Two Realms: Necromancer Invasion of Gaowu

Alas, even though it's limited and free, I still don't want to watch it. This is too realistic.

A cute girl appeared just after returning to reality from the game. She had a 300-word appearance description and a 300-word background description. I went back to the book details page and looked at it - it's fantasy. Why hasn't it been turned into a light novel before it reaches fifty chapters?

The plot in the real world is a bit ridiculous. A grown man's IQ suddenly turns into a moron. This is not normal. Very dramatic. For example, when you get the desolate core for the first time and find that it can absorb energy and convert it into skill points, shouldn't you ask about the source and price of the item first? One desolate core adds one skill point, and the other one adds three skill points. What is the price difference? Don't even ask? My bones are a bit soft when I ask for food directly.

I remember that the necromancers in Diablo 2 never seemed to represent evil. They were equivalent to the regular army of the underworld. They seemed to have their own church, which was mainly responsible for burials after death. They were equivalent to the current staff of crematoriums.

It's well written. Don't write a heroine next time. You can write a woman as the protagonist, but I'd better not write a heroine. There's nothing special about it. A dozen or so chapters on getting married and having children is enough, but it can't be too long. You don't know how to write a female protagonist at all, you just use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses.

I originally thought it was pretty good, but when it came to the heroine, I didn't want to pursue it anymore. It's not that I hate books with female protagonists, it's just that I think the writing there is poor. There was no need for a female protagonist. Female characters like Rogge were enough. What a pity!

I'm also a fan of Darkness. However, the focus of this book is wrong. Darkness fans... At least I, a Darkness fan, have no interest in the author's content about Darkness. Attracted by the title of the book, I have always been looking forward to the story of the dark necromancer in another world.

I feel that Diablo doesn't need to be written in such detail. This is just a game opened by the protagonist, used for upgrades and the like. Your focus should still be on reality, and cheating is not about pretending to be cool in reality. You can't let people see you playing Diablo 🤔 Then I might as well start a game by myself. Anyway, I follow the mission process, and I will lose all the equipment quickly.

I've convinced you, and finally brought my focus back to reality. You started the ancient college competition again. No one likes to watch this stuff. Are you ready to fight for dozens of chapters?

Don't write a bunch of female supporting characters like before, and end up with Xiao Chunan

There are many things that you don't understand, but I have some popular science. You can open the chapter or paragraph and talk about it. After all, some people may not understand Diablo, and they may not understand some terms, such as 1-100 poison damage in 3 seconds. In other games, it may be a total of 3-300 poison damage in 3 seconds, but not here, it is 0-33 per second, and the total poison damage in three seconds is only 1-100. There are also some fast attacks, faster attacks, fast spells, and faster spells. Some people may not understand, why is there another word in the same entry? In fact, no, one is to speed up, and the other is to be faster, including swinging the hand back. For example, the barbarian has a skill of double slashing. If you attack quickly, the second slash will be faster. In fact, it will not increase the stiffness speed of your attack. However, you have a faster attack, that is, the third hit is also faster. The barbarian's flat A is one hit with each left hand equal to two hits, and a faster attack means that you can slash 4 times, that is, two hits with each left hand, before stiffness appears. . . Does this explanation make it understandable? ? ? Before being invaded by Hell, they already had chainmail armor, even crystal swords, and various giant axes, but they couldn't defeat the zombies. Why is this? That's because when there are no heroes, those weapons cannot cause damage to hell creatures, they can only cause 0-0, and they are just decorations. And even if it is the wooden stick at the back, it has 1~2 damage, it is more powerful than those crystal swords, because it is enchanted and can cause damage to demons, hells, monsters, etc. Otherwise, when the world was still normal, there were so many cavalry, monks, barbarians, Amazons, etc., And so many weapons. How could he still be beaten? The world was almost shattered. . . Later, some wooden sticks, iron swords and other backward weapons could even kill high-level demons. . . In this way, the reality and logic are more harmonious. Otherwise, you will not be able to defeat the enemy during the glory days, and all weapons will be useful as soon as you arrive, which is unrealistic and unscientific. . . . Also, you are the undead, even if the halo skills cannot benefit them, don't give me any trouble at this time. You can only bring one follower. Even if you go to the mage, spear knight and knight behind, you can only choose one! ! ! Although this is said to be a closing game, it is also reality. . . The skills of your previous paladin can be used by many people. . . There is no limit to the number of times. . .

The author's main plot was not sorted out, probably because he didn't write an outline. The first question: The plot of the previous game world was very exciting, but then he was a little nervous when he returned to reality. The main character's purpose is to keep the martial arts gym, so let's leave the martial arts gym in the simplest way first, and then just continue to develop. The game world upgrades so fast, wouldn't it be good to be a Shilipo Sword God? As soon as the reality comes, it starts to show off. It's not that it can't be done, but it's because there are too many routines, and it's causing drama. If you can fight monsters safely and upgrade, this book may have better results. Second question: At the same time, the author also said that adventure in the game world is the main thing, so why is there reality? It is better to travel directly to another world without priority Third question: It is best for the characters in an excellent novel to have a beginning and an end. The character of this character is from beginning to end. If you want to change the character's character halfway, what about the readers you attracted because of this character? Readers who will like your character's personality after you change it won't be able to see when you change it later. But generally speaking, in the game world, except for the exaggerated descriptions of women, it is still very good. I have never played Diablo, but the game world written in this way will also make me find it interesting I skipped the real world (because the plot of returning to reality at the beginning poisoned me)

There was too much talking in the camp. Inexplicable

Analysis and prediction of the fun points of this book The plot in the book is divided into the dark world and the other world The fun points of the dark world for spawning monsters and upgrading are 100%. I believe that reading is the highest. The plot of the other world is terrible, and it is not exciting enough. When the world scenes are switched, readers will have a sense of difference when reading, making it easier to stop reading. In order to increase the score in the early stage, the dark world with dense and refreshing points should be the main focus. Here in the different world, there are occasional features of character templates, which are used as superpowers to supplement the plot. The otherworldly plot of the academy, jealousy, and emotional lines have all been poorly written. Don't spend too much energy describing it if you're not sure. It is recommended that the continuous plot of another world should not exceed 2 chapters. Results will be better

Written by Wen Zou Zou like a martial arts novel. Feeling so weird

I finally understand what many of the reviews mean. Author, you didn't control the rhythm of the two worlds well. I suggest you overhaul it and compress the plot of the dark world into one.

I saw the first 20 chapters for free. Well, it's good. I got it. Later on, the main character is going to be funny and his character will never come back. It's very annoying. After reading more than 40 chapters, I really can't stand it. It's a pity that such a good plot is good.

I've collected 18 chapters, and I've read half of them and skipped half of them. From the looks of it, I'll probably have to skip the next few chapters.

If Diablo is only a stand-alone game, I suggest you write less. It's not interesting and you can just use pictures to get equipment. It is better to put the content on the main plane, where it is unknown and expected for readers, rather than watching you write a long stand-alone dark article. If the single player takes up too much, wouldn't it be better for me to play by myself? So you either write the framework of the dark world as big as possible, or you try to write it as little as possible. But judging from your current writing style, it seems that you don't have much ability to expand the dark world, so you can only write like a cat and a tiger. All I can think of is to speed through Darkness, and then use Baal's room (World Stone Hall?) As a portal between the two worlds, and the gold finger will be transferred from the training machine to the protagonist and become a mark tattoo or something. Then feed back the main world from the stand-alone dark world.

The writing is okay, but the setting is very typical. It is also a plot about a master returning to school. Needless to say more about the subsequent discovery plot. I have read Chapter 63.

I don't even dare to try what you said in the comment section, and I don't even dare to read the first three chapters.

After reading about twenty chapters, hey, I should believe Shen Nong in the comment section.

It's a pity that the author wrote it too early. Now there are more powerful big daddy warlocks in the summoning department. Although the number is not as good as that of necromancy, their attributes are very high.

I read dozens of chapters, all of which are plots in the game. The real world exam takes three days, but there is no plot in the real world, so the book collapsed.

I personally like Diablo novels, and I still miss Diablo 2 very much. The first dark novel I read was called Crossing Diablo. Unfortunately, the ending of that novel was not comprehensive enough, and the author disappeared later. I don't know if he is still alive. This dark text. . . All I can say is that the heroine is indescribable. Anyone who touches a woman like the heroine will make people sick to their stomachs. . . The author should stop writing about women in the future. He can learn to get away and kill his sister to prove his truth.

What does Shi Yi Niu Ma mean? The world's best cow and horse? Who rated it? No logic. What does it mean to be a cow and horse all your life? Then it should be a cow and a horse for life! Don't call this a trivial matter, anyway, I think this is evidence that the author is not careful! Details determine success or failure!

There are less than 100 comments for 650,000 words. Is there a Shen Nong?

Thank you for writing about Diablo, it has already been released in the 4th generation.

What era is the old way of writing? The protagonist is a toy and there is an npc in the game, OK?

There is no need to put the story content in Diablo, especially if you feel that it is the plot of the game