Poor Taoist King Jiao, Please Go and Die!

There is an unsolvable loophole in writing novels about cultivation in the late Qing Dynasty. If you write spells that are better than guns, then society will not develop guns! If you write spells and don't want to be good with guns, then what's the point of practicing them?

There are many typos, the text does not make sense, the layout is not good, and there are many psychological activities and introductions. The key point is that the pig's feet are very inconsistent, and it feels fragmented and tiring to read.

The writing is OK, I have read the information carefully I just don't know how long I will stick to it. It's a pity that your book on the state of Lu is broken You can write this book as a social survey. You can refer to the Cambridge history of China, modern industry, handicrafts, and agricultural history. Anyway, it is much better than reading some things on the Internet and outputting outrageous opinions. There are too many taken for granted and mistakes.

I've written eighty pictures, what's the main character? There's a life calling out there

Is this sentence structure awesome? A smell of money-killing came to my face.

I've seen an author named Yunzhong Gaoshi before who was also a lousy writer.

Doesn't this author check? There are so many typos in this article, it affects reading too much. You and Li can be confused, but it's not written by Qi. It's not like this if you don't do well in Chinese.

? ? ? Why does the protagonist travel through time? What is a plug-in? What is the protagonist doing? I feel like the main character is the same as...

Want to pounce. The first semi-literary Chinese. The second kin. Too many people with the same surname. Who remembers it. The third one. The whole text focuses on luck

I don't want to read it after reading the introduction. Just say it's the Qing Dynasty, and it's still a great power. Laughing to death

Can you finish writing a book😒

I feel like I've gone astray. I've been talking about personal practice here. In the author's setting, spiritual energy is thin and personal cultivation is limited. Only by gathering a crowd can one become powerful. The title of the book also aims to overthrow the Qing Dynasty. However, Pig's Foot didn't have any subordinates at this time, and he didn't have any position or power. The two cousins ​​couldn't control him, so he even took the initiative to send him to someone else. Don't talk about planning for the future. You conquered them and then managed it for them. It's really incomprehensible for you to take the initiative to send it out now.

It's well written, but you can't convince anyone unless you prove your ability yourself. On the premise that your wisdom and bravery fail to convince people, basically your subordinates are thinking of how to take advantage of you. Instead of thinking about becoming bigger and stronger. The beginning of an organization is to turn a family into a public enterprise, and when it becomes bigger, its rights will be open to the public. If you have no industry, no one will follow you. The industry is not for the public and everyone's initiative is not enough. After it becomes bigger, it must open up its internal rights to the outside world and absorb elites from various industries to become stronger. Form a political power

Brother, show your ability. Are you still such a coward?

The author finds time to revise it. Too many typos affect the reading experience and will also affect subscriptions after it is published.

The background of the story is very good, but the author's writing style has some problems. 1. Of the more than 80 chapters, 60 are about inner activities and the real storyline is basically not advanced. 2. I don't know what the pig's feet want to do? There are secret realms and magic, but are you worried about betrayal by ordinary people? ? ? ? The slave contract spell controls some magic and some ordinary people's values. It's too confusing 3. The power system is chaotic. I've written Chapter 80. Pig's Foot's power system hasn't appeared yet, so I know he is a monk, and no other monk system has appeared. I didn't expect that the first chapter, using a shotgun to kill ghosts, would be the pinnacle game. . . . . .

Very tired to watch