Farmhouse Letong Passed Through Ancient Times and Received Liu Guanzhang at the Beginning

Personally, it feels like a chat group, and the details of opening a store don't seem to be written down, such as dining at the same table, etiquette reception, and some titles. The protagonist seems to be like a system elf who is trying to kill someone

I have read almost 200 chapters so far, and I feel that the author's imagination and article control are still a bit poor (including a little writing) Of course it is good-looking, but the protagonist's role is just a tool. Up to now, the protagonist's modern life has only been described a little bit about taking Queen Ma to the hospital. The previous modern NPC has only appeared twice, and then it is the life of people from various dynasties. The description of the protagonist's life is too little to make it enjoyable. Uncle Qin also had a role and ended up giving away a very valuable ginseng. I was so petty that I felt a little bit at a loss. The protagonist seems to be a bit careless when it comes to giving things away, as if he just gives them as much as he can. The control of the article is just a bit indifferent. Of course it is good to write about everyone in various dynasties getting along well, but your protagonist should be part of it... The writing style is quite flat, suitable for writing daily articles, but it is a bit too flat. When Prince Mingtao talks to Lu, Lu Mou actually sweatdrops... No, buddy, everyone can see that there is a problem, the description is sometimes quite inappropriate. Overall, it looks good. I can't say much about the details, I can only say it's okay. The questions and suggestions I raised are not necessarily correct. If the author thinks they make sense, just listen to them. If they don't make sense, just pretend that I am sleepy and dizzy while typing 🙂

The male protagonist is just a bitch, focusing on the interaction between different dynasties.

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When an ancient person saw the protagonist with short hair and strange clothes, he was so calm If we don't say anything else, Huo Qubing, Guan Yu and Xin Qiji would definitely beat the protagonist first and ask him if he was a barbarian? If you meet Yang Zaixing, you will be killed directly. If you meet Li Qingzhao, Li Qingzhao will pull out the hairpin and stab the protagonist. If you meet Qin Shihuang, who is two meters tall, he will be scared to death by Qin Shihuang's momentum. Qin Wuyang, who dares to kill people in the street, will be scared to death, let alone the protagonist. When he meets Li Bai, Li Bai will look down on the protagonist, and then write Shi ridiculed and pushed the door open, because in Li Bai's eyes, Hu people are just like Hu Ji in a wine shop. Don't expect Li Bai to talk to you. When he meets Su Shi, the strong Su Shi will show the protagonist what sumo wrestling is, then capture the protagonist and ask him whether he is a Xixia or a Khitan, and why he came to the Song Dynasty...

During the Three Kingdoms period, there were three miraculous doctors. Only Hua Tuo was mentioned, but they looked down upon the medical sages Zhang Ji and Xinglin Dong Feng?

Self-pleasure? 😰Shouldn't the protagonist's location be just a transit platform? Liu Bei took Liu Che to his dynasty to beat chicken blood! Can you believe it? The protagonist lied in front of Lao Zhu, not wanting him to know the story of the late Ming Dynasty? Can lying change the original history? Take history as a guide... You really don't take this seriously😦😦

The two Song dynasties are rotten in the bones. Even if all the famous generals from 5,000 years go to the two Song dynasties, it will be useless.

There is a topic that so many historical texts from Qidian dare not touch on: the interests behind the assassination of the emperor. This is the fundamental issue of the replacement of Chinese dynasties. Would Zhu Yuanzhang, the founding emperor of the country, not know that there are endless descendants? Jiaozi of the Song Dynasty is an example. Why did Zhu Yuanzhang still give out treasure money? Even Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty knew that money was cheap and hurt the people, but would Zhu Yuanzhang not know? How did Zhu Di die? How did Zhu Di's grandson die? Why did Jiajing's governing philosophy make a 360-degree turn in the early and later periods? It's hard to write historical articles! ! Offend someone! ! !

Before it is put on the shelves, I urge the author to revise it quickly [Chapter 51: Changing the Emperor] Modern people must face up to history! ! !

The biggest problem with this kind of book is that in the middle and later stages, there is serious homogeneity, and the characters become stereotyped and lose their own personality.

If you think about it, the protagonist is just a tool man. If the protagonist had a brain at the beginning, he would have used modern knowledge to understand the ancient times. He would have been popular and popular in ancient times, and he would even lick others. He would have all the gold and silver treasures. Beautiful women have everything. I really don't know what the author's thinking is. "It is better to rely on yourself than to rely on others, control your own destiny" 🙂 Personal opinion

There's no need to lick it, brother, it's just a book, the worst thing is not to do his business.

I saw chapter fifty-five, and I don't know how the rest of it will go, but there are so many chapters in the front, and one story has just begun, and then the next begins, over and over again. The most important thing is the protagonist? After writing so many chapters, the protagonist has no sense of existence. More than fifty chapters, and there is not even a complete story. Just write a few chapters to open a new world. Write a few chapters to open a new world. You don't even have a complete event. You have written them all piecemeal. What's the point? It was a bit tiring to watch. I would also like to ask the author, what is the position of the protagonist of this book, is he just a transit station? Or are you planning to arrange some cheats for the protagonist later?

How about the author explain why the eldest son of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty directly addressed two strangers as uncle. Was it like this in ancient times? Please explain, otherwise it will be too dramatic. At this point I'm very confused

How much money did Zhu Biao give you to help him change history?

🍅Are you the author over there? 🤔

This kind of novel is quite easy to write, after all, just copy and paste. But those who write well are few and far between. You can still read this novel. The protagonist is the tool man. Don't have too many ideas as a tool person, just describe more historical figures.

Why did Liu Bei confirm his identity when he first met Huo Qubing and the others, but did not tell Huo Qubing the history? Why did the protagonist still need to tell them that the Eastern Han Dynasty did not know the history of the Western Han Dynasty?

Modern acres of land are based on the extensive use of chemical fertilizers. If you use farmyard manure instead of chemical fertilizers, the yield will definitely plummet. The history of using farmyard manure in China probably started after the Song Dynasty. Previously, they used rotational farming systems and slash-and-burn cultivation that were less effective than using farmyard manure. There is still a question mark as to whether we can achieve such a high yield per mu.

Why does Zhu Yuanzhang in current novels always look like Li Yunlong?

Put a color TV on the hall wall. Play the historical drama 🤫 If the ancients come here, you will be shocked. You can confirm whether they came from history.

This kind of subject can actually appear in the starting point, I am surprised 🤐

I recently played Yan Yun's Hutuo River plot, and it gave me an emo treatment. I urgently need the author to give Miaoshou Huanchun some help! ! ! !

I hope you can give me a lot of advice and thank you for your trouble

I really want to complain about the time period of the Tang Dynasty. There is not enough written about changing history. The rest is really good.

There are too many characters, spread out too much

It's over, start a new book soon, otherwise all the old readers will be gone.

I wish the author a great sale in his masterpiece! When I recommended the book "Emperor Xian of Han Awakens and Conspirates with Cao Cao to Conquer the World", I thought it was already a masterpiece, but reality slapped me a few times and didn't wake me up. If you're free, come over and give me a few slaps. This book is logically self-consistent, not a brainless text, and has clear character boundaries. There are no plots and boring infighting. Liu Xie spread history in front of Cao Cao in the name of "Apocalyptic Dream", with mountains and rivers as a plate, coke smelting iron, from suspicion to temptation to heart-to-heart talks, first to rule the troubled times, and then to build a strong land. Thank you, author, for bothering me!

Isn't Soochow worthy of someone coming?