Longevity Begins with Eating Xia Shiqi

It describes that the protagonist is too mentally retarded, only seeks supernatural powers and magic, not the enlightened path, does not distinguish between good and evil, blindly accepts demons, does not know the enemy's situation, goes straight into the demon nest, damages the body, only relies on his will, and cannot make decisions before taking action. It can only be said to be a mediocre work.

I would like to make a small suggestion. I wonder if the realm of Shentian and Dongxuan can be changed to Shenxuan and Dongzhen and then Yuanshen. The realm of Shentian feels a bit awkward. Of course it's just a suggestion.

The background and the concept of the exercises are quite good, but the writing is not very good and not rigorous in all aspects.

I persisted until Chapter 36 and couldn't stand the cliche plot. The pig's trotters are extremely stupid. What's the result of talking about pig's trotters traveling through time and being reborn at the beginning? What kind of thing is this written? In Chapter 36, the money was stolen by a child. Later, it was discovered that the child had several younger ones. The money was given to that one, which made him even more poisonous. He said goodbye and never saw her again.

I thought it was okay after reading the introduction, but the main character in the book is clueless and likes to be a nanny.

The protagonist is like a fool, with no sense of vigilance at all. To say he is vigilant is just what he means. His personality is superficial and superficial.

You can still watch it at first, but you can't watch it after you get to the cave fragment. It's like a retard. Jiuli's place is a mess, and then the baby's place is obviously being plotted. Just go to the place where you don't want to do anything and just kill it. Who can the Holy Mother show? What's the use of raising that stupid bird in the future? The more you write, the more retarded you will be. You can look at the front and pull it down later.

The protagonist makes elixirs from Qi. This is the first one I've seen in a book. It's very classy. Unfortunately, after reading Chapter 104, I can't stand it anymore. Going to the cliff for three people to escape is no problem, but going to the city to help is a problem. They meet by chance. If there is a case against these two people, the protagonists are mixed together. As for the content, the author understands nonsense literature. Some words are simplified and read more smoothly. Now when I read it, I feel that the next sentence is explaining the previous sentence. It's totally unnecessary. It makes me very upset to read it.

This book,,,,, that one, I'll run away first

This book. It tastes like chewing wax. I can't stand it anymore. Nothing attractive at all

How do you continue to see this kind of person who has no strength and likes to show off everywhere? Disgusting stuff😰

What are you writing about? I am wandering around without leveling up. I still practice Qi in more than a hundred chapters By the way, I encountered foundation building and Yuan Shen. Just like an ant, no pleasure at all

While talking about training in the world of mortals, I also said that I need to find a place to improve my cultivation. If you want to improve your cultivation, why don't you find a place to practice properly, and run around and cause trouble? The protagonist encounters the foundation building stage every now and then, so it seems that foundation building is not a difficult level I ran more than 100 chapters, and my cultivation level has not increased at all. Is it funny? The protagonist can be killed by just doing foundation building. Then I suggest that the protagonist should go back to Baiyun Temple and slowly practice until foundation building before going to the world of mortals, right? Otherwise it wouldn't be called training the mind, it would be called giving food to people.

The book is okay, but the author is too lazy, there are too few updates, and you can't even get monthly welfare tickets. There are too few monthly tickets, so it is ranked at the bottom and cannot be promoted. Readers have no idea that such a book exists. It is a vicious cycle.

In fact, there is no need to create your own realm. Realm is just a code to distinguish your cultivation level. The most important thing is the storyline.

The plot is compressed, the plot is copied by a copywriter, the logic is confusing, and the characters are abrupt. However, the writing is reasonable and the writing power is acceptable.

After reading the introduction, I don't want to read about the training levels. Are each level divided into early, middle and late stages? Each period is divided into junior high school and high school. Each period is divided into 99 levels. I slowly level up and play, and I don't level up very much. I don't hang around. I just want to scare you and slap you in the face.

He was almost killed by the Liu family, but he still refused to leave and still worked for others? Are you cheap? The surname Sun is just a personal favor, is it worth it? Do you have any self-esteem? This plot treatment is really unbearable!