Under One Person, the Whole Person Is a True Person

Lao Wu has completely ruined the plot and character design, and it can be said that it has given way to the ecological niche of fandom. If you seize the opportunity, you may actually get dividends.

Don't be black just for the sake of being black. There are enough bad guys in the original novel. Forcibly blackening others will be self-defeating.

The main character is a Taoist named Zhang Sanqing. He also eats beef. It's too abstract. Why not call him Li Hong if he's so awesome?

It is suggested that authors can write evil stories (such as Wang Lu), but don't be dark just for the sake of being dark.

Eunuch again? 😅

The Lu family is also rare among people, a family that only exists in fiction.

One person can be regarded as beautifying various religions (they have done many dirty things in history, and of course there are a few who resisted Japan). And the Trinity Sect, which has two creations in one person, does have a very high moral level, but it is too honest.

Lao Wangtou doesn't know about magnetic fields, he only knows how to use reversal to affect the surroundings.

Sankou Ma Jui, there are some plots in the book you wrote that I can't stand, so I won't rewrite it.

In the first chapter, wasn't it already a headless corpse? In the second chapter, it turned into a half body.

Come on, author, all the noble and upright people in Under One Person combined are not as good as Master Jue, they are completely rotten.