The Way of Mortal Talismans

It's not interesting. The protagonist doesn't have the strength to run around. He goes out of the city to participate in the auction in the early stage of foundation building (such a big Tianxing City lacks your foundation building elixirs, foundation building magic weapons, and foundation building techniques). He encounters robbers, one in the early stage and the other in the later stage. As a talisman master, fighting is just like everyone else. Shouldn't the protagonist, who is inexperienced, use talisman seals to hit people? It's a saturation attack. Then in the middle stage of foundation building, I teamed up with others to explore. It was not like I had no resources. I encountered danger later on, and my body was taken away by Nascent Soul. Of course, I failed to seize the body. I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw this. The protagonist joins the Miaoyin Sect. It's not like he doesn't know that the Miaoyin Sect is in trouble now. Why not just join the Star Palace directly, with a clean fortune and the character of a Talisman Maker? Gou in the original work, you didn't show it at all. Han Li always stayed in one place to improve his realm, and went out when he ran out of resources. The protagonist really used the mortal stream as a fantasy stream.

Recently, I have been watching a lot of Big Brothers Big Sisters today and said that there are too many typos and there are problems with the plot and so on. I do have a big problem. I also admit that I thought that writing this novel was impulsive and I didn't even save the manuscript. I never thought that the first novel I wrote would make money, so maybe I wasn't serious enough, and my writing style wasn't good enough to meet my brothers' expectations. After all, I am a factory worker myself and don't have much time. I can't concentrate on improving the details. This is all my own problem. Moreover, typing on a mobile phone is still very uncomfortable, and the Writer Assistant does not have many functions. Although when I was writing, I told myself, no matter what brothers say about my writing, don't pay attention to it. I know how much I weigh. But after reading the comments, I still feel disappointed. But no matter what, this novel will still be finished, and it will reach one million words. I am also very grateful to the brothers and sisters who have silently supported me. Remember to mark any typos. This was corrected quite quickly, haha.

This is the mortal world, and I can't stand your hot-blooded label. Liu Jing is quite hot-blooded.

Don't write about Mo Fu and Chen Qiaoqian, they are too disgusting

It's best to find two or three women for the male protagonist to solve his physical problems. After all, normal men are not eunuchs.

Shouldn't the main point of a fandom be to have fun? The more I watch, the more frustrated the male protagonist becomes. His life is much more useless than that of Han Paopao. Even if the plot is extravagant, can you surpass the original? I really don't know what the point is.

You can tell what level the author is by reading the introduction.

It's quite difficult to travel through the realm behind the Korean Model Worker, and Golden Finger doesn't look very powerful. I hope I can write about it.

When you get the most important opportunity, you can just risk your life if others say it casually. If you don't need the opportunity, you have to die. Others will impose a slave ban on you. This is the result of risking your life. If you become a slave to others, don't say anything to explain it to you. Who can believe it? If you just release the Nascent Soul and merge into one, you won't let others be slaves

The characters are heavily stereotyped and there is nothing interesting to watch after reading it quickly 😒😒 There is no motivation to attract people to continue reading.

It's pretty good. I ordered it automatically.

Is it the Tongtian Ru, or is it the explosion of millions of spiritual talismans 😰

Did I remember it wrong? Zi Ling's birth name is Wang Ning, her father is Wang Heng, and her mother is Zhou Yuan. Why did the author write it as Wang Yuan?

Why don't you go to Biling Island to dig for spiritual stones😰

The coding is still a bit slow, and I mainly use my mobile phone. When my salary is paid at the end of the month, I will change to a tablet.

The male protagonist of the author is a bit weak. He is not very good in martial arts, magical powers, and weapons. Why not build a good relationship with Han Li and buy things from Han Li, such as elixirs, elixirs, and even swords made from thunder bamboo. After all, Han Li is very defensive, but as long as you don't frame him murderously, you can still be friends.

After being reminded by a book friend, Li Tu Jiao was changed to "Gen Tu Jiao" Li Yuan Qi was changed to "Huang Xuan E Qi"

There are over a hundred chapters and they haven't been released yet 😰

Are you generating electricity for love? Cut it when it's time to do it