A Demon in Heaven and Earth

Alas, actually the writing is not bad, but the main character is a white tiger demon who transforms into a human form and practices swordsmanship. The feeling of trapping is too serious. It is almost the same as other immortal cultivation books. It is a pity that the characteristics of this book are gone. I thought it was following the direction of Western white tigers cultivating demon body magical powers. Unexpectedly, it is still the same old thing, transforming into white clothes and learning flying swords. It is too homogeneous.

I just read the comments in the comment area and made a comment. It is generally accepted that writing about strange beasts depends on physical strength and innate supernatural powers. It is better to write about people than to learn from them, right?

By the way, in Chapter 10 of the author, Hu Meng calls the protagonist Brother Qian or Brother Qian, wouldn't it be enough? There's no need to add the character "Master" to Senior Brother Qian, right? We're not brothers in the same discipline, so there's no need to call him this, it feels a bit redundant.

Alas, you are writing a protagonist who is a tiger, who changes shape and practices swordsmanship, and is struck by lightning while changing shape. You want to cultivate humanity, I have always felt that transformation should be a means for monsters, rather than a necessary cultivation process. After all, he is a demon, shouldn't he cultivate his physique and supernatural powers?

I'm a little curious about how old the protagonist of the White Tiger Demon is? Will you write about a span of more than ten years or decades in the future? Make the protagonist more calm and gain experience, such as a lot of knowledge about cultivating immortals, and getting along with humans and monsters.

I have been a eunuch once, but I don't know if I will be a eunuch again this time.

Why are authors so obsessed with handsome boys? 999 Out of 1,000 books have such protagonists 😅

It's so strangely written, and the main character's behavior is so confusing.

The writing is brilliant, the plot is exciting, and the setting is reasonable. This type of orthodox classical fairy tale with profound background is quite suitable for me!

Don't listen to some people's random comments. The sword fairy is the most fairy-like, and there is nothing wrong with it. However, a tiger seems to be more suitable with a sword. It has the aura of a king. I remember there is a book called: The Ancestor of All Monsters, which also talks about being reborn as a black tiger. It is quite good.

It can be seen that the author tried to write in an ancient style, but the choice of words and sentences always felt a bit awkward.

I liked the title and introduction of the book and thought I had found a treasure. But when I read the comments, I thought, damn, it would be better to leave as soon as possible.

Speaking of the author, will the protagonist have the form of an animal head and a human body?

Hanging out with others again! Accepted

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Very good. I'm tired of seeing the same human sword immortals. It's time for a demon clan.

A tiger should look like a tiger. Isn't it good to learn how to play flying swords or the human emperor banner?