Starting from the Huangliang Dharma Ceremony

Do you know why you can't survive? Are you sending out the detailed outline, all kinds of explanations, all kinds of running accounts? Don't say it before entering the product, just treat it as the starting point. Are you going to finish two chapters of the virtual realm? Other people's copies are eager to write dozens of chapters, how about you? Geography is introduced, but what about the protagonist? Others use the protagonist's line of sight to open the curtain, but you just have the role of various buildings, but what is the connection with the protagonist? Did the protagonist buy something or sell something? Or missed it? Then there are eighteen chapters into the eighth grade. Author, how many chapters do you plan to write? Ninety or a hundred? In the study of a subject, you can just popularize the science like a running account and be done with it? How does the protagonist learn? Is there any detailed process? None! Come on, author, tell me how to continue reading?

Do you think you are teaching everyone how to cultivate immortality? 🤔🤔 There is no plot at all, it is all popular science knowledge, which is terrible. I have read the setting of popular science in other novels. Can I create my own plot? 😒😒 This book was copied from a Baidu search, right?😒😒

After reading the synopsis, I thought it was quite interesting, but the thing about the hanging seal at the end didn't feel very good. Isn't this just like being a hawk and dog subordinate to the five families? More people should like the protagonist to be independent and detached.

When will Huangliang space trading be launched? Want to see the content of space trading?

Really, I don't know if the author has read it. It's simply a popular science novel, or a novel that carefully popularizes science. Whether it's bugs, divination, cooking, wine making, or anything else, it just needs a lot of description and science popularization. The plot that needs a lot of space to be described is summarized in just a few sentences. It makes me want to scold you.

Writing a novel contains so much popular science knowledge? Please, if it's a fantasy fairy tale, don't go into these details. People are here to see the plot, not your introduction. Everything must be written in detail. Do you want to teach everyone how to cultivate immortality? This is off the mark. There is no need to write all the popular science knowledge. The only function is to reduce the number of words.

There are a lot of problems with this book for beginners. First, it is too everyday. Xiu Xian writes it with the same sense of relaxation as modern reading. Secondly, the author wants too much and is not organized. He will learn this today and learn that tomorrow. The protagonist writes in an ordinary way, but the result is first place every time. It is said to be a dream world, but as soon as he starts practicing, he succeeds in his false cultivation. Small worlds, animals and plants all appear. Theoretically, the virtual world should be developed first, the virtual world should be perfected and then transformed into reality bit by bit.

Too naive, those cultivators. Going back and forth all night, only doing online and offline work. How can I say it is written like an ordinary person encountering a supernatural event for the first time, but they are all geniuses of the same country, but they are so childish, I really can't stand it, at least be more mature. Don't you feel awkward when the author writes? The writing doesn't look like a fairy tale, and to be honest, what is the main line, Huangliang Space, trading? Why is it so bad that there is no national identity? To be honest, it's like this. It's a court, a trading space, and you have to cultivate immortality. I feel like you really can't control it. It's better to seize a yellow beam space and write a farming article. Even if the writing is not good enough, you can still read it. If you write about the court, your writing is almost meaningless to be honest. It's really hard to attract readers with your too-novice court stories, and it's easy for you to disappoint readers who like farming stories. Moreover, you don't have a good grasp of the story of cultivating immortals, and your writing doesn't have that feeling. It's very easy, so you might as well keep on farming. This point, space farming, plus trading space, is enough for you to write. Otherwise, like now, there is no sense of the main line. If you want it all, just let it all go.

I wrote a running account, and it felt like I was writing an outline. I couldn't imagine anything at all.

Everything else is good, but there is too much nonsense. I don't know if it is because I have collected too much information. I can't help copying and pasting, but it really affects the reading experience. We really don't want to know how to use the hoe 😅😅😅

The plot is too dull and there are too many settings. Not only are there a lot of realms, treasures, and official positions, but there are not many people who are patient, the protagonist is in a good situation and there is no sense of crisis. It might be better to give the protagonist an enemy in the early stage.

Unlike cultivating immortals, you have to make a bamboo stick and wash the bamboo with your hands. Are there no convenient techniques? Moreover, there is good news in the front, all kinds of popular science, and it is available in the back. Basically no one will want to read these.

There is too much popular science knowledge in the novel that is not closely related to the plot, and it seems that the word count is crammed.

One hundred and eight pieces of incense magic money are like wasted. It only costs so much for the eighth level. It is not enough to fill up the whole world with the first level.

It's not easy! ! A book like Chi Cheng, Xian Gourd, and a book with colorful magical weapons and techniques also needs to have a written plot.

I just started reading it, and I wonder if the fight between immortals and immortals in the later chapters is as censorious as a martial arts novel? When did the magic in the world of cultivating immortals become inferior to that of body refining? Those who cultivate immortality are just like martial arts writers. They can't cast spells without being close to one's face? It's the same as if punches and kicks can't cause damage to the body? I don't know when it started. It's clear that the world of immortality insists that the immortal magic is not as good as the body training. The fighting skills are as close as two reckless men. If you remove the modifiers, they are not as good as martial arts literature.

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. It's too formal and rigid. Even though I'm low in strength and all the rules apply, I'm still strict in front of my relatives. I wrote it well before it was put on the shelves. What you wrote is a novel, not a real-life diary. Don't use it. I'm right.

It's too bland, boring to watch, and not interesting to read.

I really want to look back, but it's too watery. It's really too watery. You can clearly explain the effects of spiritual plants in one or two sentences. You wrote at least more than 300 words. Also, I really don't want to know what the effects of walnuts are. It's too watery. Anyway, when I look at the back, I feel like I've been cheated. There are many people in the important comment area who say that the number of words is the author's advantage. It's really embarrassing (or helpless~)

If you want to modify it, just modify it according to the following quality. Come on, come on, come on!

Now there is basically no feeling of being too divine or demonic. The feeling of the spiritual world is relatively weak and needs to be strengthened. What abilities does the protagonist have now? You can't just write about farming in the world within the golden finger's natal magic weapon.