My heart is like a mirror, reflecting the sun and moon.
Take charge of the mountains and rivers and bring chaos to the world!
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That day, I went to a foreign country to take the exam. On the way, I encountered a heavy rain and found a wild temple to stay overnight.
But there are gods who sentence me to a serious crime, there are snake demons who talk to me about the Dragon King, and fairies teach me how to practice...
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In the middle of the night, under the dim light, there is a handsome young man holding a book and reciting.
"In ancient times, there was a catastrophe. Jiuzhou was quiet, gods were killed, and all races were destroyed. The crimes were too numerous to describe. The world called the source of this disaster 'disaster'." - "Jia Zhenren's Diary"
The young man sighed: "The source of this disaster should be punished with death."
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door.
The young man stood up and opened the door, but there was no knocker, only darkness.
The young man was suspicious, and a faint voice sounded in the darkness: "Disaster, I finally found you."
The young man smiled warmly: "The humble name of a young man named Xu Er is not a disaster."
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Fantasy/Xianxia, partial to group portraits
Reader comments
Is it a classic fairy tale? It feels like reading a fairy tale, not like a novel. Author, the narrative of your story is relatively poor. It gives me the impression that it is fragmented and disconnected. It does not have the feeling of being connected from beginning to end and progressively layer by layer in online novels. Generally speaking, you are not good at word count.
The book is very good, you can read it carefully
Xian Xia is a very fairy-like person, but he still created his own world view, and the author's writing skills are also good. The article has all the logical details and is very well written! It seems that because the author wanted to write a group portrait in a grand layout, some of the more straightforward and exciting aspects of the protagonist were not available for the time being. However, this is probably the case for most classical fairy tales. But the author's supporting characters are very well written, and the writing style is rigorous yet humorous. I like it very much. It's worth reading carefully!
The author must not run away! After writing a million words, it will definitely be a masterpiece, I believe it!
As far as this book is concerned, it's OK, but there are a few problems. The first problem is that the plot is too compact and feels too rushed. The second problem is that some plots are not very rigorous in shaping. For example, the plot where the protagonist and Ao Jiu met, the protagonist easily made friends with a snake demon who just robbed him. Is this a bit hasty? Generally speaking, although there are some problems, the overall story and writing style are still acceptable.
Yuan Ling
Yuan Ling
Why is such a beautiful book not popular? No, I want to recommend this book to everyone in our community.
Come on author, very interesting story
Yue Hongxian (woman in red)
Wearing red clothes is even better than a fairy.
Yue Hongxian (Girl in Red) (Red Fairy)
(Internet picture, infringement and deletion)
Chapter 9:
The girl in red is elegant and elegant, dressed in pink and jade, with a few strands of hair hanging in front of her forehead, a white jade hairpin twisting her hair up, and she is looking at him with a smile. Her feet were hanging down, swaying slightly, and her expression was leisurely. The moment I saw her, I felt like taking a breath of spring breeze.
The writing is very good. I like you as the author.
Snake demon Ao Jiu
I found some pictures online, the image is probably like this. When I hire a painter in the future, I will draw based on these prototypes.
Yue Hongxian
Good-looking, very interesting, many points attract me, but too few, more updates, longer updates
Very interesting book
In a world ruled by an almost-dead dynasty, monsters and evil spirits roam the countryside. There are no gods in heaven and blessings for all living beings in the book, but there is a divine court in the underworld, and ghosts and ghosts become Yin gods when they are enshrined. All things in the mountains and rivers may become spirits, and they may become gods. In the human world, there is a group of spiritual men who are in charge of mountains and rivers, restrain ghosts and serve gods.
The writing is good, but to be honest, the content and writing style are very similar to Zhai Zhu's Ascension on Another Day.
230,000 Words and 108 chapters. Excluding the reasons for postponing the update of several chapters, one chapter is almost 2,000 words. To be honest, I have read it very short in the starting point.
It was updated today, will there be updates later?
Are you still writing? I dare not read it, for fear of eunuchs! !
Some pictures of exotic animals
Pictures from Baidu
1.
2. Qiongqi
3. Taotie
You slowly lying on the bookshelf
I was really interested in this book after reading the introduction, but this update makes me hesitant to read it, for fear that it is too eunuch. 🔨🔨
Is it a classic fairy tale? It feels like reading a fairy tale, not like a novel. Author, the narrative of your story is relatively poor. It gives me the impression that it is fragmented and disconnected. It does not have the feeling of being connected from beginning to end and progressively layer by layer in online novels. Generally speaking, you are not good at word count.
The book is very good, you can read it carefully
Xian Xia is a very fairy-like person, but he still created his own world view, and the author's writing skills are also good. The article has all the logical details and is very well written! It seems that because the author wanted to write a group portrait in a grand layout, some of the more straightforward and exciting aspects of the protagonist were not available for the time being. However, this is probably the case for most classical fairy tales. But the author's supporting characters are very well written, and the writing style is rigorous yet humorous. I like it very much. It's worth reading carefully! The author must not run away! After writing a million words, it will definitely be a masterpiece, I believe it!
As far as this book is concerned, it's OK, but there are a few problems. The first problem is that the plot is too compact and feels too rushed. The second problem is that some plots are not very rigorous in shaping. For example, the plot where the protagonist and Ao Jiu met, the protagonist easily made friends with a snake demon who just robbed him. Is this a bit hasty? Generally speaking, although there are some problems, the overall story and writing style are still acceptable.
Yuan Ling
Yuan Ling
Why is such a beautiful book not popular? No, I want to recommend this book to everyone in our community.
Come on author, very interesting story
Yue Hongxian (woman in red)
Wearing red clothes is even better than a fairy.
Yue Hongxian (Girl in Red) (Red Fairy)
(Internet picture, infringement and deletion) Chapter 9: The girl in red is elegant and elegant, dressed in pink and jade, with a few strands of hair hanging in front of her forehead, a white jade hairpin twisting her hair up, and she is looking at him with a smile. Her feet were hanging down, swaying slightly, and her expression was leisurely. The moment I saw her, I felt like taking a breath of spring breeze.
The writing is very good. I like you as the author.
Snake demon Ao Jiu
I found some pictures online, the image is probably like this. When I hire a painter in the future, I will draw based on these prototypes.
Yue Hongxian
Good-looking, very interesting, many points attract me, but too few, more updates, longer updates
Very interesting book
In a world ruled by an almost-dead dynasty, monsters and evil spirits roam the countryside. There are no gods in heaven and blessings for all living beings in the book, but there is a divine court in the underworld, and ghosts and ghosts become Yin gods when they are enshrined. All things in the mountains and rivers may become spirits, and they may become gods. In the human world, there is a group of spiritual men who are in charge of mountains and rivers, restrain ghosts and serve gods.
The writing is good, but to be honest, the content and writing style are very similar to Zhai Zhu's Ascension on Another Day.
230,000 Words and 108 chapters. Excluding the reasons for postponing the update of several chapters, one chapter is almost 2,000 words. To be honest, I have read it very short in the starting point.
It was updated today, will there be updates later?
Are you still writing? I dare not read it, for fear of eunuchs! !
Some pictures of exotic animals
Pictures from Baidu 1. 2. Qiongqi 3. Taotie
You slowly lying on the bookshelf
I was really interested in this book after reading the introduction, but this update makes me hesitant to read it, for fear that it is too eunuch. 🔨🔨