Immortal Eagle Dog

Refinement

Let's read this book. Who would have thought of the current development? After all, Qi Tanhua had offended the prince. Who would have thought that the prince would be able to broaden his path like this. Before, he had always guessed that he would kill the prince and the second prince. Tsk, tsk, tsk.

Book Review I followed the latest chapter for two hours at a stretch, and couldn't help but turn on the automatic subscription! This "workplace article" is too suitable for my taste. Although there are some minor problems, it has many highlights. There are no mistakes in the whole process, and the anti-routine design is particularly eye-catching - it points out the cliché plots that readers are familiar with in advance, completely breaking expectations, and it is very fresh to read. (The following contains slight spoilers) There are a few points that I am particularly curious about and want to talk to you about: 1. Will there be a female protagonist in the book, or will it involve an emotional line? 2. Currently, the protagonist's upgrade relies on "getting" princesses and princes with bad M attributes. This setting is very eye-catching in the early stage, but I worry that later on, I will fall into the cycle of "entering the dungeon→meeting the prince/princess→→upgrading" and losing novelty; 3. In the plot, two folk princesses are discovered on the same map one after another. Are their mothers the same person or different people? Is the seeding ability a bit too powerful? Is every map so powerful, or is there something special about this place; 4. Compared with other plots, I am more looking forward to the interesting developments of cultivating the "Chosen One" after the protagonist is promoted to the Grandmaster realm. This foreshadowing is very attractive; 5. I hope to give more Some scenes of the protagonist's parents: I want to see them have real emotional fluctuations, not just background panels; 6. The protagonist's true energy has a great influence on the royal family, so doesn't the immortal behind him know the real cultivation method? Does the royal family have no restrictions on this type of cultivation? 7. The protagonist's "eyes" are the core golden fingers. In the previous battle, his female master mentioned "slaying the dragon", which shows that some people have killed royal children before, but why is it that only the protagonist can understand "subduing the dragon" and others before him can't? Is there something special about the protagonist? Hope to discuss with you, thank you!

This is a humorous fairy tale written with a sense of irony in a ridiculing way. The author's grasp of the scale of satire and ridicule is the greatest advantage of this book. It is obviously absurd, but it does not make people feel that it is a drama. A pretty perfect comedy fairy.

Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. There are obvious steps on the protagonist's promotion path, which allows readers to predict and look forward to the protagonist's future development. Based on the book title introduction and content, the protagonist will become a member of the Nine Heavens, one of the Nine Heavens, the leader of the Nine Heavens, or have a higher status in the future. 2. The plot has enough unexpected but reasonable reversals. For example, President Qu in the opening plot, while watching it, I did not expect that he was a member of the devil's path, nor did I expect that Lin Xiangwen was gay. This also highlighted the role of the protagonist's "clairvoyance". Writing this way can also make reading more interesting. 3. There are many memes, and the dialogue between the characters is interesting. There are many memes, but not too many, and the look and feel is ok. The character dialogue does not make people feel cliche, but also conveys certain information and background. 4. The characters are not smart. From Kong Ningyuan to President Qu, to Qi Tanhua and "Tianjian", we can more or less feel their way of survival in this world. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. 1. The character's driving force is not enough, or it can be said that the driving rationality is not enough. Joining the Nine Heavens "Chosen" lineage seems to me like risking one's life. I don't feel the need for the protagonist to risk one's life. The protagonist's family has no worries about food and clothing, and has not suffered any disasters. He can live well in this world by letting it develop naturally. If the protagonist is involved in some big event, and the lives of the protagonist and his family are in danger, would it be better to write about the protagonist risking his life? As for the hidden illness of the protagonist's mother, if this is the only reason why the protagonist needs to risk his life, I don't think it is convincing enough, because before he raided President Qu's house, he had no idea that he would get the Thousand-Year Snow Lotus, and even the prince did not get the Thousand-Year Snow Lotus. Why did the protagonist get it so easily? As for the conflict with the Qu family... Emm, depending on President Qu's performance, this small conflict will not affect the personal safety of the protagonist and the protagonist's family. The author mentioned in the third chapter that the protagonist is insecure, but if this is the only thing that makes the protagonist insecure, I don't think it is convincing enough. Moreover, without affecting the personal safety of the protagonist and the protagonist's family, isn't it a bit rash to risk one's life? The author writes that "Thousand-Year Snow Lotus" can cure his mother's hidden illness, so that the protagonist seems to have to make a deal with Qi Tanhua, thereby joining the plot of Jiutian's Chosen Lineage. I personally feel that the plot is a bit stiff. For example, for the dish of jealousy that says "the protagonist can only join the Chosen One to bind each other", the dumplings "Thousand-year-old snow lotus heals the mother" are made. Of course, if the author has other foreshadowing and foreshadowing, just ignore it. In addition, I didn't feel the need for the protagonist to become stronger. The opening chapter only mentioned the "martial arts dream" and the so-called "security". It's okay to become stronger, but I think it's a bit unreasonable to risk one's life in order to become stronger. 2. The rhythm is slightly slower. Two-thirds of many chapters are lines, and there are a lot of background introductions and world views in the lines, which makes it a bit boring to read, but the plot does not advance much. For example, in chapters 18-19, it is written that Dai Yueying, a demon godwoman, deliberately approached the protagonist, but the protagonist discovered the clues and refused to approach. It took 2 chapters. Dai Yueying must be one of the key figures in the subsequent plot, but I did not see the need to write 2 chapters for this incident. There are too many lines and too many explanations and explanations. 3. Is daily life too much? As mentioned in the advantages, jokes and humorous dialogues can increase the interest of reading, but may there be too much written, especially some dialogues with parents, which I feel can be omitted. All in all, it looks good. I have no other intention, nor do I mean to teach the author how to write a book, I just want to express my own opinions. Book friends, please don't criticize.

Only now can I realize that the author relied entirely on the relationship and pull between the characters to write more than 700,000 words, and there are only a few fighting scenes (referring to literal fighting scenes). It is too strong😭😭

I have voted for more than ten monthly votes this month. How do I contact the author to add my ex-girlfriend's name to the Shen family 🙂

To be honest, I rarely post comments, but reading this book really lowered my moral limits time and time again. You can't, at least you shouldn't.

Mediocre! Go meet a girl from Jiangxi! In this way, you will have the motivation to update 100,000 per day 🤭🤭🤭😁😁😁😜😜😜

Both the protagonist and the enemy king have had their hands blown to pieces many times.

The life of an online article author should be spent like this: when he looks back on the past, he does not regret having entered the palace to be a eunuch, nor is he ashamed of updating tens of thousands of words every day, but devotes all his energy and time to the sacred and great cause of coding! There are updates every day, life is endless, and coding is endless! Read it in one go, tentatively select the good grass, 11 votes are given!

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There are thousands of novels written about Wu Sheng Lao Mu and the White Lotus Sect, which led to the first meeting of Wu Sheng Lao Mu's double cultivation or even triple cultivation.

Totally unbearable. . Could the recent chapters be written by humans? 🙂

So is Lianshanxin's mother the leader of the demon sect? She was born with the magic womb book, which caused her body to be uncomfortable all the time and required a thousand years of snow lotus That's why Lian Shanxin is the Maitreya and the demon sect is so confident.

Except for the main characters, they are all the same.

Brothers, the update time has moved to 12 noon. Please don't stay up late to cultivate immortality.

Brothers have already ordered 9970, and there are still 30 less than 10,000. Can any brother help me 🌹🌹🌹

The only drawback is that it becomes a little bit more perverted the more I write it.

I really didn't expect to meet such a perverted person for the first time and win the resurrection match~ Call for our No. 1 Bodhisattva in the world.

Occasionally there is someone who guesses the identity at the front of other books, who guesses based on the current plot. This book is... Every time a high-status character appears, they guess the identity of the protagonist and check the identity of his parents. It is really difficult. I read a hundred chapters. The leader of the Demon Cult comes out and guesses that his mother is the leader of the Demon Cult. When the emperor comes out, he guesses that the protagonist is the son of the emperor. I am speechless. The lineage theory cannot be stopped, right? By default, a capable person must be in a high position or what kind of noble bloodline can allow him to advance like this?

Meet a girl from Jiangxi! 😁😁😁

When I first started watching, the King of Jiujiang went to the Demon Sect to become the Nantong Bodhisattva? What kind of brain circuit can write such a story?

After so many years of following the news, Ping Ping and Jiumei's writing has kept up with current events and they have not saved any manuscripts.

Can the author find a way to produce an AI comic series? Especially the Kuangshan section

In fact, if you don't kill Dai Yueying at the beginning, you can take another auxiliary route to help him ascend to the throne. This kind of development is actually not bad. If you take the alternative harem flow route, it actually depends on the author's writing. If you don't write the part where people from the Demon Cult are sent to the protagonist's house, the plot of beating up Jin Luan can actually be written.

Reminds me of the title of Liu Bei's article I read more than ten years ago. Chaos will turn him upside down 😠

Hoard Rat is getting a little impatient waiting.

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I came to Himalaya after hearing the novel. The character Thousand Faces made me laugh. I just heard today that I was cursed by an immortal and lost half my life. Dian