My Digital Black Queen

😅 Not to mention the main character Halo with seven children, the main character is reborn, and he is no longer a child. Why cry when you see Black Fangmon being injured? Even if you are worried, you won't cry. These two points make me feel awkward.

In Chapter 26, the protagonist said that he didn't evolve, and he didn't have any ideas in his mind. He respected the plot and let others evolve. He had his own virus species and fought for the data to evolve. Didn't you mention it in your article that if you rely on courage to hope for something to evolve, you might not be expecting a miracle to happen.

The protagonist feels like he's playing an online game and doesn't have a strong sense of participation. I feel like the protagonist treats other children as NPCs, and the other Digimon are just experience monsters.

Is this pig's foot sick? I want to go back all day long. Where can I get the monsters and upgrades when I go back? Go back and be a salted fish? Then when you need the strength but don't have it, where is it? The biggest problem is that the way to go back is to explode and twist? The original work is back, but is this stable? Don't think about it, Wukongmon also went in and ended up being dumped where? If you go in, you will die immediately, or maybe it will be worse if you go to an unknown place, right?

There's nothing wrong with it so far, except that the protagonist's Digimon is a bit awkward.

The setting is good, the author's writing is also good, it's a good book. Disadvantages The protagonist is a failure. What a huge failure! ! ! ! 1. On the one hand, the protagonist follows the selected child, but on the other hand, he seems to have done nothing. He is obviously more powerful than the selected child, but he wants to escape all day long? 2. The protagonist's character is completely unlike an adult... Leaving all responsibilities to 7 children? The name is beautiful, do they have a plug-in? Seriously speaking, it is not impossible to watch a selfish protagonist, but the setting of this protagonist is too contradictory and the experience is very poor. 3. The digital world is different from the chosen children. The protagonist chooses to go there entirely of his own free will. The result is fear, avoidance, and leaving, and those people are still talking nonsense about what they value in the real world. There are people in the real world who love themselves. Let me go, you can be said to be seizing the body, how can you have such weird thoughts? Also, the purpose of going there was to make my Digimon stronger, but now is it the mature stage? You have the opportunity to become stronger, but you choose to go back to comfort and gamble your future on your eight children?

To put it bluntly, it is the same whether there is a protagonist or not. The protagonist hopes to maintain the plot, but also wants to not absorb data and evolve like a chosen child. It is a beautiful idea. So why does the protagonist design a virus species? What is written in the book is too contradictory, incoherent, and misleading.

I always feel that the protagonist is so weak. The Digimon I designed cannot even defeat Demonmon. . . . There is also the ape beast behind him that I can't beat. . . . Why. And I always think about what can't change the plot. Let's not talk about how much you can change if you are so weak now. And even if you change, do you think Chang Hengxing will not come back to perfection in the end? It's really uncomfortable to watch on tiptoe.

Let's talk about the biggest poisonous point, which is the author's arrangement of the plot. Since he is worried about affecting the plot and has arranged a virus species as a partner, wouldn't it be most appropriate to go alone? Do you have to follow the plot while putting a group of children who have always been friendly to you in danger to force you to comply with the original plot? Picking up leaks while following? A time-traveler who has almost 30 in his two lifetimes is chasing after a group of children under 10 years old. Anyway, I feel ashamed. The reason why animations such as Digimon and Pokémon are so attractive to us as children is that, at least for me, they fit the loneliness of growing up in childhood. Who doesn't want to meet a companion who will never betray and always be by his side when he is at his purest? But I really can't read your book

To be honest, this book is the one that I think is the most normal one to be raised to death. Opening the anti-theft chapter is too disgusting. If you don't keep books, you will be disgusted by him. If you are disgusted, naturally you don't want to catch up on the update immediately.

Fully booked But I don't think it's necessary. It's understandable that you said you're anti-theft. But it's too much to issue a anti-theft card for two days and it's not updated often. At the very least, you have to show your attitude and don't say anything. If you want to do it, end it as soon as possible. Otherwise, it will make people uncomfortable when you open the business. Isn't it just to have fun in time after spending money? If you have something to say, please stop updating and notify me. Otherwise, there is no need to read it.

It's over. You have called the author a eunuch. The only digital book I have been chasing is gone.

Why not design Lucemon or Arkadimon if you can choose?

I recently changed the outline and collected some data. I found that not many people have watched Digimon except for the first and subsequent ones. Do you think it is better to continue traveling to the later Digimon or go to other worlds? Or create a strange world with Digimon as the background. I would like to ask for your opinions, thank you very much.

How long does it take to prevent theft? Please tell me clearly. If you haven't finished writing yet, just say so. It takes most of the day to prevent theft. Is this disgusting for readers? ?

This aunt tried too hard to persuade people to quit. She was poisoned to death and abandoned the trap.

Can you explain theft prevention at the beginning?

Some people fall apart as they walk, and some books disappear after being maintained...

There is a big problem with the character setting. You are a time traveler and you don't see any adult mentality. Good guy, you set a virus species that kills, devours and evolves. You hope for the evolution of courage and so on. You are afraid that you don't want to eat shit.

Who still remembers what this book is about🤤

In order to finish reading your novel and understand it, I even read the fifth part. It took me two nights and my eyes hurt.

Missing persons return🙂

Protagonist = a loser who knows the plot

I read the beginning and it was very well written. Come on!

It's hard to see a Digimon fanfic, I hope the author will stick to it 🤓🤓

It's finally a Digimon novel, I really hope the author can write it better.

The way the characters communicate is described is difficult to describe.

Damn, is this the end of the book? Too fast

Author, since I read this work of yours in 2023, it has been a day and night viewing. I didn't expect you to stop updating! Twenty-four years, a whole year! End? I can't swallow this breath! So I will also open a book about Digimon in 2024. The name is the Digital God of Versatile Mage.

Come on, write, ah, ah, ah, ah! ! ! 😃, the content is pretty good.