In the Name of Mankind

Reality does not need logic but novels do. When I saw Killing Giants, it felt too intellectual. It should be the consensus of most Chinese people that the son of a rich man cannot sit down in court, right? To be exaggerated, even if there are no high-value resources in the other world, let alone giants before the soldiers are dead, allowing a free-moving wild boar to be less than a thousand meters away from the protagonist is disrespectful to the entire Chinese nation's return to the top of the world. How many guns do you mean everyone carries? When Emperor Pu went hunting for bears, the formations were bigger than this, right?

I originally thought it was an interesting theme after reading the title of the book and the content of the first few chapters. However, the plot became more and more complicated later on. The protagonist also fell in love everywhere like a succubus, and the country became stronger and weaker like child's play. I don't know what the author wants to write. Later on, the protagonist takes two girls from another world and travels to another different world. I really gave up the book when I saw this paragraph. It is almost two themes before and after, and there are also those cliché plots of rolling eyes and mocking and then slapping in the face. It is really intellectually depressing. The main reason is that the writing is not up to par, so the plot development has been very childish. After reading a few chapters, you can guess the plot of the next ten chapters. Trying to write a logical and rigorous plot turns out to be full of loopholes after just a little mental reading, especially the description of countries. The actions of many countries simply cannot withstand scrutiny, as if they are just tools to promote the plot. The various orders and decisions are ordinary and do not reflect the advanced wisdom of a huge national machine and civilized society, and do not give people a fresh feeling. In short, the author cannot control this style of subject matter and lacks imagination. Just like writing whatever comes to mind, many descriptions of other worlds and countries are unsatisfactory and too naive.

After the second different world, it looks the same as history. The subject matter in the front is quite interesting, but the back is just a mess. The further you look at it, the worse it becomes. It would be better to write it as it was before. There is a clear sense of separation between the first one hundred chapters and the content at the back. I really don't understand why it is written like this.

You don't even know what your book is called, do you?

There is a way of writing for submission, and there is a way of writing for personal development. Since you choose to hand it in, don't hide this or that. The hand-in article should weaken the protagonist's sense of existence and write it as a group portrait. The protagonist is just a tool. Write it as a group portrait. Literature is the essence of this kind of novel. I have read many submissions and articles in support of the Communist Party, but almost none of them are well written. They all make the same mistake, excessively strengthening the existence of the protagonist, and even forcibly adding drama to the protagonist. They rely entirely on the protagonist to drive the plot. If the protagonist is not available, the meal will not be served.

What does Chapter 57 and 58 mean? Is it necessary to write this kind of plot? I can barely bear the poison in front of me, but this poison is too strong. I can't live without a woman or what?

Many people have written like this, but they have all been sent.

You are so generous, just bring the alien creatures back home. Fruits imported into the country have to go through border quarantine. You can just bring the alien creatures back home, Niubi.

I really like the subject matter and the writing style is okay. I have a few suggestions. First, I think people who read this kind of article are generally interested in the country's development of other worlds. If a map requires the protagonist to visit the front line in person, it will appear that the country is too incompetent. Let the protagonist, a person with no professional ability, take control of the front line command, which is also disrespectful to the lives of frontline soldiers. I personally feel that this kind of personal heroism can be written less. I feel there is no need to write too much about those kings and nobles from other worlds. When Ban Chao was in Khotan, a wizard slandered the Han envoy to King Khotan, so Ban Chao killed the wizard in front of King Khotan. Afterwards, the King of Khotan had to apologize to the Han envoy. No one cares what King Khotan thinks, everyone only cares about how awesome Ban Chao is. This king or that king is a clown in front of the modern country, and it is too thin to describe the country through the thoughts and behaviors of a few top nobles. It is better to write more about the original appearance of each class in these kingdoms, the impact they received, and the wonderful interactions between classes. These should be quite interesting Of course, this book has just been written a little bit, and the author may have his own ideas later. What I said is just my humble opinion, and I hope it can be of help.

I finally understand how poor people can't write stories about the lives of rich people. The protagonist is such an important person, but the security and resources used are not as strong as that of a county leader. It's really funny. This is as funny as eating pig's feet rice every day after Jack Ma became rich

No, every race has to have a harem? Is it because I can't continue writing without women or something?

I can only say that the eunuch rate is 100%. Please support the author of Generating Power for Love with free chapters. Don't even read a chapter if it is published. If you can insist on writing 2 million, there may be wealthy people who come to support you. After all, being able to persist in writing 2 million in a different world is a legend. If the author writes with the attitude of just losing money, it can only serve as a lesson for the past.

No, dude, every clan must have a beautiful female "offer" to the protagonist, right?

There are only two possibilities for writing a novel in which an entire country is able to explore another world because of the protagonist 1. A novel that reduces intelligence and brainlessness. The typical plot is that the protagonist can only go to the other world and let the protagonist take risks. 2. The typical representative of eunuchs is Eunuch Xiaoyu, whose book All Mankind cannot be poked at.

The author's ability really cannot control this novel. It's a bit like elementary school level. It's a bit uncontrollable to write a college paper. Not sarcastic.

If the author wants to write this kind of article, he must first have a basic understanding of our country's military weapons and combat systems, and the author's thinking is still stuck on the steel torrent of World War II. When going to fight in another world, the first thing to do is to understand the protagonist's position and purpose. It is unrealistic for the protagonist to treat him as a guest as soon as he comes up. Moreover, even if troops are to be sent, they should be conducted in small teams. The author's depth of twenty kilometers is completely insufficient. System operations must at least ensure absolute safety within a radius of fifty kilometers.

From chapter 169 to the current chapter 271, I suggest you not read it. It has strayed away from the topic. If the names of the protagonist and supporting characters had not changed, I would have thought that the author had hired a gunman to write it. After chapter 169, the three protagonists went to another world to explore. The previous national army did not follow them. Until now, chapter 271 has never appeared again.

You can't live without a woman, right?😁

From the beginning to the end, it's a good thing that I didn't live in another world completely in the early stage. It feels like a state machine. When I live in another world, the author's sexual and lazy attributes completely explode. Come on, a woman in her twenties takes a 13-year-old red-haired alien girl to watch the protagonist sleeping naked The protagonist watches the halfling princess take a bath from a distance Yes, it started to change from 5758 and became a day light.

The upper limit of the protagonist's IQ = the upper limit of the author's IQ

Douyin makes videos. The videos are pretty good. Why do you write like a piece of shit? Although I guessed that Douyin might be better, but the actual book would be close, but I didn't expect that the Douyin blogger actually made up the details and tricked me into it 😰

What have you been writing about lately? At the beginning, the protagonist was the only one who opened the door, but he was actually allowed to go to the front line? Are the interests of an entire different world more important than the protagonist's personal thoughts? If it were you, would you let such an important core figure take risks on the front lines? In the later stage, I probably wanted to change my mind and create a spontaneous time-traveling door. I wanted to use this to untie the protagonist and let him run around! All I can say is what a naive idea! Unless the country masters the technology of opening the door independently, as the only person who can open the door, there is no way he can be free! Not even if someone spontaneously appears! What if the door disappears on its own and something happens to the protagonist when he runs around? Who can bear the responsibility?

Does the author have any misunderstandings about people on earth? If this alien world is exposed to people on earth, no matter whether you are human or alien, you will not end well. It is purely a dream to want people on earth to be kind to people from other worlds.

Cutting out the emotional scenes would at least increase the readership by half.

I'm really impressed. It's a soldier taking things at will, and giving an egg of unknown variety to others at will. This is a different world, and everything has not been explored, so they dare to do this. Not to mention that they are all well-trained soldiers and experts, even a group of young people who have just graduated will not do this even if they come to explore a different world. Is this because you are afraid that you will not die quickly enough?

To be honest, this work is quite in line with my taste, but I really don't like it very much from the last 400 chapters, especially the finale, which is very obvious about eunuchs. It would be better to write a happy ending where the male protagonist collects all the women and holds a huge wedding ending. And the author imagined the human beings in this world so well throughout the book that in the end he didn't dare to continue writing and just ended it. But I am quite relieved. After all, there is indeed too much plot behind it, especially the emotional line written by the author is just a mess. The protagonist always dares to be ambiguous, and then has obscene thoughts in his heart. Even the hand holding is forced by the woman, and the kiss is not "chicken" talk. There is no further progress in the finale, and I dare not write it all. For this reason, I hope this book will be a hit and never come out. Although I have ordered all of them myself, I can responsibly say something to the following readers: Don't follow the protagonist after he jumps to another magical world, because the basic route has not changed, and the protagonist is still a pseudo-male, very wretched, and can only engage in obscenity. The protagonist only kisses three times in the whole book, and it was another woman who took the initiative. The protagonist does not dare to move at all times. It is purely obscene and disgusting.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is too poor. You can read the "Handbook of Conquest of Other Worlds" to learn more.

Let's put it this way, if you won 10 million in the lottery, would you stay up late holding it in your hand and looking at it, or would you put it on the table in the living room and go to the bedroom to sleep?

Too poisonous to bear 🙂 Slip away

I also read very few novels on this subject. This novel was okay at first, but the reason why it is not popular is that it is the kind of casual writing that can make anyone fall in love with anyone, and then write wherever it comes to mind. It makes me sick. If I hadn't read so few novels like this, I really wouldn't be able to stand it. Logical skills are also extremely poor. Some content is spent money to read, and suddenly there are some places that are a bit disturbing.