Warhammer: From 30K to a Crusade Across the Multiverse

I think the writing is very good It is obvious that the main character will be the main character when he travels through the multiverse later At present, it mainly describes the Astartes and the Primarchs and others without any concern about the body There is no need to brag about the so-called golden age.

The author just wrote the basic cloud hammers to speed up the progress according to the original idea. If he speeds up the progress of such an important and grand plot as the Terra War, there is still nothing left to write.

If the author means to write a group drama, as far as my personal preference for group dramas is concerned, I don't want the protagonist to have strong combat power or good luck. I just hope that the protagonist can have a role in every incident, play a role of the protagonist's own personality, and make actions that the protagonist has personality. Even if it is not decisive, even if it is tragic or wrong, he must exist so that I can have a sense of involvement.

It's so funny that I originally came here to watch Expedition to the Multiverse, but when I read the Warhammer chapter, I wrote about 600 and nearly 700 chapters, so I immediately closed the book and blacklisted it to make it clear that I was using pork as mutton.

I really don't understand it. The other parts are obviously well written, which shows that the author clearly knows what the readers want to see, but when it comes to the plot of the National Church, he always describes it in the most disgusting direction, never omitting any details, and insists on inserting the feces tube into the reader's esophagus with his own hands, filling each reader's body with feces until the fecal juice fills the stomach and returns to the mouth. It is blocked by the lips and gums sewn on the feces tube, and then overflows from the nasal cavity, allowing readers to deeply and thoroughly experience the taste of feces. You know, most people are tired of being stupid, not to mention stupidity that deviates from the character in order to advance the plot, which will make people either question the author's writing attitude or the author's writing level.

The author used 600 chapters to educate me about Warhammer's Horus Heresy. I was already bored, and I felt like I was being teased by Tzeentch. I didn't see anyone fighting in the multiverse, and he didn't even fight in the Warhammer universe. The protagonist described by the author is just a witness to the experience of the Warhammer universe. This is more like a popular science article about Warhammer. In this case, why should I waste it? There are videos for free on one site.

The protagonist's personal abilities and way of thinking are not worthy of his status. As a continuation of human civilization, he should have the judgment and decisiveness like Luo Ji. He should understand what should be given up and what should not be given up. But in actual performance, in the negotiations with Guilliman, it was completely at a disadvantage, and the direction of the negotiations was led by Base Liman. He easily gave up his original plan to leave the world of Ultramar 500, and was deceived by the original body, so he reached cooperation with the original body. This means that he can be persuaded by anyone to abandon his original plan. This means that as an executor who retains human fire, he is a very unqualified existence. He is a very weak person. And the execution of plans for the preservation of human activity cannot be carried out by a weak man. Even if weakness is relative, for the continuation of civilization, relative weakness is absolutely not allowed to exist. Regardless of whether the other writings are good or not, there is a serious mismatch between him and his identity.

It's almost 3 million words, and the plot has really become more and more toxic recently. It was just a cesspool before, but now it's running straight towards the septic tank. There is no more writing on the God of All Machines, no writing on the heavens, and no writing on the original body. I finally finished writing the birthday celebration plot. I thought that the introduction of the Zhutian plot was to save the Warhammer World, but what happened? Just demolish the latrine and turn it into a septic tank. How about swimming in a cesspit? It's true that the protagonist has developed technology for so long and developed such a good impression of a bunch of Primarchs, and then what? What is the protagonist doing? The protagonist hangs up in a manure pit! ! ! 🙂

Recently, I saw the Star God Dantioch violently beating wild beasts, and I suddenly felt like giving up the book for no apparent reason. The setting of Dantioch becoming a Star God is very boring. The most valuable thing for a person is courage, not the power gained in this way. After reading along the way, I feel that most of the better parts are similar to the original work, and there are also changes to several original bodies, but after the changes, the explanation is quite boring. And the most important point is that it has always been stuck in the throat. The protagonist's sense of existence is puzzlingly low. It does not mean that the protagonist has a great influence on the world background setting, but that the narrative center and spiritual embodiment of the story are almost not in the protagonist. Maybe the author If you think that making the protagonist the focus of the story means making the protagonist kill all kinds of enemies, the story will be broken quickly. However, the characteristic of Warhammer has never been an awesome setting, but the courage of human beings to still choose to face all kinds of difficult and difficult choices. But did the protagonist face any difficult choices? No, the protagonist even wants to escape the galaxy at first. All of the protagonist's actions have almost no cost or resistance that requires him to make a choice. What's outstanding is the characters in the original work, because they have choices in the original work. The part about traveling through the heavens was also disappointing. Wolverine became an Astartes and was almost insulated from his original life. The Transformers universe was also handled poorly. In Battle of the Gods, a fragment of the God suddenly came to solve all problems. After that, he was ready to return to the Warhammer world. But has the problem of the gods been solved? There are so many divided universes, just rely on these few universes as the basis, and don't explore the reality of the gods, just go back to this? You didn't contact Adam when you got back? Finally, I would like to say that this book is very weak in terms of scientific and technological imagination. The author may have only seen the Three-Body Problem and likes to collide with it. Providing special equipment to the empire is also very abstract. Thundercloud-class battleships, Tengu mechas, and Apocalypse tanks are just these three. Is this called the God of All Machines? Why not give White Scar and Blood Angel various Macross models? Why didn't the Mobile Suit Corps from the Gundam series participate in the Battle of Betagarmon?

What you wrote earlier was pretty good, and it was almost time to time travel. But damn, you wrote more than 600 chapters of Warhammer and you didn't even mention how good it was. The problem is that there's no point in writing it later. Why don't you write more than 60,000 chapters about time travel, buddy. If you haven't written yet, why are you reading? If other novels were written like this, they would have been abandoned long ago. What kind of good guy only wears it after more than 600 chapters?