot and the surrounding interactions are quite good, but it's a bit anticlimactic. It doesn't explain anything, and it doesn't cover up the flaws. Author, you can do better.

It's pretty good, the copy at the beginning attracted me.

The plot is very attractive, and the new book can make people's eyes brighter. I hope it will continue like this.

So far it seems to suit my taste 🙂

I took a look at the author's old books and felt that they are incomparable to this one.