Fighting Against the Steel Torrent of Another World

I really don't understand what the use of this protagonist is? Is it just a reflection of the author's self? There are many characters' perspectives that can be written here. I feel that this protagonist has a strong sense of overall destruction. Who would want to read this kind of book to see how you are doing as an individual? It's redundant.

Just think of a way to write down the protagonist in one chapter, then let the country control the plug-in, and then write a group portrait directly with the country as the theme. This way I feel that the book can be saved.

Even in a low-demon world. If the magic plague is any higher, humans will not be able to bear it. Technology is not private. Others can still learn. Magic is not necessarily the case. Humans may not have received private organs.

I saw the label "Cultivation", so I have to see what it was like at that time before I can decide whether to read it or not. Because cultivation is an extension of Chinese culture, it can easily turn into an extreme nationalist style of writing that depicts the highest prehistoric times and the invincibility of cultivation, making the work unbalanced.

It is written that elves have been used as wombs by the human kingdom for hundreds of years. Is this something humans can come up with? I have never seen this in a book. Can the author learn to draw? Waiting for your elf book 😏

1⃣️The government in the author's writing is slightly more efficient in collecting information. Considering the real news, it is not impossible. The problem is that those who develop alien soldiers, to be honest, understand that the author hopes to write more people-friendly. The problem is that it is too people-friendly and does not look like an elite selected from thousands. There are recruits who have been in the army for less than three years. They can almost fall asleep while guarding at night. There is no night combat plan, or in other words, it is not shown during combat. It's like playing, and there are words like "I'll come, I'll come". What does it mean to be elite? The grassroots consider how to save bullets in positional warfare, extend combat time, and kill the enemy efficiently. Even if they chat, they should pay attention to the enemy's dynamics😦. The top management arranges troops, decides when to invest which weapons and plans, estimates of the enemy, etc., Etc., Are not reflected 2⃣️The sun is very strange, so astronomers don't need to observe it? Is there a kingdom of God in the sky? Aren't the creatures so strange that biologists can't check them and give feedback? Didn't anyone think of the giant crow in the icy world of the magic world, the magic pet Druid? What's more, there have been military dogs controlled by magic. Didn't you think of the possibility of crows being controlled? Where is the talent? It feels like a beggar's edition😦 3⃣️The description of the environment is average, without the feeling of red steel entering another world. For example, in the virgin forest of ice and snow, a steel fortress appears, what does the fortress look like, the internal structure, etc., The work arrangements of scientific researchers, the army, and security personnel, etc. A very good subject matter, with many angles to play.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. It's really your fault for allowing a country to engage in aggression.

{"NickName":"Thirty-Four Years Cicada","UserId":323748508} Let's change the latest chapter. The only difference between Lei and Liu is that they were tricked by India when they went out without running. Besides, stealing WIFI6 to Qualcomm is a traitorous act. When buying reserve products, remember to read the small print clearly, otherwise it is easy to be tricked. In the end, everyone thought that not many people were honest now.

I have been following the book since I first opened it, and I feel that the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The rabbit is written in such a retarded manner, and the main character either cooperates or fully cooperates, or plays by himself. The layout is too small, and it is both obvious and established. If it continues like this, I will abandon the book.

Speaking of 100 million numbers, how many free combinations are there? Do the gods know?

It would be better to make the setting as if the rabbit suddenly discovered the portal, remove the protagonist and write a group portrait, it would be too fragmented.

It's exactly the same as a Japanese pornographic cartoon

Doesn't the author know that nuclear bombs are the most cost-effective weapons in modern technology? If you don't believe it, you can check the international trade data of enriched uranium, and then calculate the overpressure killing range of TNT. Nuclear strikes should be used as much as possible to clear up wasteland, and low-cost conventional weapons should only be used to clear leaks.

The writing of the group portrait is quite good, the writing is good, and the plot is not a big problem, but I just want to ask the author, in Chapter 20, what kind of steel shoulder can withstand the recoil of a 12.7Mm heavy machine gun? Shouldn't it be mounted on a tripod and fixed for shooting?

Although I like Warhammer, I hope that Warhammer will not be divided into hammers and just have some settings.

Why are you so angry when you see mountains of corpses and seas of blood made by foreigners? Is this a disease?

One of the happiest things about China if there really is a different world is that it can conduct nuclear tests like crazy 🤭 After all, no one cares about nuclear tests in a different world, and the data on nuclear weapons can be carefully tested and updated.

Different world concept map

He wants to be both a leader and a bitch The lack of sales is definitely related to him

With this speed of technological development, there is really no need to care about foreign attitudes. I am better than you and I am the rule. Some countries cannot understand human language, but they understand what "death" means.

I hope that another world will not become the world view of some games or novels, otherwise it will be very boring

I don't know what the author thinks. Either make it a complete group portrait, or write the protagonist to dominate everything. Don't write the two sides so separately. If you want to create a "fog", then slowly advance the plot and don't let the protagonist "spoiler". If you want the protagonist to participate, then show the God's perspective. Don't be like the Riddler. The God's perspective is 100, the perspective of us following the protagonist is 10, and the perspective of the group portraits is 5. I don't even know what the meaning is. , Warhammer is Warhammer, the combat power level of that thing is extremely high, if you want to write, hurry up and enter the main story, how many words have been written, and there are still "Xiaomi and rifle", while using the high level of Warhammer to dangle readers, while preventing the pioneer team from improving their combat power (improved, better than nothing, for Warhammer 1000, it is about 10 to 15), I don't understand, I really don't understand, the author's level is obviously there, but writing like this, maybe it is a broken can?

What nonsense. You are purely cheating on starting coins. You have old ideas. It is not because you have moved the system intact, but because your ideas are still stuck in the past. This is also the case in the new world. Then you did not go to the new world in vain. Nothing new at all.

I came after this book because of Warhammer. What the hell is written now? Who wants to see the rubbish of the Qing Dynasty? They died early in the Qing Dynasty.

I have read 50 chapters so far, and it is really well written. The only thing is that the protagonist and other characters are very interesting. The protagonist looks like a poor loser, and he has to find a way to get the nuclear code for no reason. It is too fragmented. It's obvious that the other one has better writing skills, but I have to write like this. Is it too much money? The main reason for this problem is that the protagonist is not good at writing, otherwise the author would easily be level 5. . . .

The author often takes leave for various reasons 😐, which feels like a vicious cycle. If your grades are not good, you can take as many days off as you want. Then if your grades are even worse and you continue to take days off, it will be hard to break down.

What about today's update🤔

In terms of the group portrait plot, subject matter, and world view alone, they are all pretty good and remarkable. The only thing is that the author made it a little confusing and out of focus. The protagonist plot and the group plot conflict. The Xuanmen plot in the early stage was deleted and changed to focus on science. Later, the niubility and hanging properties of the space-time essence were described in a large space, which was also quite conflicting.

What is the role of the protagonist?

Come on and update!