The Myth Revives, I Can Enter the Apocalypse

I don't quite understand why you wrote it like this The main character? He is the main character besieging others? ? ? Why do you need a plug-in? Why do you need a golden finger? Have you figured out how to outline the theme of your book? Where did you copy it from?

The setting is good, but as for the writing, it's too immature. Take an elixir that is just dregs on the earth, leave it in the wild for a while, and then turn it into a "miraculous medicine"? Shouldn't it be dispersed by high-quality energy?

It still feels good. There are a few books that can be read, and there are few flaws, but they will not affect reading. I don't know why there are so few discussions and comments.

The writing is quite stable. Come on, author 🤓 I still think highly of you 😜

The more I watch, the more dramatic it becomes. Is there no night in the ancient world? What is the IQ of the protagonist? It can't be Yong Zhou.

I just read the comments, and I want to ask if the following routine is not suitable for martial arts - Goldfinger 1 - The foundation has changed - One by one, stick to martial arts - One family sells iron to support - - - The changes in the school are eye-catching - The villain appears in the early stage - Fight wits and courage with the villain - Fight the younger ones to the older ones - One by one, the tricks before the exam or during the exam are extraordinary, attracting the attention of colleges and universities, and the college entrance examination is over - Go to the college road one by one Encountered a villain/monster attack on the road, and fought back magnificently--arrived at the high school 😒

There is a problem with the setting logic. It seems that the author wants to write the reality into the world after the prehistoric times and relate it to history. But in this way, history will be stretched out, and the prehistoric world can be calculated in units of hundreds of millions of years. In modern history, the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors were only a few thousand years old. Red Maodong's new book for reference? Do you also want to get a Immortal? The prehistoric world is not a planet, and it is not as big as that planet. On a cosmic scale, the earth is nothing. Why do we want to cause trouble on the earth? Does the star sun have a golden crow? Does every star have it? The setting at the beginning was pretty good, with a different prehistoric theme.

This book is a steady and steady type (currently updated to 50 chapters) I can read it, the plot is very stable, there are no ups and downs so far, no pitfalls (the plot is poisonous) and no climax (personal opinion) Stable, um... Stable... Gone... This kind of stability... Is quite rare in these novels nowadays... But this is a novel, and your writing is really stable... Looking at the current situation, the poisonous points have been avoided. For example, no one cares about buying coffins, and no one reports suspected drug use... Wait The climax has also been avoided (personal opinion): The description of the first time the "salesman" came on stage and defeated the protagonist with a power higher than the protagonist's realm was very stable. The feeling after being killed by a spider for the first time, the first time he was tested at the family's family... (Personal opinion) Writing this, I really went through this novel in my mind... You said it was poisonous, no You said there was a climax... I don't think it was either_ This book is really stable

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This book would have been much better without the character of An Liang. From the author's description, it is obvious that he wanted to create a deep-minded and scheming character. However, he was inexplicably caught by the Sun Cult at the beginning, and there was no explanation later. Although it was obviously his father who was doing something wrong, at least he should explain it. Then in the joint examination, it was clear that he could defeat the game if he broke through, so he had to stab the protagonist in the back and sacrifice his teammates. It's really disgusting to turn off the operation and then add a green tea character (the author may want to show unscrupulousness? I can't see it at all, I can only feel the green tea and the intelligence). Later, because my mother was manipulated, it was completely inconsistent with the original basic character. She behaved like a white lotus type character. As of this writing, this character is basically useless. If you can change it, delete her as soon as possible. Don't wash it later.

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As for this book, the setting of Goldfinger is very interesting, and the plot content of Goldfinger can also be said to be above the standard. Then, let's talk about it, the author is very persistent in writing battle scenes, especially various competitions and the like. The writing is, well, a bit middle-of-the-road. At the same time, I like to delve into the details of various second-level subjects and then combine them to create explosions. To be honest, it is quite embarrassing to see those explosions. There are not many book reviews, poor chapter reviews, and almost no paragraph reviews. What does this mean? It means that the scenes you carefully arranged do not resonate with readers at all. Write more about the content on Goldfinger and the content in the real world that is not a battle or a mini-map competition, and less about carefully arranging battles, suppressing first and then rising, and intrigues. These contents are too exaggerated to write. The battle should be straightforward. Once you get to that content, even the character of the protagonist begins to blur.

The point is that you are always using gold to sell silver. The risk is high and the return is low. It is difficult to understand. Well, the alloy knives developed by the country are not as good as the same knives you have. If this is really a technology that can be achieved, it is at least a tens of billions-level technology. If you sell it for 12,000, what should you do if people covet your technology and you can't use it? How do you explain that you always sell this kind of stuff that is worthless but the technology is worth it? It's just cheating to say that you can survive to this point.

If you drag your family with you, but your writing is not good, it is a useless book. If you drag your family with your mouth, your writing is good. In the family of cultivating immortals, in the middle period of the great god Chen Dong's book "Shading the Sky", the family worships the heaven.

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I think if a person is betrayed by someone once, he will definitely not believe her. It would be boring to write less about An Liang and the male protagonist, otherwise it would go against common sense.

The serialization is on the reading volume. Does the author love to generate electricity? Still looked down upon

Do high school students have to be in high school to write high-level martial arts genres?

The author's writing skills are not bad for a newcomer. If he can continue to improve his writing skills in the past two years, he has the potential to become a high-quality author. However, as a newcomer, there are still many shortcomings. Here are some suggestions. 1. The character An Liang is really a failure! You definitely didn't define the character when you wrote it, you wrote it purely for the plot. The key point is that from the plot point of view, the character's style of painting also changes. When appearing on the stage, he can communicate with the protagonist for the first time on an equal footing and is an approachable type. In the side profile, several students failed to challenge An Liang. An Liang was very aggressive and was a domineering and cruel type. Without any clothes, when the protagonist looked at her, her mentality exploded. She is shy and belongs to a normal girl type. But later when the medicine pool and the protagonist are together, he wears a bathrobe and doesn't care about being exposed. He is an eclectic type. The two are obviously in conflict. In order to win first place and have a chance of winning, the protagonist is recruited later, which is also a profit-seeking pattern. The character is completely created and capricious. To be honest, I have read thousands of novels and you are the first author. 2. There are problems with character conflicts. The character An Liang obviously looks like the heroine, or the main female character, but not a villain in short. But after the character An Liang appeared, in the dozens of chapters that followed, the protagonist and An Liang were on opposite sides. In the first year of high school exam, in order to win the first place, I faced off against An Liang. After hunting, I met Anliang again. Then the four schools competed, and the core opponent was still Anliang. An Liang is completely portrayed as a villain boss, but An Liang is not a villain boss, which makes the plot seem very fragmented. 3. I can't get enough of the feeling! You wrote an article about invincibility, but the protagonist didn't appear to be invincible. The protagonist can't beat An Liang, but he doesn't dare to attack Nangong. He insists on adding a golden essence, but he doesn't fully grasp it, so he won't fight Nangong for the time being. In the plot of the game, who would write a plot in which the protagonist is suddenly injured and cannot show his strength? If the protagonist is invincible, you can write a game plot in which one can defeat all opponents even though he is injured. The protagonist like you is not the strongest at the beginning of the game. The process of passing the game is written. The protagonist becomes stronger step by step, and then wins the first place. The result is that the protagonist's strength breaks through, but he cannot control the result, so his strength weakens again. Although he knows that he will definitely be stronger in the future and win the first place, it is really not good to insert this setting in the middle. 4. The protagonist's strength does not increase with the plot! Any extraordinary novel, once a competition is designed, the protagonist's strength must be improved, so that it will feel satisfying. The result is good for you. The protagonist's strength is improved through daily practice. The plot of each game is really just a competition. In this case, what kind of game plot should you write? You should write the exploration dungeon plot. Generally, when exploring the dungeon plot, the protagonist will obtain countless resources in one dungeon, and then his strength will be improved through practice after the dungeon ends. But in the dungeon exploration plot, there is the fog of the map, and it gives you a refreshing feeling of exploration. As for the game plot, apart from the feeling of pretending to be awesome and the feeling of improving your strength, there is no other feeling of satisfaction. Each type of plot has its own fixed characteristics. You can't ignore the advantages, but the disadvantages will become more prominent. 5. The golden finger setting is wrong! Your golden finger can enter the ancient world, then improve the protagonist's cultivation qualifications and obtain cultivation resources and money, and then further improve the strength through cultivation resources, and then better explore the ancient world, thereby further improving the qualifications, and then form a closed loop. Since the qualifications have been improved, the level of cultivation must be higher than other characters of the same grade, so that they can be interesting. As a result, your protagonist's qualifications have been improved, but his level has always been inferior to others. Others broke through first to break the delusion, and others also broke through to Xiantian first. If others break through the realm first, what do you mean by improving your qualifications? The reason why other novels are high-level is because the protagonist's martial arts level is higher, so he can challenge beyond the level. But your protagonist has no advantage in martial arts. You also wrote that the protagonist is indeed inferior to others in martial arts. Then your realm is not as good as others, and your martial skills are not as good as others. You may not be able to win at the same level. How can you challenge someone at a higher level? In short, the advantages of your golden finger cannot be reflected. It can only be said that the setting of your golden finger is wrong.

This ancient world is not that ancient world. The ancient world in this book is just a different world with many civilizations! The author just chose a name to gain fame!

The sun is densely packed, this setting is really unacceptable, the prehistoric era has been vaporized, and there is still shit