He Comes from Void

After reading several different types of fan fiction, when I read Kill the Captain in this book, I finally understood why I dislike reading fan fiction of my favorite original work. First of all, this article is purely a subjective discussion. The author writes well. I don't mean to curse. Most fan fiction fictionalizes a character who does not exist in the original world as the protagonist. The advantage is that the protagonist can travel around and arrange the plot without being restricted by the original work. The disadvantage is what makes me dislike it. In order to make the novel exciting enough and make the protagonist the protagonist, the author must arrange for this fictional protagonist to participate in major events in the original work and unsurprisingly play a major role and even change the outcome of major events according to the author's ideas. A problem arises here. In order for the protagonist to play a major role and take the leading role, it is necessary to deprive the protagonist of the role of weakening the original big event in the original work (sorry, the protagonist has been replaced). As a reader who loves the original work, I would definitely feel unhappy if I saw my favorite character being upstaged by the fictional protagonist or even changing the trajectory of his life. To sum up in one sentence, my love and recognition for the protagonist of your fan novel is not as high as my love for the characters in the original work. Therefore, when the two intersect or even conflict and often end up with the protagonist winning, dissatisfaction naturally arises. Take the Bilgewater incident in this book as an example. I personally like the captain very much. At first, lol's official Bilgewater incident clearly stated that the captain was dead, but later it was changed to a story of surviving through the Illaoi Soul Trial and preparing for revenge, which is enough to show how popular the captain is with players. I have also been looking forward to seeing the story of Captain Return of the King returning to the King of Bilgewater (although it feels difficult). In the end, the protagonist of this book clearly helped Miss Fortune and even killed the captain later, which made me feel very sad. I found that what I longed for in my heart was to see Captain Return of the King instead of finally dying at the hands of doom with the help of the protagonist. This conflict of liking the character more than the protagonist made me skip large parts of the plot. So is there a solution? I saw some fanfics gave the answer. The first is that the author writes the protagonist well and vividly to improve the reader's acceptance. Even if there is a conflict with the original character, the motivation of the protagonist must be explained as clearly and reasonably as possible, and the original character must be given enough plot and stage. The second is to make the fictional protagonist a character in the original work, make the plot conform to the major events of the original work, try to avoid conflicts between the fictional protagonist and the characters of the original work, make the protagonist and the original characters become friends instead of enemies, set the villain as a character that everyone hates, or just follow the plot of the major events of the original work. I have read a novel. Through the author's ingenious arrangement, the protagonist becomes part of the narrative of the original work and the history of the original work, instead of just treating the original work as a background. The plot written in this way is equivalent to adding details to the plot of the original work to connect different plots together. For example, in the Bilgewater plot in this book, if it only focuses on helping Doom control Piraeus and simply reminding the captain that he is not dead, I don't like the ending that the author added later on to the entanglement between the captain and Doom. Also, when the protagonist meets a new hero, he forces others to merge with the void. The protagonist's invincibility also makes me unhappy. Maybe this makes me feel OOC? I talked a lot, but I also wrote it for myself.

Life Coach - Camille Lies will not hurt people, the truth is the sharpest knife Sometimes, scars are a person's finest clothing The world is neither black nor white, but a delicate gray The law needs to be maintained to protect the people Extreme is easy, balance is the most difficult Accurate or not, It's the difference between slaughter and surgery Strictness breeds weakness Conceit will bring everyone to their knees Remorse will smooth the edges of our souls I don't play games, I set the rules My motives have nothing to do with you Your futility is disappointing You, need to know yourself!

I'm hunting too. . .

The author's arrangement to give Karn the ability to devour evolution is really well-intentioned, so that the protagonist can travel around Valoran in a logical way and contact various heroes reasonably (and then eat them)

I just got an electric shock, but luckily I'm fine. I'm saved from the disaster. It feels so sour! It's so hard to wait for updates! In addition, I like this book very much. I think the single heroine should not be ambiguous. Also, when other heroines appear in the future, can they not be labeled as heroines? Because of this, many people from Hex have left.

Ka'Sa

Is this book a fan book of (QQ Magic War)? Very pretty

The word "late" in "Good Night" points out the time, which is reminiscent of the dark sky, symbolizing the darkness of society at that time. But under this dark sky, people feel "good", which reflects the numbness of the people. The exclamation point at the end of the sentence reflects Lu Xun's "sorrow for their misfortunes and anger for their indifference" towards the people's numbness.

The League of Legends universe can really tell many interesting stories and spawn many works. For now, this book should be regarded as one of the best, whether it is from the delicate emotions, or from Kai'Sa's transformation from a little girl to the daughter of the void we know well, from the growth experience expressed in the first village, to the ignorant The villagers were bewitched, fearful of monsters, and trampled on the kindness of the heroine (the expression is not quite right, but it would be better if you can understand the meaning). Later, the little boys, girls and their mothers who were rescued by Icacia were rewarded with gratitude. The inverse ratio formed, and the growth and shaping of Kaisha's three views were relatively successful. Are you a hunter or a prey.

The fire is burning for the first time Fiona, the Peerless Swordswoman The power of glory breaks through the sky, She kills with her sword in a row. The unparalleled journey of dragon dancing, The sword bleeds and scatters ten thousand bone seals. Fist of Shadow Akali Dimensional balance in the universe, Ninja Cang Fei Li Jue is completed. The Xia needles hold the leaves one after another, The scattered flowers return to the phantom cherry blossoms in confusion. ， A charged blow was back in the day, The master was so intimidating that he was afraid of it. The great inventor Heimerdinger Scientific efforts have begun to flourish, Set up a turret to kill the enemy. Storm grenade swings to explode, Upgrade to add inventions

You can read more about the hero's background so that you can write better chapters.

I haven't read the book yet. When I saw the name of the protagonist, I had a question. Has Kane's leg healed?

The Kasha party came to report, neither cutting nor black.

Ka'Sa

Void symbiont (I am not symbiotic with the void, but symbiotic with her) (As long as I know she is alive, I will be fearless and keep hunting) (She and I live under the void, I know she longs for light, but we can't get it) (The void is never satisfied, and so am I, and I will hunt more voids for her) (Will the void swallow fear? Swallow everything? No! We will devour them! ) (The Void makes us unsatisfied, but we will be satisfied, as long as we keep hunting) (I have no hatred for the Void, what? She does? Then I do too) (The Void is about to drive me crazy, okay, the Void is even crazier without her, shush, she didn't hear it) (The Void makes us unable to get something, but it is not permanent, we will always get it) (It's just that it is still shrinking, and it will eventually become stronger)

"Are you a hunter or a prey?"

Imagine a place like this It's always night And you refuse to give up hope The dawn that never comes I don't have to imagine I've been there The danger is real Fear is just an illusion When I was a child I was afraid of things hidden in the dark I was so stupid Now where do I call home Under the world I am surrounded by nothingness But I am not lonely Memories are my closest companions Love, fear, whatever it is It is the desire to live that drives people In the void I don't have a partner I am just a dead outsider Here are people everywhere, monsters everywhere Only know how to eat living things No one comes to save me Isn't it just a child Believe in yourself Kasha Say to yourself You can live There will be a chance I survived in the void I didn't let death succeed I didn't bow to my fate When the memory fades When darkness surrounds you Take hold of the power within you Have you ever felt your skin crawling It's like a thousand needles stuck in every pore Every vein is bleeding But compared to what's on me It's like scratching an itch This skin lives on me Hunt with me This skin keeps growing It wants to eat If it doesn't eat enough Will it be my turn My skin is crawling Acupuncture and itching At first I came back from the void to save myself Now it's time to save others I'm back and I'm stronger I'm back It's for those who can't come back Some people will be frightened and retreat when they see me But under this body They know that I am actually the same as them Maybe one day they will accept me My survival has a purpose There is a river flowing poison under our world And I am the antidote This place is so beautiful, how can I let the void ruin it The first self-reliance on killing Stay vigilant, risk yourself and fight hard You are a living weapon Get up, stand firm and hit hard The cub of the void, this is my home Fight and walk I will never back down It is strength, not hatred The void cannot swallow me But I must act Otherwise others will not be so lucky Ka'Sa, remember this name Goodbye Malzahar I will tell the story from now on Father, this smell smells like home Ah, a cool breeze. What I remember reminds me of home My father's memories came so unexpectedly What a bitter and sweet reunion Malzahar, I forgive you But I will not forget Our burdens should push us to high places, not pull us into low places Memories Love and hope are the most unnecessary things Kasha, try harder next time.

It's a skill concept diagram borrowed from prostitutes, but it's definitely not the same as what the author wrote. Don't blame the author 😏

Kasa

They came to China to see me, and they were a little nervous about meeting me soon. I'm looking for a double bed room tonight. Is there such a big bed? Can it sleep six people? 🐶🐶

Looks like Iron Man

Runeterra

The plot of Bilgewater is stinky and long. It inexplicably requires the corpse of a sea beast, and then doesn't get down to business. It's a lot of detours and I don't see how you absorb the sea beast, and you don't get any useful evolutions. Even if the combat power doesn't change, it feels like it's not as strong as before. The male protagonist can do magic, time spells, void spells, and there are many evolutionary abilities. However, every time I fight, I just use an arm blade to equalize. It makes me feel uncomfortable. The description of the battle is also exaggerated, and they keep talking about how strong the male protagonist is. In fact, it is just to mix up the plot. Then I meet the villain and fight for a few rounds. I can fight everyone twice and still can't win. It's really disgusting. Did the author forget that the male protagonist is a mage? Why are you using your stupid arm blade all the time? Isn't it possible to use magic to make waves? Wouldn't energy bombardment work? Isn't it possible to create a virtual spirit bomb? You always use your hook-eight arm blade to beat ordinary people for a long time, but if you remove the two hundred chapters of Bilgewater's plot, your strength will not change at all. It's just disgusting.

The void is afraid of the protagonist, so the protagonist is a person who is afraid of the void, referred to as the fear of the void ( • ̀ω•́ )✧

Purely personal thoughts. The author is kindly requested to send more candy. I sincerely request the author to create a single female protagonist. If you have already made arrangements, please ignore my personal thoughts above.

Just go to the 100th floor＠(￣-￣)＠

At the beginning of the main text, I can clearly feel that the author can't hold it in anymore. There are too many characters. It looks like he has written about each one, but it also seems like he has not written about each one. The theme is fighting against the void, but the big bosses of the void are rarely mentioned. They are just managing their own forces. The author is trapped in this circle and cannot get out. Of course, it is possible that he wants to show a more grand world. But to be honest, Pig's Feet evolves too fast. If it develops at this speed, the Void in the back is simply not enough to fight. If the Void in the back can be evenly matched with the protagonist, then the other supporting characters will appear to be too weak and there is no need to describe them. Then the previous writing will be in vain and will make readers feel awkward. Also, Bilgewater personally feels that there is no need to describe it. Since the theme is to fight against the void, then just use void energy to strengthen it. Why do we have to use the corpse of the sea beast? Moreover, the bounty and the captain are not very popular. Are they not popular in your entire plot of Shadow Island and Ionian Noxus? The plot of the darkspawn and protoss is also very good. Anyway, keep working hard and hope your results will get better and better!

Armor Armor

Ascended ones, void symbiosis, blood magic, world runes, if you traveled to the world of League of Legends, what type of extraordinary power would you want to have?

Emmm What's the use of adding sperm? I also want a sperm, so all the votes I cast are for this book