The Simulation Became Reality: Did I Once Look Down on the Ages?

I immediately thought of Lord of the Stars. I was really upset about that book.

Tell me which factory you are from 🙂

It looks so frustrating, smelly and long, and the author always likes to play the ancient pretense of being awkward and blacking out every now and then.

Good books are rare. After more than ten years of reading, I have encountered a good book again. Come on.

After it was released, I was so overwhelmed that I read 10 chapters in a row that had nothing to do with the plot. This is not how I cheated money, right? I can't stand it anymore

No, author, can you... Be more watery? I just looked at the catalog...

The pace is too slow, and the writing of a plot drags on and on.

You can do whatever you want, it's too clumsy. Obviously the purpose of simulation is to obtain resources in real life, but now it's mainly anti-customer. The number of words is ok, but don't go off topic.

There is nothing exciting about the whole article. There are too many simulations and too little reality, and the simulation has too little feedback on reality. It is hard to believe that the content of your introduction will appear in the main text. There are three lives in the introduction. Take the first life as an example. You are still a grandmaster to this day, but you wrote about crushing the void. Even if you have written 56 chapters and reached 100 chapters, what kind of cultivation level do you have in reality? Perfect foundation building or? And the time is not equal. One day in reality simulates 10 years. You have only passed a few days now. There are 2 months and 60 days until the monthly exam. Minus the cooling simulation for 300 years. If it were reality, would you still be a foundation builder? I don't know what to say, but I still got the golden elixir in 2 months. The sense of separation between reality and simulation is too strong. Let's talk about the character issue. Now all the characters are of no help to the protagonist (including the brothers). What's the use of giving 3,000 spirit stones to the woman? You keep describing the body, trying to make you feel embarrassed, what kind of cultivation, and it's not Yuanying. It has no effect at all except disgusting people and feeling aggrieved. With a useless start + simulated flow + nothing exciting + slow cultivation, it's hard for me to evaluate whether you can finish this novel.

It feels like every chapter is just trying to make up for the word count. It could be written in a few sentences, but it just ends up being a bunch of nonsense. If it were more concise, it would definitely be a novel with a very good setting.