You Said You Would Practice Martial Arts, but Have You Mastered the Tiangang Dharma?

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Is this writing really by a new author? It's indeed a bit powerful, the characters are well created, and the rhythm is OK. I can't find any major flaws, but is this score too low? I remember the one from Baby on the rankings. MD banned me after saying a few words that he was too poisonous. The Qidian rankings are useless. They are all fake. A few people just gave 20,000 votes. How can those who haven't brushed up in the future compete with me? Qidian itself is conniving. Most of the books on the ranking list in previous years can be read, but in recent years, they cannot be read. I have never seen this situation in more than ten years of reading novels.

After reading Chapter 72, I feel a little speechless. Let me talk about the template. First, I listed an awesome person, Li Juefeng, and then his marksmanship transformed, shocking everyone; then I listed the second awesome person, Yang Yu, and then his bow skills transformed, shocking everyone; and then in Chapter 72, I listed an awesome person, Lin Wei. I haven't read the rest yet, but I guess it should be the transformation of his body skills, which shocked everyone again. The traces are too obvious. At present, the only motivation I want to continue reading is Liu Zili. Of course, the author's description in the article is quite good, very detailed, and the protagonist is very powerful, like the God of War! But the routine is too repetitive. Alas, it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless.

Please click on the avatar to view details. That book was very scolding. I have lost my parents many times.

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So far, it seems that the writing style is very good, at least better than that of Gaowu Era. It suffers the loss of newcomers and has no traffic.

It's very stable and the quality is quite high. To me, it's considered a fairy tale. After all, what can I say about the quality of Qidian's new books recently? I understand everything, that's all I can see.

The psychological description is quite detailed, but the characterization is not easy to evaluate. People are of course complex, but you are writing cool stories. Take Wu Shan, for example. In the early stage, he was an image of playing with privileges to take revenge on the protagonist, but later he suddenly transformed into a good teacher, and that Qian Cheng. , In the end, it's like turning back the grass, and it's like having a family together Another thing is that the brain is too small, the system article, and other people can only practice to xxx, but I can practice to the template of xxx, the brain is very important, not only the name of the brain, but also more details, why is the invincible method invincible, what is the difference between it and the ordinary law, these must be written down

By the way, why do people learn to use guns as soon as they start martial arts in school? A stick and a sword will last a lifetime. Among many weapons, guns are more difficult to learn.

Because the main conflict later is between humans and monsters, and the BOSS is very powerful. I don't need to suppress the male protagonist. The conflict at the beginning is just a normal conflict to promote the plot. The stronger the male protagonist is, the better... After all, the setting is for the demons to gain the upper hand, so there is no need to suppress the male protagonist. It's just that some characters are more selfish, which seems to be detrimental to the male protagonist. Thank you for your understanding

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Chapter 150: I can't catch up anymore. I have been constantly breaking through my limits, and there are only a few times when I can practice normally. It is estimated that there is also a routine behind it. The characters are described very delicately and vividly, mainly because most of the characters have a good outlook on life, but I am a little dissatisfied with the protagonist. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist is an enhanced version of Chizuru Plus who is either competing at the top or on the way to the top. To be honest, I don't think it's normal even if the protagonist is not dead. Your novel didn't say it was extreme streaming.

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I caught up to the latest chapter in one go. Although the plot is written very neatly, it is still not satisfying enough. Because the protagonists in the author's works always show off within the same framework, you can often guess the upper limit of pretentiousness after reading the previous plot. It really doesn't have that B-king flavor. It seems that the upgrade is very fast, but the protagonist's own abilities and personality are not eye-catching. Whether it is "Rebirth of Urban Immortality" Chen Beixuan, "The Man at the Top of the Food Chain" Li Anping, or the protagonists such as Lu Shengjia Long in "Go away", as well as the current hot topics Shen Yi, the protagonist of "Destroying Demons", and Chu Junhui, the protagonist of the recently read "Becoming a Brave Man in the Martial Arts World", these protagonists have one thing in common, that is, they can bring readers extremely impactful classic scenes, allowing readers to feel the protagonist's unyielding madness and pride! As for your book, after reading so many chapters, I can only feel a little bit about the protagonist's first encounter with the Ox King. The rest of the plot is constrained in a frame and can be seen to the end. There is really no attractive and passionate picture, making it difficult for readers to have an urgent sense of anticipation for the next chapter. Moreover, the plot is too monotonous. It feels like there is nothing except the main line. At least try to bury some pitfalls. But in general, it is indeed better than that of a certain era next door. It is clumsy and the routine is worse than yours. It makes me feel numb. However, while others have the support of die-hard fans of their previous works, you have nothing here (few chapter reviews), so you still have to work harder to write better, don't be a eunuch!

How well does the author write? His magnificent world view writes the landscapes of other worlds. Thousands of tall buildings are rising, waves are rising, enemies are endless, and life is riding the wind and waves. His articles, ah, he is simply a "hydrology expert", writing as much as water! Every time I open one of his works, I have to wear a life preserver for fear of drowning. But having said that, his writing is indeed quite interesting, as if he is telling you a story, but the story is a bit long, so you have to be patient to listen to it.

Please support me and write well. Don't write too badly.

Maintaining the rhythm has the quality of quality, and passionate literature is still the mainstream! Write less conspiracies and calculations. Even if there is a top, it should portray the villain as a person who is dedicated to humanity. At the same time, he plots against the protagonist because of some misjudgments, not because of his personal problems. You can write about some big shots who behave like this, but not too many, and it cannot be the top big shots. It is best to be within the scope of the municipal or provincial level. It's okay to occasionally write some small characters to find trouble, but not too many, and the small villains can't be too stupid. Characters in novels with idiot supporting characters are not advisable. They have withdrawn from the mainstream of history. Villains who are as stupid as paramecium are not popular anymore. In short, you have to figure it out yourself. Don't think about how many words you have to write, one million, two million, or even tens of millions. If you delay too much, you will lose a lot of data later, which will also have a big impact on yourself. The most important thing is to tell the story well, not how many words to describe the story. So far, there are no big problems, and the protagonist's character and behavior are okay, so keep going! Oli gives!

It's okay, but this ice and snow copy is really long and bad. I skipped it all. It was really uncomfortable to watch.

I hope readers will support me and beg me to read it. It's really hard not to read the new book in the new issue. Also, please don't attack me personally. After I have accumulated experience in this book, I will definitely write more than a million words, so don't worry. 🙂 Also, this is a cool article, don't worry...

You can use your tricks and moves as much as you like. If you want to have a special suxiang effect, you can also arrange it (such as yin and yang conversion, cough cough...)

Not bad. He is a typical data flow genius. He works hard and leaves the rest to me. That's right. I was attracted by the name. I'm a little anxious about the appearance. I hope to see someone else practicing martial arts while I cultivate immortality and reduce dimensionality. The result is okay.

Leave a review A mediocre work, it's normal not to get good results It's labeled as invincible, but the protagonist is not invincible The writing is about martial arts, but the rhythm is not refreshing enough The title is contrasting, but the title is arrogant, in fact it is an honest upgrade br>I want to write a single female protagonist, but there is a little emotional description but not much, so it cannot form a selling point There are signs of multiple female protagonists, but judging from the content of the ending outline, it should not go this way Every aspect is different

Did you get "limited exemption" after finishing? I also received 100,000 😰😰

Come on, this one is much better than the previous one. The villain is not subdued and there is no senseless suppression. The breakthrough of the protagonist is also very exciting.

In addition to cheating, are you taking medicine?

I haven't read this book yet, so I read the introduction. It should have been finished, but he said again: Isn't this a plug-in? It's a cool article I want to read. Is this a cool article?

Why is your upgrade just like playing? ?

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I've ordered all of your last book, and I'm slowly savoring this one

How many chapters will Tiangang Faxiang last?