I Am Daoist Wang Jiao. Great Qian, Prepare to Die!

There's an unsolvable flaw in writing fantasy novels set in the late Qing Dynasty. If you write that magic is more powerful than guns, then society won't develop guns and cannons! If you write that magic isn't as powerful as guns and cannons, then what's the point of practicing it?

There are many typos, the text is incoherent, the layout is poor, and there's a lot of psychological drama and introductions. Crucially, the protagonist's story is inconsistent, making it feel disjointed and tiring to read.

It's well-written; it shows that the author has carefully reviewed the materials. I just don't know how long you can keep it up. It's such a shame that the books from the State of Lu on your end were lost. You could write this book as a social survey, referring to the Cambridge History of China, including volumes on modern industry, handicrafts, and agriculture. It's far better than spouting wild theories based on online sources, which are full of assumptions and errors.

Eighty pages were written, what's the main character? There's a life calling out there.

Is this sentence structure impressive? It exudes a chilling, money-killing aura.

To pounce. The first is in semi-classical Chinese. The second is from the same clan. Too many people with the same surname. Who can remember them all? The third... The whole text revolves around fortune.

What gave the protagonist the ability to travel through time? What's his cheat code? What is the protagonist actually doing? He seems like... Well, you know...

Doesn't the author proofread? The page is riddled with typos; it's seriously hindering readability. You even confuse "" with "" (li), and write "" instead of "" (chǒu bù). Even if your Chinese language grades are bad, this is unacceptable.

I once read an author called "High Scholar in the Clouds," which also had a terrible ending.

I didn't even want to read the summary. You could have just said it was the Qing Dynasty, not some foreign powers. It's laughable.