The Reincarnation of the Heavens Seeks Immortality

Well written, what is this, a primary school student's composition? Very poisonous! It doesn't look good at all!

The protagonist of the Holy Mother always engages in repaying evil with kindness, which is completely contrary to human thinking. The protagonist has no cards at all. He is a master or a grand master. The supporting characters have no superiority or inferiority. They can call the protagonist by his name regardless of anything.

Even bad people have brains, right? A seventeen or eighteen year old who has never practiced martial arts. Is there any need for the Demon Cult to forcefully take him in? It is obvious that his only good point is his status as a scholar, but they still want to use his identity to kill people, thus erasing this only good point. Then why is it necessary to recruit? When I passed the Juren exam, I even entered the top three. Isn't it more useful? Even if you think it will be harder to win over at that time, the worst thing you can do is come in and play the emotional card in advance, saying that there is only a young man in the protagonist's family, and there is also a young sister who is orphaned and widowed. If he is not eaten out by others, it is because the divine religion is protecting him However Afterwards, he threatened openly and secretly, saying that he had the identity of a religious cult, and if it was revealed, he would lose his official position. Even if he was outstanding and was not removed from his official position, he would not be promoted The protagonist naturally had no choice but to cooperate with them Isn't it wise to just use his identity to kill people?

The bright and dark strength of national martial arts is completely boring compared to the internal strength of traditional martial arts. Mixing the two together is too eye-catching.

The setting is full of contradictions: a willful little princess from a poor family, the son of a gangster father who is the best scholar in the county examination, a weak scholar who sells his physical strength, a past life of Kaogong who is addicted to studying martial arts, and a current life where he is full of confidence and thinks that he can succeed in the imperial examination by rote memorization. It's so ridiculous🙂

Garbage, every world ends unclearly, bad luck

All characters have an IQ of no more than ten years old

There are constant little poisonous points, the more I look at it, the more it looks like SB

I find that those who write about Zhutianliu martial arts, but those who want to write about taking the imperial examination and showing off among martial arts people are more or less nt. First, when writing about imperial examinations, one cannot write convincingly or hold on to ideas. For example, in this book, a 17-year-old prime scholar, who is the first scholar in the case, makes a living by delivering food to people and earns a living. When he is implicated in a murder case, the police come to arrest him directly. The protagonist, who is a privileged reserve for scholars, cannot express any sense of superiority at all. However, most authors try to show the superiority of scholars by actually becoming a scholar/juren/jinshi, and people in the world dare not touch you. However, this is completely nonsense. Let alone a reservist who has not become an official, even if he has become an official, there are many people who have been directly killed by bandits in history, and they can even pretend to take the official position for many years without being discovered. After all, information was not developed in ancient times. If you kill, you will kill. Who can do anything if you get into the deep mountains and forests. Once again, there are not many people who assassinate and kill officials in various legendary novels. Secondly, the Sun Moon God Sect came to my door for no reason. I didn't look for him sooner or later. When the protagonist turned 17, he might enter the privileged class. He specially found him to ruin his future and train in martial arts. His part-time job was so brain-destroying that he couldn't complain. In short, when these authors write about martial arts, just write about martial arts. Don't write about things that you have never been exposed to. Put some thought into martial arts fighting, otherwise what you write will make people laugh.

The writing style is really bad, "Zhang Yao" is mentioned 68 times in the first chapter

I have been reading books for so long and I have never come across such a well-written novel. Other novels may only have one or two poison points, but this book is amazing👍The whole nm is poisonous point, and there is a poison point every few pages. That's awesome. To be honest, if you just ask anyone to write about it on the street, they won't be able to write something so toxic.

You're laughing so hard, pretending to be a beggar, your height can hide a big long knife, haha

After all, he is a time traveler and a network user. I have heard and understood it a lot, but in the end he behaves like a noob. Who is a fool and let it out for shame?

To be honest, I don't know what the author is writing about this novel. If your novel was written 7 or 8 years ago, it might be popular, but now you are still writing this kind of thing. The protagonist is not only a virgin, but also stupid. Then the plot in the novel is blunt, and the main character's combat performance is inconsistent. It can only be said that it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

Any talk about seeking immortality is just old trash martial arts written by a slave in prison.

From the beginning to the end, it's the mentality of a loser, a primary school student and a petty bourgeoisie.

At the beginning, the scholar pulls a cart and delivers food, which is awesome and deeply doubts the author's cultural background.

Sure enough, no one with limited exemption is innocent! Poisonous weeds

In the first world, I feel like the protagonist is a fool. First of all, people with fame are not so easy to deal with. Do you know what a scholar is? Kidnapping a scholar offends all the officials. Many officials start from the scholar. The scholar is equivalent to having entered the official sequence. If there is a vacancy, the scholar will fill in. You are a small figure in the gang. You said you want to take over a company that spans several provinces. Is it possible that you are still a blacklisted person in the official list?

The writing style is very average, which makes the story's transition very stiff. The author's ideas are not clear, resulting in inconsistent characters of the protagonist, and unclear logic and motivations for his actions. If there is an outline for the entire article, the author would have decided on the word count from the beginning of the outline. It would just be a mixture of fan stories and make it into a novel, which is very scattered. The world of low martial arts is repeated again and again, and it has limited help for the growth of the protagonist. I can't think of any reason other than the number of water words. The author's intention is to live on the subsistence allowance. To be honest, this thing cannot be called a novel at all! There is a fundamental problem with the article, and the character of the protagonist is rubbish and unlikable. To sum it up, it's just a piece of shit, a piece of shit!

I really like Zhutianliu in Moyuyun Mountain

I wonder what the author thinks? It is clearly said that it is easy to practice in the six gates. There happened to be a twist that made the protagonist enter the demon sect. To be honest, he couldn't get over this hurdle at all, so he gave up the book. It was boring. If you don't want to be a human being, you have to be a dog.

It poisoned me to death. The protagonist was proud of his first world, became the best in the world, and became the leader. Then he didn't learn Tai Chi (there is Tai Chi in Heimuya), he didn't learn Dugu Nine Swords, he didn't try to grab the Yi Jing Jin, and then he immediately traveled to the Yitian world, and then he had to learn the so-called Liang Yi swordsmanship from the master of Huashan, Xian Yutong (he also made an excuse for Wudang Zhang Sanfeng had not created the Tai Chi Tai Chi sword at this time). I was directly poisoned and died. Not to mention that your powerful martial arts in the previous world far surpassed Huashan's Liangyi swordsmanship. What's more, the Yitian world has Jiuyin, Jade Girl Suxin Sword, Jiuyang, Subduing the Dragon, and the Great Shift of the Universe. This is screening readers. Mark it, discard it

Zhutianliu is still comfortable for you to watch

1. It is tasteless and a pity to abandon. The protagonist begins to fall behind. The protagonist begins to be led astray by the world view of the original novel, changing from the first perspective to the third perspective. 2. The protagonist's knowledge and technology buffs begin to fade, and the author needs to introduce new variables to turn the third perspective back to the first perspective to establish the protagonist's dominant position. 3. Without establishing the main character of the protagonist, the protagonist can only drift with the world view setting of the original novel and be slowly assimilated by the world view setting of the original novel. 4. The protagonist's idea of ​​being a time traveler has slowly been assimilated by the setting of the novel. The protagonist has not yet discovered that the core of the protagonist has been lost, and has changed from a time traveler to a native who can travel through time.

Is the author no longer selling his account? The writing doesn't look like that of a level 5 boss. A leaky house, an eleven-year-old princess's sick sister, and a food vendor who earns three taels of silver a month

What do you want, kid? Your reputation has been ruined.

Don't care what others say. It's their business if they don't like it. Don't deny yourself because of others.

There will be no updates for ten days, please finish it as soon as possible. Stop taking advantage of the heat.

The author's writing of Zhutianliu is pretty good, but it lacks connotation. Lack of individual views on the cultivation system. For example, the practice of Chinese martial arts: there are Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin, Dan Jin, Gang Jin, and Shen Jin (seeing the gods without breaking). Most people know about the first three realms. It's okay to write less about these three realms. You can write more about the last three realms, and you can also write about the process from seeing God to becoming a God. Seeing God is indestructible: Being able to perfectly control one's body, knowing the body well, and achieving the state of physical indestructibility. Tongshen: Start developing acupoints on the basis of seeing the gods. Virtual Realm: Understand the laws. After fully understanding the laws, build your own divine body according to the actual situation of your physical body. Becoming a god: ignite the divine fire, perfect the divine body, and awaken the power of the soul.