I Am Daoist Wang Jiao. Great Qian, Prepare to Die!

There is an unsolvable loophole in writing novels about cultivation in the late Qing Dynasty. If you write spells that are better than guns, then society will not develop guns! If you write spells and don't want to be good with guns, then what's the point of practicing them?

There are many typos, the text does not make sense, the layout is not good, and there are many psychological activities and introductions. The key point is that the pig's feet are very inconsistent, and it feels fragmented and tiring to read.

The writing is OK, I have read the information carefully I just don't know how long I will stick to it. It's a pity that your book on the state of Lu is broken You can write this book as a social survey. You can refer to the Cambridge history of China, modern industry, handicrafts, and agricultural history. Anyway, it is much better than reading some things on the Internet and outputting outrageous opinions. There are too many taken for granted and mistakes.

I've written eighty pictures, what's the main character? There's a life calling out there

Is this sentence structure awesome? A smell of money-killing came to my face.

Want to pounce. The first semi-literary Chinese. The second kin. Too many people with the same surname. Who remembers it. The third one. The whole text focuses on luck

? ? ? Why does the protagonist travel through time? What is a plug-in? What is the protagonist doing? I feel like the main character is the same as...

Doesn't this author check? There are so many typos in this article, it affects reading too much. You and Li can be confused, but it's not written by Qi. It's not like this if you don't do well in Chinese.

I've seen an author named Yunzhong Gaoshi before who was also a lousy writer.

I don't want to read it after reading the introduction. Just say it's the Qing Dynasty, and it's still a great power. Laughing to death