Immortal Official Has Orders

My advice is to avoid it, it's not too outrageous, and the basic writing style is still guaranteed. The subject of detective work is relatively difficult to write, and fantasy + detective work is even more difficult. The author has always said that he sucks, and he is very modest, but the fact is that it is indeed a bit bad. The writing and rhythm of the characters are still at the level they should be, but the plot is difficult to call exciting. Fantasy itself allows for infinite methods of committing crimes, and you can practice whatever you want, including exotic flowers and plants. Then, the techniques are not considered to be interlocking. The reasoning part can only be said to be very basic. Everyone can basically guess what is not surprising. What is surprising is that they are all specific medicines, poisons, and exercises, specially designed for this case. The funny part is also a basic model, reasoning and comedy are both basic models. The result of 1+1 is less than 2, and neither side is outstanding. The reasoning and comedy are separated, and the fantasy part feels stiff. The three protagonists, brothers and sisters, must have a chance in each genre. It is so tough. Every advancement, opportunity, etc. Plot arrangement is also very far-fetched, and there is always a sense of imperial decree. The protagonist should be appointed by the emperor, but if this kind of thing is not written well and is seen on the stage, it is equivalent to failure. Wealth and honor are sought in danger, and you feel a headache when you see them. They are decreed by the emperor, and you have to go through great hardships to get them. The most important thing is the concept of the protagonist, which is always rubbed repeatedly by the author. It is both necessary and very obvious in the protagonist. Sometimes it's funny, sometimes it's funny, sometimes it's righteous, sometimes it's tactful, and the character of the protagonist is vague. It's actually okay to go the contrast route, but the protagonist's righteous heart always pops up in strange places, giving people a feeling of "you have compromised on the big things, why do you want to stand up for such a small thing?" In short, it really doesn't look good. Originally, with the author's writing style, readers would not care about logic when writing funny articles, but the author insists on choosing a mystery theme, and it cannot be read without logic. The fusion of the three themes is so inconsistent that it can hardly be called a masterpiece.

The Taiping Order is over and you started it at about the same time. Take a look and reflect on it yourself.

I haven't looked at it yet. Where is this in the province?

It is also Lao Pei's third book, from Li Sheng to Chu Sheng and then to Liang Sheng. I like Lao Pei's writing style very much. This book is quite interesting in the early and middle stages, but it is too rushed from the beginning of the war between the two countries. The latter part of the book is a bit sloppy, including the heroine's story line which is basically invisible in the later stages. But I still believe in Lao Pei, and I hope the next one will get better and better.

The beginning is very attractive and the plot is very attractive, but the characterization is a bit weak. This may be because there is no large-scale conflict and the characterization is not detailed enough. It would not be wrong to continue writing. Looking forward to the follow-up, don't leave it unfinished, the response should be great!

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The biggest problem with this book is that the author mixes the cultivation of immortals with the imperial court. As a result, it becomes unclear and they become completely different. Many places he makes are very inconsistent. Sometimes a certain plot tends to cultivate immortality and the plot characters are very fantasy. As a result, the focus of the next paragraph becomes temples and investigating cases, and everyone's thinking in talking and doing things becomes ordinary. It understands the thinking of ordinary people. For example, one second he was riding an eagle and flying in the sky, and the next second he was running wildly on two legs. One second he could search for souls and go back in time, and the next second he caught someone and there was nothing they could do without recruiting. It all relied on the protagonist to trick people and use their imagination. Cultivation is not like cultivating immortals, investigating crimes is not like investigating crimes, and temples are not like temples. For example, the first volume has almost nothing to do with cultivating immortals. Whether it is the villain's criminal methods or the protagonist's investigation methods, they are basically mortal methods. The second volume begins to add settings and characters to improve the overall level and focus on cultivating immortals. It can obviously search for souls and go back in time, but a group of big guys are all counting on the protagonist to investigate the case, which makes the protagonist's investigation become dispensable, which is very inconsistent. There is also the setting of the temple and the character of the emperor. Many places are contradictory and cannot be justified. In the novel about cultivating immortals, these people with cultivation do not put how to improve their cultivation first, and do not want to practice to become a big boss. They are only thinking about how to be an official and how to make money every day. They are all honest and willing to be loyal dogs to the emperor. The emperor boasts of being wise, powerful, and thoughtful, but in the end he only loves his concubine. The prince, the prince colluded with his relatives to win over the ministers, and the prince had an affair with his concubine. He didn't know anything. The country was infiltrated by the enemy. He had no choice but to rely on a few disciples of Xuanmen to catch spies for him. Before the enemy country was defeated and the world was unified, he began to be afraid of his most capable general. It was said before that he had the means to deal with the three great immortals. But in the end, the immortals were not afraid but were afraid of his own superior skills to shake the master? An emperor who cultivates immortality does not think about improving his own strength or immortality. He deals with all this mess every day. What is the difference between an emperor in the mortal world? Personally, I feel that the author should stop writing such a hodgepodge and should focus on one aspect. Should he write about immortality and chivalry, or about low-level martial arts in the temple, or write about the everyday and relaxed style like Sword God? Forcibly mixing immortality and temple together, making it neither fish nor fowl, but he still has to focus on a certain aspect.

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I watched part of it, and to be honest, it's far worse than the first two. The plot of investigating a crime is very boring in this fantasy and high-level martial arts world, and there is too little description of the main supporting characters and is spread over many other characters. Especially since the heroine is much worse than Jiang Jiang in the previous book, the author is still suitable for writing invincible or genius-style fantasy. Although this book describes the protagonist's understanding that is incredible, there is basically no real sense of the protagonist's realm, and there is basically no description of the protagonist's moves, and there are not many moves. This understanding seems to be of little use. Most of them are writing about small cases one after another, which is very boring To be honest with the crow next door, the author seems a bit like they are all into comedy. You can refer to the next door. Although it's a bit unfinished, the writing in the early and middle stages is very attractive and the characters are well developed.

Liang Yue is not a serious person. Every time there is business, there is something urgent to do over there. You come over and have a chat with Senior Sister Wen. Normally there is nothing important, so it is a good time to communicate with Senior Sister Wen. You don't even see her once. What are you doing? Can't tell when to do what? What I wanted to say during the last battle to seize the city was that so many people looked at you and believed in you, and then you flirted with Senior Sister Wen here, and you only went to fight because Senior Sister Wen was injured. So if Senior Sister Wen had nothing wrong with you, would you admit defeat in the battle to capture the city? The same goes for saving Xiaoyun. When he saw Senior Sister Wen, he forgot everything. Is there anything serious? If I were a relative or friend of Liang Yue, I would be really heartbroken. It's not that you, Lao Pei, are not allowed to write about Senior Sister Liang Yuewen falling in love, but you should divide your time into writing about daily life. When it comes to the critical point, you should first be tired of it. Are you filming TV series at other times? The chapter on love in Chapter 999 ends at the end, right?

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I used to think that your writing style was quite similar to that of White Crow The results are similar, but I can't find them in the rankings recently A reader said it was very good, I feel like you are exploiting your weaknesses and avoiding your strengths.

This book is written very seriously, but it is strange. The writing is very good, the plot is very good, the writing is very good, but the results are average. I hope the author can calm down and finish the book happily. It is really well written. I won't say too much. I have two monthly tickets for this number and four and six for the other number. I support Lao Pei.

On the outskirts of Longyuan City, several horses were galloping towards Yunwu Mountain on the bumpy road. In the dark night sky, there were no stars or moon. This rugged mountain road was built between two mountains. At this time, the mountains were filled with black air, both sides of the road were filled with white mist, and the surrounding rocks and trees gradually became blurred.                                                      ! The group of people tightened their reins, and the shouts of orders caused the horses to stop in time. Wen Yifan sat on the horse and looked around attentively. There were more and more white lights all around, and his vision became more and more blurry, so he asked to the back: "Li Mo, think of a way, is there any talisman that can be used to push back this white mist." "Hey! Senior Sister Wen, you've asked the right person this time." Li Mo chuckled from behind, but then said: "My talisman cost a lot of my energy and painstaking efforts to make it, and it is worth a lot of money. Let's do it this way. We are all from the Zhuxie Division, and I won't ask for more. Fifty taels a piece. If you buy ten, I will give you another one, and then..." Before he finished speaking, Qiao Caiwei, who was sitting on another horse, gave Li Mo a violent shudder, and then said: "There is so much nonsense, hurry up!" Wen Yifan also raised his eyebrows: "How long have you been selling your talisman? Go back and ask the manager for reimbursement!" Li Mo stopped talking nonsense when he heard the words, and immediately waved a few talismans, and then a gust of wind swept away. The white mist dissipated instantly, and his powerful aura was completely different from the eloquent appearance when he was selling the talismans just now. Seeing that the white fog had dissipated, everyone no longer stopped and continued to move forward without stopping. After a while, they finally arrived at Yunwu Village. They tied up their horses and then looked at the village carefully outside. Under the light of the torch, the dark wooden houses gave off a strange and gloomy look. When you walk into the village, you can see all kinds of ghosts gathered together. They all have faces that are so pale that they have no bloodshot eyes. No facial features can be seen, but you can feel the hatred in their eyes. They wander around, staring at these uninvited guests from time to time. Arriving at the depths of the village and stepping on the ground, Lin Fenghe felt a cold air rushing directly into his body from the soles of his feet. As a member of the Five Elements lineage and the young master of Bagua City, he was much more sensitive to the earth's Yin energy than others. Wait! What is that? Just above the village, a mass of black gas emerged spontaneously. It was the Yin Gathering Formation! This is a formation that can absorb yin energy. It is a formation used to deal with ghosts and monsters and use evil to cure evil. It is also a formation used by some people with ulterior motives to practice certain evil skills. I saw the black Yin Gathering Formation rotating above the head of the village. The earthly Yin energy was completely absorbed in an instant, and then it rotated and floated away. "Quick! Keep up!" Shang Yunhai strode forward, followed closely by the others. Following the floating Yin Gathering Formation, we came to a deserted and rugged road. There were no abandoned houses here, and the nearest one was ten meters away. The Yin Gathering Formation seemed to have stopped moving in the distance. Lin Fenghe glanced over there subconsciously. The Yin Qi was about to reach the sky. It was very strange over there. Li Mo even took out the invisibility jade charms that were ridiculously expensive in the market and distributed them to Wen Yifan and the others to cover his aura. Wei Ping'er from the Danding lineage gave each person a Miasma-avoiding Pill to prevent miasma from entering the body. "The sun is out in the west, and I am willing to pay for such an expensive thing." Qiao Caiwei took the invisibility jade charm and whispered to Li Mo. "Alas! Who can understand my heart? I am doing this all for the sake of the Fu Lu lineage." Li Mo looked heartbroken. Qiao Caiwei patted Li Mo on the shoulder to express her gratitude, then said no more, activated the invisibility jade talisman, and followed the others into the sinister place. A few moments later, across a desolate grassland, a smooth clearing appeared. The clearing was dotted with light, which looked like dim fireflies. In fact, it was the light emitted by the spirit bones. Because they had not been buried, they could not emit will-o'-the-wisps. They could only emit ghosts from their spirit bones at night to show their existence. Looking at the light all over the place, it was really hard to tell how many ghosts there were. There are too many evil spirits here! Immediately afterwards, a white light emitted from the ground, and a transparent palace appeared. In that illusory and large palace, an old man with a face full of enjoyment sat. He sat on the main hall, looking forward to it. There were several girls who were massaging him. There were women dancing in front of him. This old man was very ugly, but his face was indeed full of pride. The old man made a very hoarse voice: "I haven't eaten for several days, who is coming today." Suddenly, the singing stopped, and the female ghost who had just been dancing and massaging fell to her knees in horror and begged: "Master, don't eat me, don't eat me!" A group of female ghosts were begging for mercy in front of him like slaves, but the old man was full of disdain, so he randomly selected one and opened his bloody mouth, preparing to devour the female ghost. As soon as he opened his mouth to swallow, the old man seemed to feel something. He suddenly turned his head and looked towards Wen Yifan and the others. With just one glance, he felt as if his whole body had been struck by lightning, and the invisibility jade charm instantly lost its effect. "Interesting, you dare to come here, you are just asking for death." The old man's gloomy eyes were particularly dazzling. "Old ghost, how dare you swallow these souls and make these people unable to ascend after death. Aren't you afraid of divine punishment?" Shang Yunhai looked at each other angrily. "God's punishment? Here I enjoy emperor-like treatment, I am the way of heaven!" It gradually laughed. Xu Luzhi held a bronze mirror and suddenly shone the light from the bronze mirror, directly destroying the transformed palace and letting the old ghost float in the air in his true form. Then there was a bright lightsaber sliding down the sky, coming like a meteor! With a scoff, the sword pierced the air. The old ghost's chest was instantly pierced, and he fell from the air to the ground. This blow was exactly the power of Wen Yifan's ancient sword Qingqiu. The old ghost was lying on the ground and saw that the situation was not good, and then summoned a monster. The monster looked strange, with sharp and slender fangs, and its blood-red eyes looked extremely fierce. The demonic beast saw that Mo Qiuren was blind and rushed towards him. Although Mo Qiuren was blind, he was really good at hearing, so he turned sideways and hid. In the distance, Shang Yunhai of the Dragon Transformation lineage flew up and changed his form in mid-air. His whole body expanded greatly. When he landed, he turned into a half-length orc. He directly hit the monster, then jumped the monster into the air, and then punched it down hard. The monster was instantly hammered into the ground. Wen Yifan raised his hand and sword rain fell on the monster. Looking at it again, the monster seemed to be dead and could no longer die. Wei Ping'er looked at the death of this monster and felt it was a pity. It would be great if it could be used to make elixirs. Unfortunately, there was no good place in this monster's body. Seeing that the summoned monsters were defeated, the old ghost was immediately furious. He raised his arms, and hundreds of black shadows appeared behind him, all of which were ghosts he had refined. In the blink of an eye, hundreds of ghosts walked at night. At the same time, Li Mo summoned the Five Thunder Talisman and the Divine Fire Talisman and started bombing, and the ghosts affected suddenly let out a scream. Lin Fenghe stood on a high place and fired arrows one after another. The arrows were all fired, killing a large number of ghosts in an instant. However, there were too many ghosts, and this attack power was not enough to eliminate them all, and the old ghost was already hiding. To capture the thief, capture the king first! Qiao Caiwei was doing divination on the spot, deducing the secrets. Mo asked someone to set up a defensive formation to protect her. Soon, Qiao Caiwei's eyes flashed and she shouted loudly: "Senior Sister Wen, we are right behind you!" Xuanmen Ten Thousand Swords Jue! The sword light in the sky directly penetrated the transparent object, and the old ghost's body appeared in front of his eyes. Then the body was cut into countless pieces, and then turned into a ball of blood mist and fell to the ground. The hundreds of ghosts also turned into a ball of black mist and disappeared. Instant kill! "What is that?" Xu Luzhi, the youngest, exclaimed. I saw the female ghosts who were originally deep in the transparent palace slowly falling from the sky towards the village. In order to find out what happened, the group of people followed closely. When they arrived in the village, the souls floating in the air were looking for their bodies one by one. The female ghosts who were wandering around the village with dull eyes all returned to normal. Their faces were filled with long-lost smiles, and their bodies returned to their most beautiful appearance before death. When they saw their benefactor coming to rescue them, they all knelt down in front of Wen Yifan and his party, with sincere thanks on their faces. Then they choked up and accused the old ghost of his crimes. The old ghost detained their souls here and tortured them every day, making them unable to ascend. Now that the old ghost is dead, they can finally enter reincarnation. The story was so tragic that for a while, their cries were heard throughout the village, and the cries resounded throughout the world... After hearing their experiences, Xu Luzhi said with choked words: "You have suffered!" Hearing this, Shang Yunhai also lamented and said: "After dawn, I will go to the city to invite Taoist priests to come here to perform a ritual to save the souls of your dead." {"TopicId":"102290469138464768 0","TopicName":"Ghost Story Summer Conference"} {"TopicId":"1011683956737507328","TopicName":"Xian Guan You Ling"}

From the first book to the third one, Lao Pei's progress has been incredible. Now the third book is really of very high quality (of course, the first two books are also very beautiful). All aspects, such as writing power, emotion, and story creation, are of high quality. It's very interesting and comfortable to watch. I love reading it. Come on! Immortal official is so pretty

Are there also cases in the back of this book? I think the reasoning behind the case is not very good 😥

My name is Liang Yue. I am a student who has just taken the college entrance examination. In half a year, I got the fourth place in the province, which shows that I have amazing learning talent. However, before I could welcome my bright future, I was hit by a drunk driver. When I woke up, I actually traveled through time! Similarly, in this new world, there are still exams! Fortunately, the exam has been completed, otherwise wouldn't he die miserably? However, this year's martial arts test results were not very satisfactory. He could only rank first among the twenty-eight slave guards, which was about the same as the main guards who had half the number, so he could only be ranked around the middle. Dachun who also came to accompany me in the exam was different! He is more capable! Only in the archery category, his total score was somewhat lowered. One of the ten shots missed the target! Of course, he also legitimately won the first place, even though he was counting backwards... I was a little confused at the time, it shouldn't be! Shouldn't this result be pretty good? But he told me that the shot that missed the target accidentally hit the examiner's butt... I wanted to laugh but stopped, okay, with the examiner's little eyes, it is already a blessing among misfortunes that he can keep you. Just as he was telling me about his "great deeds", before I had time to follow him, I saw a figure suddenly appear behind Dachun. He quickly changed his words and winked at him, trying to remind him. I am still trying hard to redeem this tragic fact, praising the examiner's generosity and questioning Dachun's self-blame! Who would have thought that Dachun would talk about his capitalist behavior in front of him! He even asked me at the end if my eyes were dry from aiming too hard! Just like that, a tragic story happened again! Please like and comment! {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scenes"}{"TopicId":"1011683956737507328","TopicName":"Xian Guan You Ling"}

I am just a small first-level guard, and I don't know when I will become a full guard. Watching the night, I sighed slightly towards the moonlit streets. In fact, I am not from this world. There are all kinds of wonders in the world. This is a vast world with gods, ghosts, monsters, human beings who cultivate immortality, and various auras and vegetation. In my previous life, I only got fourth place in the province. Because I loved all kinds of detective novels and comics, I applied for the University of Political Science and Law. But when I was about to enter the university of my dreams, I had a car accident and woke up and came to this world. I was patrolling the street when I heard Cong Wei Pangchun, a fellow patrolman next to me, shouting into the distance: "There is a ghost!" I followed my line of sight and saw a huge green ghost. I picked up a handgun and rushed forward. Although I was a little scared, it was nothing compared to those unarmed residents. Going forward, there was only one burning house left. Residents around saw the fire and hurriedly ran to put out the fire. The fire was extinguished in a short time. The ghost has long since disappeared. Although there are evil spirits in this world, as an imperial guard, seeing is believing. Until I see a real ghost again, I cannot judge that this must be the work of a ghost. On the contrary, I think it is more artificial. Looking at the blackened soil mixed with white traces in front of me, I wrapped it in a piece of cloth and examined it. I assured the residents that the court would definitely solve it, and then left. On the second day, I sat in a tea shop with Zhengwei Chen Ju and Congwei Pangchun and observed the surroundings. This tea shop was similar to the place where the fire broke out yesterday, so I tried my luck here to see if I could catch the suspect who set the fire. Not long after, I saw an old farmer pushing a cart selling sour plum soup in front of me, and a man wearing a bamboo hat bought a bowl and left quickly. Seeing that there was no one around, the old farmer picked up a large piece of ice from a bucket in an alley and threw it into the yard of a shop. Naturally, this weird behavior could not escape my eyes. I immediately asked the two of them to take out their knives and point them at the old farmer! Soon enough, the man saw three imperial guards rushing towards him, thinking they were going to catch him, so he picked up the bamboo hat on his head and threw it towards Pang Chun who was closest to him. Pang Chun suddenly flew five or six feet away. When Chen Ju and I saw this scene, we both thought that this man and the old farmer were accomplices. We looked at each other and I attacked him three times with one leg. As a second-level warrior, Chen Ju swung his sword and slashed at his front. Unexpectedly, the man took the attack with his bare hands. Next to me, I heard a sound of gold and iron, and I immediately understood that this man was a warrior in the fourth realm, the Gang Qi realm! Before he could fully react, the man punched Chen Juhong so hard that he vomited blood and flew backwards. I immediately distanced myself from him, and just when I was about to think about how to respond, there was a sudden sound, and a silver-white sword light came quickly from the sky, carrying a cold air and going straight into the man's chest. The gold and iron defense was instantly shattered. With a "bang", the man flew dozens of meters away and was nailed to the brick wall in the distance. There was a sound of stampeding in the distance, and I saw a group of black-clad soldiers coming with swords. My eyes were not among the group of soldiers, but I saw a beautiful figure coming with the wind, and even the air was carrying a faint fragrance. This is an extremely beautiful woman, her eyebrows are like clouds and pearls, her skin is like flawless porcelain, her figure is graceful and graceful, with a slight breeze. This fairy-like woman has already stunned everyone, including me. The woman looked at the man nailed to the wall, picked up the portrait in her hand and asked, "You are Yu Wenlong." The man struggled and roared, and immediately the black-clad armor gave him no chance, and suppressed him after subduing him. After saying that, the woman turned around and took out a token to show her identity, "Zhuxiesi is walking, Wen Yifan." So I also reported my identity and thanked me for saving my life, but her next sentence shocked me, "How did you know that he was Jiu Yang Dish?" I was immediately overjoyed. I didn't expect that I would find Jiu Yang Dish by accident. This contribution is not small. It seems that I can become a full-time employee! {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"} {"TopicId":"1011683956737507328","TopicName":"Xian Guan You Ling"}

A good book, I especially like the non-rigid nature of this book. Many people now think that selfishness is human nature and greed is the root of ability. These are all caused by bad novels and television works, as well as performances by those in power. But the human heart is the human heart, there is good and there is evil.

Lao Pei, it's up to you, can we update three times a day starting from 2025?😏

After reading the first thirty chapters, Pei Bubu's book is indeed not as exciting as before. Moreover, the heroine appeared early but a little abruptly. In this world of strict class antagonism, if the heroine of this status is not a like-minded revolutionary, or if she has grown up with the protagonist from the beginning, she is more likely to be in the villain camp. She is surrounded by a large number of suitors from aristocratic families, and she is even the fiancée of a descendant of a big family. Lao Pei himself feels awkward. This is normal, because this setting is not good, because one of the people who are in class opposition must deviate from their own class.

This book is really interesting. I was about to start reading it after reading the chapter, but I found that after reading more than 200 chapters, I couldn't remember any of the plot. Is it necessary to quit porn?

At present, the writing logic is online, it is an excellent book.

I have read both the books Demon Slayer and Immortal Official. In fact, I feel that the two books are very similar in some aspects. For example, the rhythm in the later stage will inexplicably become very fast. In Demon Slayer, various bosses will appear in the later stage, and you can defeat them one after another with almost no pause in between. My impression is that every time the boss defeats everyone, When people are celebrating, a real mastermind will appear again, and then repeat for several rounds. The same is true for this book. The whole plot from the later stage of the war between the two countries to the appearance of the mastermind, although it is indeed funny, but in terms of plot alone, it is a bit too similar to the demon slayer. It also seems to be a victory, but then there is a setback and the cycle repeats. , And one problem is that there is almost no foreshadowing for these subsequent setbacks. Even many bosses are good people in the early stage. They cannot be said to be absolutely good people, but they are also very decent types. However, in the later stage, they are basically given a supplementary explanation abruptly to change their image into a negative one. Pai, it feels a bit like being rough for the sake of being rough 🙂 In short, I feel that the later stage is too abrupt. Even when I read the end of this book, I only realized that it was about to end after reading what the author said, and I couldn't figure out how to get there. So I would like to suggest that the author pay attention to this aspect (friendly)