This Is Really Not a Mechanical Ascension

I feel that this novel is about the same as the first novel. The main problem is that the combat power system is too thin. For example, if I am in the middle stage of A-level and you are in the low-level stage of A-level, then I can beat you violently, and then the protagonist will be in trouble. C-level can fight B-level, B-level can fight A-level, and A-level can fight S-level. Basically 80% of the conflicts are based on the level, and then I think the protagonist is a loser, then I fight, and then I lose. The more I read, the more boring I am. The rest is quite good, a pure and refreshing novel.

The upgrade story in the interstellar era is similar to the theme of Super Mechanic. The core setting is to gain special abilities by controlling mechanical items, forming a unique mechanical evolution system. The setting is relatively novel, and the description of the battle scenes is also very graphic. It is a very good quality sci-fi upgrade story.

The front is exciting, the middle is okay, and the back is bloated. Strictly speaking, it's a little bad, but it's not a eunuch.

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The protagonist is decisive in killing, please update more 😍

I still have to write about Interstellar. The original version was good and it was good to watch, but the road was set and it didn't feel like there was that much suspense. Every time you encounter a crisis, you know how to solve it. StarCraft is different. There are many methods and you can write about anything.

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop... Update update update

The most important thing in the new book issue is to read it, which is an important indicator of whether it can be recommended and whether it can be written down. Thank you!

The protagonist is too greedy. Money can solve the problem. There is no need to risk being exposed later.

The works are fodder, cool articles The world background and so on are fine The only drawback is that the aura of intelligence and the emotions of the protagonist are too weak, just like a player character, interests outweigh everything, and you can do whatever you want to be strong. The author also knows that pure egoists are disgusting, so the protagonist kills evil people who already have a way to die and do good deeds. It's just that... The human touch is too light. Self-interest and a weak main plot lead the story's rhythm to murder, arson, gold belt, and upgrade. The metronome that introduces the villain and kills people plays in a loop. At present, I have seen more than a hundred chapters with only this rhythm. I am not a directing author, but a metronome can finish a book, but rhythm cannot. It is not surprising that everyone is motivated to catch up at the beginning and then move the book out of the bookshelf after stopping (such as me). Overly repetitive plot rhythms can only be accepted by unit dramas. At present, the author's level is very good. If he can break out of this comfortable rhythm circle, use his mature metronome production skills and add a little bit of vivid protagonist ideas to become a great writer.

I have been chasing this book since I put it in Wanjie. I have voted for it every month, so I can't go too far with it.

Overall, it was okay, but I was a little tired from jumping on the wire rope and doing dangerous operations all the time, and I wasn't afraid of killing myself at all.

Overall it's pretty good, but some problems are obvious. This book has some shadows of Super Mechanic, but in terms of plot development, it is not as reasonable as Super Mechanic, it is too fast, and there is no sense of step-by-step, and many plots are a bit taken for granted and not very rigorous.

The protagonists of some novels are the smiling protagonist, the bitter smiling protagonist, the nose-touching protagonist, and the scratching-the-head protagonist. This book is the thinking protagonist 😡

The new book is coming, it will have multiple female protagonists, right?

It's boring, the plot of the Torch Organization is stinky and long.

To be honest, you should steal some of Qi Peijia's luck. You write about the Silver Revolutionary Army that he didn't write about. You write about the pioneering history that he didn't write about. You write about the Star Wars that he didn't write about.

A lot of data logic was not calculated clearly and all collapsed.

The author tells you honestly, is the copy of "The Mecha War is in full swing, You Say You Have Become an Immortal Emperor" in your small vest yours? It has not been updated, so it cannot be a real eunuch, right? 😡

Forget about typos, why is it still half-written? It affects the perception very much ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ

Haven't you released a new book yet? Fans' stickiness is limited, the author

How come you can kill people without any pressure just after being reborn?

This month's monthly tickets are all with you, plus my 22 recommended votes every day

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It looks good in the early stage, good in the middle, but not good in the later stage when meetings are held every day.

I have voted so many times, so I can't ask for more details