Is It Okay to Take in a Problematic Heroine in the Apocalypse?

The writing is okay, but the female knight is too useless. She is asked to be a guard, but the protagonist is asked to save her, and even if she is asked to take action, she does not take action immediately.

The author has some writing skills, but I feel that the writing is too emotional. He may want to write about the growth of the heroine, but he often talks me out of it when they are still childish. I abandoned the book when the protagonist went underground for the second time. The point of abandoning the book was that it was too emotional. There is a sense of beauty that all you lose is life, but what she lost was hope (referring to holding the child's body in the hope that the child can be resurrected). No matter whether those gang members were heinous villains or not, the starting point of this matter was correct. They were responsible for the safety of their lives and those of nearby people. It could even be said that they saved the widow's life. After all, the widow was the first person to be killed after the child's body transformed into a corpse. Maybe it's because I view the world too rationally, which is incompatible with the tone of this novel, so I couldn't read it. These are just some of my personal thoughts. I write them just to express my feelings. If the author feels that it makes no sense or conflicts with the writing concept, then don't worry about it. It doesn't matter if you feel that it may affect your grades. However, one thing that the author needs to pay special attention to is not to forcefully use jokes. If a joke can be smoothly integrated into the work, it may make the reader smile, but if you forcefully insert the gag into the work, it will destroy the sense of substitution. If it can be seen that you are playing a joke, it may be okay, but if you cannot tell, it will be very discouraging. For example, for example, the protagonist threatens gang members to destroy the world for a stranger. No matter how you look at it, the protagonist looks like a fool. If the author hadn't explained in the post that this was a joke and revised it later, I would just leave here. However, there is one thing that has not been modified later, which is probably the second time I saw the widow, and the destruction of the world appeared.

Daodu saw it. Daodu is crazy about eunuchs. 153 People are investing in carving up the eunuchs. Laughing to death 😂😂

This is my first time reading a book by the author. Is it multiple heroines or single heroine?

Everything else is good, except for the character of the protagonist, who is a passive protagonist and has to take the initiative from others.

Starting point, witness every cyber tombstone

I seem to have seen this introduction a few months ago

Can the back of the carriage be upgraded into a mobile base?

It's not bad, but the title of the book is not attractive. (I don't know which story is used as the background) It is recommended to change the name, for example: Bai Xue's Doomsday Journey with the Great Female Knight and the Little Princess

Elena has the feeling of a loser's counterattack. She helped the goddess when she was down, and now she has become rich. She takes you to download dungeons and buy equipment. There is a rich and handsome man who keeps chasing her but she doesn't agree. She even buys you a dress and drives you to school in a luxury car every day. She turns a blind eye when you take advantage of her 😂

It's well written and interesting. I will continue to pay attention to the follow-up performance.

Wuhu Maomao has opened a new book, so pick one up and read it again.

I have finished the first few books and the introductions are quite interesting. I have been keeping them on my bookshelf. I didn't expect that they died after I cleared the bookshelf a few months later. .

I just saw the recommendation in the daily guide. Has the result been cut? It's outrageous. What are these recommendations?

The content is quite interesting, but why write such a nasty heroine...

I still think the author is much better at writing League of Legends fan fiction. The few books he has written are still at the top of the starting point. They are very good-looking. There is a shortage of books and I can't find a replacement.

Every time I subconsciously see her as Gwen

What about you, brother? Didn't the fanfics write well before? 🙂