Shennong Daojun

After reading the book, all book friends unanimously commented that the later part of the universe was terrible. In the early stage, it relied on special new settings such as the four laws of heaven and time and the straw man method to attract people. The author did grasp the plot very well in the early stage. Basically, everyone was not dissatisfied before the universe chapter. The Sinong Succubus, the special luck promotion method, the Great Dream Academy, and the sense of hooking and coolness were all very well mastered. In the later stage, the straw man method was basically good. The last thing is that when a new method appeared, it lasted two chapters and then was immediately forgotten by the author. The Tianshi method was also completely forgotten. After the universe, Hou Bianfa was actually the main one. The four Tianshi methods had no role at all. The early part of the book is undoubtedly a masterpiece worth reading. Various novel settings bring a new experience. The succubus of Sinong gives a very high sense of satisfaction. The special plug-ins of the Dream Academy are also very enjoyable. It can be said that there are no shortcomings before the universe chapter, but after the universe chapter, there are more and more problems, and the plot has always been boring, with only one or two popping up occasionally. There are some cool points, such as the theory of Diejie Mountain and the theory of Shifang Mountain. Other than that, it is very, very bland. The setting of the universe chapter shows that the author wants to write a very large and complete world view, but the author's writing power cannot support his ideas at all. As a result, the new setting is not written well, the old setting is forgotten, and the plot related to the previous realm does not match up with many content in the later period and conflicts with each other. It is recommended that you read this book as if it were the end of Ascension to the Universe. The experience will be very good, or you can also see the realm of reincarnation. You can still read it before the advantages of the time traveler are completely forgotten.

I have been following it before, so I will give you a summary: 1. This book is worth reading the story before the ascension (actually, the later period before the ascension was a bit boring). The huge water after the ascension is very boring, and the writing style is obviously not as good as when I first started the book. 2. The setting of Si Nong is indeed relatively new, and there are also other professional settings such as Life Officer and Historian. But all the interesting descriptions are just before ascension. Although there is a new setting of the Life Official and Historian after Ascension, it really doesn't look good! The historian was powerful but rogue, and he was chopped down by the gods in a daze. 3. In short, there is a mess after ascension, so be careful.

It felt pretty good until the end of the Liangwang plot, but then the data began to collapse, and the plot became very bland or weird. What felt like a big chapter ended up laughing, and the conflicts were downplayed, leaving only a pleasant plot.

I didn't read the book on raising dragons in the East China Sea when I saw it. At that time, I thought this book might be the next super god, but now I'm back and reading it again 🤔🤔🤔 What the hell? What does this say? What the hell is sealed memory? If you can read it before ascending, it is really hard to stand after ascending 🤔🤔🤔 The identity of the player in the previous life was just a decoration. Look at how Han Xiao played in the universe version, it was just taking off; look at you again, you are invincible. This book is incomparable to Super God. I am really disappointed and made me look forward to it in vain. I'll wait for it to finish and then come back to see how the finale ends.

The writing is very smooth, and the setting is also good. It is very powerful. The author is a trumpet, he has a good grasp of all aspects, and he also pokes fun at me. I like it *^_^* There are still shortcomings. At present, it would be better to do ten chapters a day. It is really not enough to read [akimbo]

What can I say, after seeing what Yang An did when he appeared for the first time, I really feel that Yang An is very charming! In a very difficult choice, love, justice and law are both balanced, and wisdom, charm and courage are all indispensable. However, as a comparison, looking back on Zhao Xing, which moment best reflects Zhao Xing's character? Reading the full text, I found out that it turned out to be a chapter about the Soul-Guarding Grass Man, peeling off the skin, and hurting Tianhe. I couldn't help but sigh. We are all human beings, one of the sentient beings. Even though we have moral conscience, we will inevitably hurt others by accident. Zhao Xing's actions against the barbarian insect witches were dissuaded by many people, saying: "It will harm the peace of the world." Zhao Xing's reaction was to persuade with actual benefits, that is, a steady stream of military exploits in the future. And the author's writing was successful. This is very unreasonable. Even if a gentleman pays attention to actual interests, he will do something and not do something. If something touches the bottom line, will he give up just because of actual interests? Wouldn't there be a struggle? Human nature in reality is obviously not like this. The reaction of normal people is that they will be very afraid of Zhao Xing, because this person will have no bottom line and will use any means to benefit. Many people say that people who achieve great things do not stick to trivial matters, but they do not say that those who achieve great things have no bottom line. Since ancient times, in Chinese history, those who have achieved great things have always been compassionate and put the interests of millions of people first before resorting to extraordinary means, but there is still a bottom line. If the author wrote that Yuncheng was at a critical moment of life and death, with hundreds of thousands of people's wealth and lives hanging on a thread, and Zhao Xing had no choice but to make a difficult choice, I would still think it was reasonable, and I would admire this person, because for the sake of righteousness and greater benevolence, he chose to break through the bottom line of his own setting and show the glory of human nature from the struggle of human nature. But, in the author's description in this paragraph, why did Zhao Xing skin people? For profit, for merit, for reward. To put it more seriously, he is someone who will do anything for his own interests. Pay attention to interests and despise sentient beings. Not enough to carry the message. Will the laws of heaven in this world allow such a person to become a Taoist Lord? Why did Shen Nong taste hundreds of grains? Is it for yourself? Although you don't need to take reading too seriously. However, I have been pursuing the book to this day and voted for it all monthly. I really approve of the unique background setting of this book. It combines the game upgrade mode, the grand war background, and a person's officialdom/career promotion. It also integrates the setting into the details of life, and each character has an online IQ, which is very rare. However, this chapter, skinning people alive, is still hard for me to agree with, and it will make it difficult for me to have a vague "love" for Zhao Xing. He is a hero like Cao Cao, but in the end Cao Cao did not unify the Three Kingdoms. Why? Liu Bei seems weak, but he can divide the world with Cao Mengde. Why? Seeing this, I feel a little uninterested. The subsequent plot is nothing more than a person with small benevolence and righteousness, using his advanced knowledge, adding golden fingers, constantly acquiring resources, being promoted in the officialdom, and taking his subordinates and surrounding relatives and friends to reap the benefits. Subordinates and surrounding relatives and friends recognize and are grateful for these benefits. The whole story is like this. It can be named as the growth experience of a hero in troubled times in those years. Hey! Not bad, not bad. In fact, when I was reading the book, I had been secretly expecting the author to write a protagonist with glorious humanity, whose hard work, talent, wisdom, and willingness are all worthy of God's favor. So, I was a little disappointed when I reached this chapter. The author writes about the special opportunities in a person's (protagonist's) life as a game of upgrading and fighting monsters. Naturally, the characters he writes are the same as the game characters. Lack of deep exploration of people. Of course, one yin and one yang have advantages and disadvantages. The author has set up the game that he is good at, and used it to the fullest in the monster-clearing mode. It is indeed eye-catching and refreshing.

To be honest, the beginning of the early stage (I personally think it is from the time after going up the mountain to before going down the mountain) is almost the best online novel I have ever read. The setting is novel (especially the setting of the Wangyou Monument. Some juniors who are cultivating immortals can fight life and death when exploring, which is really low). In addition, in Chapter 94, the girl who gave the equipment did not pay attention to others or check whether there were any problems. No kindness or vigilance was shown. Moreover, Lin Baiwei never appeared again, and the role of the character could not be seen. But now it's just a little bit weak. I personally think the quality of the subsequent Shiyang Cave Heaven Academy chapter is still good, and the Jiutian Yingyuan Mansion battlefield chapter is also okay. The one where I raise dragons in the sea and start taming beasts is a bit better. Now that I have read Chapter 10 of this volume, I personally think that the most outrageous thing is that in this kind of officially organized competition, there is a setting where you can directly capture other people's pets and turn them into your friends. If you really can do this, stop competing and directly become the strongest in the Colosseum and capture the rest and make them your own. Also, the lynx in the back does not listen to the protagonist's command. In comparison, when the protagonist has a panel and helps others to tame the beast, the lynx shows great suppression, but still does not know the strength of the lynx, and other contestants who have experience and directly give away their pets in front of the emperor crocodile are considered minor problems. And even if these poisonous points are put aside, Chapters 9 and 10 only contain a clichéd pretend-and-slap-in-the-face story with Bobcat as the protagonist. Theoretically, since farming is related to agriculture, breeding is certainly a job of farming. However, although breeding is not a big problem in the front, something goes wrong later in the competition. All I can say is to find your own strengths and don't write about things you don't understand or are not good at. For example, as far as this book is concerned, there has been a lot of controversy when it comes to specific figures, especially area, weight, etc. It can only be said that many authors have indeed rich knowledge about history and literature, but if you don't understand them, don't fill in random numbers. The current suggestion is to stop before raising a dragon in the sea, and the collapse will be more severe after watching the comment area.

Among current fantasy novels, the Taoist system has the greatest influence, and novels related to Buddhism, Confucianism, Legalism, and Mohism are common. Although the peasant family is closely related to the life of the lower class, there are not many related novels. It is basically a pure field flow without the thrill of fighting. The combat system is still the same as that of the Taoist. This book at least establishes a logical combat system based on the peasant ideology. At present, it is still very innovative and can be regarded as a unique approach. The characters in the author's works have online IQs, and there are basically no plots of weak-minded pretentiousness and slaps in the face. The development of the story is logical, and the development of the plot is quite natural. The overall plot is not novel, but the author's writing skills honestly don't look like a newcomer's, so although I can guess the general outline, the story is still very attractive. The shortcomings are that the contradictions are not prominent, the characterization of the protagonist is not deep enough, and the sense of succession and transition is not enough. But the overall situation is at least food and grass. Currently, it is considered the background of a unified imperial court. Depending on the situation, the overall environment will change from order to collapse. The profile of farmers is gradually enriched, which can give people the feeling that the real world is slowly unveiling. However, at present, Confucianism and medical schools are looming, and legalist and military methods have not yet been seen. I hope it can continue to be enriched. The three major factions within the peasant family currently feel too harmonious. The conflict between internal factions and the various schools of thought can actually be a good point of conflict. The peasant family's ideological perspective on the world and specific problems should also be different. This can, together with the conflict, profoundly portray the character of Xiao Zhao. After all, time travel is different from rebirth. In terms of his attitude towards the character's death, Xiao Zhao's character transformation feels a little bit. . It's so fast, it doesn't look like a young worker who was born under the red flag and grew up in the spring breeze. I typed a lot of words, purely because I felt something about the article, so I didn't say anything and didn't listen to it. Anyway, come on, author, I hope I can write better 🙏

The organic combination of historical officialdom, the four seasons and the five elements, online game systems, martial arts luck, etc. Even if the routines are slightly older and the writing style is slightly insufficient, it still crushes the current garbage articles of ten words and one paragraph that are full of brainless AI. It is highly recommended.

Talking about the characters, the protagonist has a strong sense of alienation from the environment. He is more like a player playing a simulated game, with emotions and sorrows separated by a layer. The story he experiences is like following a plot, and the player plans an upgrade path. As for the NPCs in the game, some characters have detailed stories and real interactions, but the plot goes by too fast, and there are only a few faces. The description of the environment is very thin, and the changes in historical dynasties only exist in the mouths of the characters. There are no heroes and poets from ancient times to the present, and there are no wars and disputes in the waves of the long river. The land and people that peasants care more about are just a stream of light in the background. The unique and eye-catching farm system may be limited to the author's understanding, which is only theory and no reality. Later, when the character's occupation was understood as calling the wind and rain, and cultivating the heaven and earth within the law, it didn't feel anything out of the ordinary. Of course, in essence, the book's handling of contradictions, plot advancement, and story description are outstanding, and the book is also very compact, meeting most of the requirements for a refreshing article. This flower is beautiful and impressive. This meal is enough to fill your stomach. It's nothing special. It will never come back.

I've read over a hundred chapters, and I feel like the writing is okay except for emotional issues. When it comes to relationships between men and women, the writing is stiff, forcing straight men, and seems to avoid suspicion. What I'm saying is that if you don't want a female protagonist, don't write a female character who loves the protagonist. Just be a normal friend.

There are many types of occupations in the article, including farmers, warriors, craftsmen, weavers, priests, dancers, etc. The protagonist is Si Nong, who was originally just a farming profession. After the author strengthened it, he directly transformed into a powerful magician, which is understandable. However, the two professions of Craftsman and Weaver Girl seem a bit ordinary and ordinary. The article does not write much about specific abilities. Among them, Craftsman is slightly better. In general, the imbalance of professions is very obvious, which gives people an unreal feeling.      ， 81+？ Among them, 81 species belong to the Liu family, but only a few of them appear in the article. So why did you write a little more when writing? Most of the 81 species are blank, which makes the article a bit empty, and the readers who read it don't know why. At present, in the latest chapter, the author has added the craftsman's Shinra style and Taoist style, and then the dancers have also been added, such as one-person formation, and the warriors have airbenders and swordsmen.

The previous article was quite good and I gave it to you for the monthly pass, but the last ten chapters or so of raising pets have been too boring to be honest. I used to snatch the girl's cassock, but now I have taken it with a few strokes. How many chapters has Li Chengfeng been kidnapped? Shi Yong didn't describe or interact with him much. Murong Xue has already found this person. Wait, so many people don't write about raising pets. I feel emmm.

It's boring, because the traditional world view of immortality and the view of the universe are not compatible, and the universe is empty and large. The combination of the two is not interesting, and the spiritual energy ascension and the universe version are also very awkward to match, and a new Tianshi faction setting is introduced, which directly conflicts with the original natural disaster version. It has not been reflected. Now it is that many settings have not been filled in before, and you just jump to the map. You can fly to the whole white jade Kyoto in the sky, but you have jumped too much in different versions. The pretentious theories written by Mr. Zhao are still conservative. The theories that should be based on the ego faction have not been written yet. Those theories are all invalid, and you will directly fly to the universe version.

The author has a lot to offer, and his style is very to my liking. There is no first or best article, only the most suitable one. I like the writing style of this book very much. I hope the author can continue to break out. Of course, he must also pay attention to his health. After all, there are many examples of platforms like this. It is better to try to have both your cake and eat it too 😁😁😁

There are very few novels that I read this year that I am particularly satisfied with. The degree of integration and completion is very high. It has a very good integration of officialdom + battlefield + academy themes and fantasy + immortality + Shinto themes, and extracts the advantages of each theme without any trace of rigid style. It's really rare. Most of the online articles I usually read either extract the poisonous points of the subject matter, or the integration is so blunt that it makes people laugh. The degree of completion is very high. I mean that the world view, background, character labels and other settings are very complete. The promotion of official positions and the background functions of spells are really very attentive, making people feel real and immersive when reading. The author's basic writing skills are also very good, and he can maintain such a large number of updates without any disadvantages. There will be some minor problems, but this is an online novel, friends... It is worth supporting the genuine version

It's smelly and long, and I have no desire to open it. I originally removed the bookshelf, but I added it back to curse it! ! !

It's so easy to get together but not to break up, it drags on without ending, it uses huge sunk costs to lure readers, it doesn't update, it doesn't say anything, and it doesn't ask for leave. It's better to just say that you can't continue writing. You are a eunuch. Don't you even have this courage? Is escaping useful? For such a long time, no one from the author, operation, or editor has come forward to explain. They are all just like ostriches burying their heads in the sand, pretending not to see that the problem does not exist? The writing quality is so bad! Are you worthy of us readers? Get back at least half of the money you spent on chapter subscriptions after your ascension! Pay back the money!

It's the same alien online game novel, but it's very different from Super God's style. As a novel with a fairy tale as its background, the writing style is quite smooth, making people wonder if it's a new author. In addition, the plot setting has also taken a different path. Different from the tension brought by the escape and killing of enemies at the beginning of Super God, Shennong uses the imperial examination as the entry point to figure out how the protagonist grows in a prosperous dynasty. Compared with Super God, the plot is more complicated and has a feeling of being a mysterious master. The protagonist's growth plan for himself is also revealed in the words. It can feel that the author has a plan and a manuscript. The only fly in the ointment is that the number of words is too small. I will support it when the time comes.

The protagonist's idea is to gain immortality and survive until the chaotic era to achieve great ambitions. But the problem is that all the protagonist's actions now are to gain immortality. Where is the ambition? Where are the preparations for making great achievements? Isn't it said that the ego faction is the strongest faction? The protagonist teacher is also an ego faction. Why not contact the ego faction members? There is also the cat that has not been tamed for a long time. When asked why it is not tamed, it is said to be kept as a pet. This is not in line with the protagonist's plan to increase its fighting power for immortality. Moreover, since it is a pet, there is no need for the protagonist to give it to the cat whenever there is an opportunity. Breeding is also the responsibility of farmers. Tame cats, then breed a group of cats, and let the cat lead the group of cats to take care of and guard the fields. Instead of eating and drinking for free now, not only do you have no contribution, but you can't tell the difference between the big and small kings and regard themselves as the master. These could have been written during the training in Dongtian and the peaceful barbarian war, but as a result, the author was always in a hurry to enter the next stage, not knowing what to rush for, and a lot of content was not written. Another aspect is the personnel aspect. The protagonist still doesn't have his own team. Doesn't the protagonist treat the world like a game? As for Zhinu and Lu Qian, one can form weapons production and the other can provide land resources in the local area. Why not join the team? Obviously, we will provide resources to some people later to win favors. Why not join the ready-made ones? If you think the protagonist wants to live forever and is not trapped by love, then can't you just change your gender? Now this has become a situation where the main character does not understand it specifically to show that the main character is not trapped by love.

I have been reading this book since I started writing it, and I read a pirated version halfway through, and I thought it was good enough to switch back to the original version. Personally, I feel that before Ascension, it was indeed a fine book, but after entering the universe version, it took a turn for the worse. The characters are indeed unique, but the plot, especially some background settings, are obscure and difficult to understand. Although there are many updates every day, you can skip to read a lot of background content. Those "professional words", "explanations" and "units" can basically be ignored. There is really not much effective content every day. I've been reading Puluo recently. He also has a lot of new concepts and settings, but it's easy to understand and easy for readers to relate to. Each chapter seems very fulfilling.

Why do you keep getting kidnapped? Where do so many high-end games come from?

From the time I started reading the book until now, I would have given up on it if I didn't have obsessive-compulsive disorder. I would recommend the plot before the ascension to others. It is a good novel. The subsequent plot is like having hemorrhoids. I want to write a grand world view, but I am limited by my writing power, and the world view is broken bit by bit by myself. What does Zhao Xing look like? Does he look a bit majestic? He is still a god emperor. He has a tortoise-like air. He relies on whoever he relies on. He doesn't rely on himself at all. When trouble comes, he relies on Ji Si. I can't see his talent at all. So the author has to give it a try. It's better to let Gu Xiao succeed. Either I owe this or that favor, I'm at my end, the only way I can write that feels better is to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and finish the book.

When you enter the ancestral land of the Dragon Clan, you will only feel that the quality begins to decline. You get too many things for free. When you go to Shiyang Cave, you have to pay a price. Only by working hard can you change the fate of a small group of people, including Lao Chen. The Dragon Clan can directly get the treasures of foreign tribes for thousands of years and a bunch of high-end items at no cost. I originally planned to continue reading, but I didn't expect to read it again after just a few chapters. Is it a bit outrageous?

Without the participation of players, it is a soulless game. The alien world has predicted that players will appear since the first chapter. Now, even in the universe, no players have appeared.

The setting of the Lihuo Dao is interesting, but very strange. Are you saying that because the Lihuo Patriarch was worried that his disciples could not defend his teleportation array, he made a great wish to let others use it. After the teleportation of those who need to use it, he must complete the teleportation distance himself within a month, otherwise he will be charged interest, and he will die directly after one year. Are you saying that no one else can research the teleportation formation? Are you, Lihuo Dao, a sect that controls the world with one hand? Can you research things that others have not been able to research for thousands of years? What did Lihuo Dao give to heaven and earth? It seems like nothing was given. Moreover, when the protagonist first entered the Shiyang Cave for training, he could already make the straw man reach the speed of sound. What is the use of Lihuo? It can't be transmitted over long distances because it won't be completed in a month. No need to be close. If you are strong, you don't need to pass. Your own speed shouldn't be insufficient. You already have the flying boat. I don't know if the author knows that he has almost no Lihuodao scenes in the future, but he will write them again later. The profession of Si Nong is well written, but the problem is that only the profession of Sinong is well written. The first part is good, but the second part is not. Especially the protagonist, many times in order to promote the plot, he has to use game scripts and panels to talk about things.

If you have any unspeakable secrets, don't say anything! Come on! It's okay to write less every day!

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This book should be halfway through the plot by now, and many of the foreshadowings have actually been hinted at in this big chapter. First of all, let's talk about the title of the book "Shennong Daojun". Shennong not only explains Zhao Xing's occupation, which is the trinity of time, place, and self, but also indicates Zhao Xing's great achievements in solving the desolation of the universe and even reshaping the order of the universe, which is to save people and govern the world. Daojun is easy to understand, and it must be a higher state beyond the current highest stage of "gods." This is also mentioned in the chapter on ancient medicine. The god of doctors is also difficult to save the world, and he gradually disappears over time. For this reason, the Great Master must have made a big deal in the Xuanhuang World, or it can be said that the Xuanhuang World is a save point for saving the world. There are the protagonist Zhao Xing, the god-like Qingyuzi, the Dufu Tianzun Xiaoji who protects Zhao Xing, and the unknown secrets deep under the world. In the latest chapter, it is mentioned that Zhao Xing got help from an important plot character, obtained the legendary spirit-devouring grass, and at the same time destroyed the plan of the school city. I boldly guess that this important plot character is the mysterious person who was imprisoned by Emperor Mengwu mentioned earlier. There are three reasons for the character Wu Tian. First, at the end of the chapter, it is specifically mentioned that Zhao Xing used the magical power Five Finger Mountain to catch the Spirit-Eating Grass, and this skill was taught to Zhao Xing by Wu Tian. This is one; second, in the battle for Zhao Xing's fate, it was mentioned that Wu Tian sensed this, but it is gone. The following article should be a foreshadowing, and this is two; the third is that when mentioning the character Wu Tian himself, his realm does not match Zhao Xing's original memory. He did not follow the original historical line, which shows that Wu Tian is not an ordinary character, but should This should be an important plot character. It is very likely that he is a powerful clone who can help Zhao Xing overcome difficulties. He may even be another Zhao Xing's mutual friend after Qing Yuzi, who may help him uncover the hidden GM-like character in a corner of the Xuanhuang world. I hope that the author can make the spiritual core of the character Zhao Xing more clear in his subsequent creations. At present, he always gives me a vague feeling of being manipulated and drifting with the crowd. Come on, author!