You Said You Were Training in Martial Arts, So How Did You Create a Golden Body Avatar?

After reading Chapter 2, to be honest, in this case, you should not write anything about fighting for the human race. You are a time traveler, and your sense of belonging to this world is not that strong. And your parents are martyrs, and the subsidy is only enough to attend an ordinary college. When you entered the martial arts class in the third year of high school, you were given a perfunctory and symbolic opportunity to enter the martial arts class. You were not even given a chance in the early stage. , The teacher also has all kinds of contempt for the students, not all of which can be said to be contempt, but simply ignoring, treating the people at the bottom like nothing. If there is a cult, in this case, there should be many people participating, especially the protagonist, whose parents are martyrs. You must not write anything about fighting bloody battles for the human race later on. It will move you and disgust the readers.

In this case, it would be awesome if the human race was not wiped out.

Based on the background written by the author, it is reasonable to have a world-destroying sect and rape half of the people.

First, objectively speaking, the author's writing is adequate, maybe not as good as a master, but it's not bad either. Second, I was not unhappy after reading Chapter 37. Let's not talk about the previous plots. Liu in the core still has enough resources for 6 months and has entered the lucky period, while the protagonist has arrived in two months. As a person with a background, I can know the talent of pig's feet after a little investigation. So how did she say what's not as good as pig's feet? Third, the reason why I can't help myself here is because the author has said before that the abandoned Zhao is nothing, it is the last time of this kind of plot. As a result, the Zhila conflict is forced here again Fourth, based on the first point, based on the general condemnation of this extremely unreasonable system and status quo in the comment area, I suggest the author to read the plot of the book by Tomato and other great gods. It is not only about internal fighting that can continue. Simply getting stronger and increasing the value of happiness can also make people want to stop. Fifth, internal fighting can exist, but please pay attention to the amount and frequency of description. It can be suppressed, but it is recommended not to describe too much about the protagonist's grievance. At least I skip watching these bloody plots now, which does not affect the plot at all, and there is less frustration and irritability. Otherwise, to be honest, I can't watch it. Chapter 37, if this book was still a seedling, I would have definitely brushed it off and wouldn't have read it. I'm more bored reading the book than reality. What a waste of time.

I can only say one thing, if there is a big enemy who cannot cooperate with each other under the current situation, or if there is still so much bullying internally, then it is impossible to defeat the enemy in this situation, because in this case, the people at the bottom will betray their own race for themselves. After all, their own race does not consider themselves, so why should I think about them?

After reading Chapter 14, this novel shows the dark side of society nakedly. Parents and martyrs can only survive with food and clothing. School quotas are all determined by default. Teachers who are role models target everyone for their own interests. It is too difficult 😭

Conflict creation is too old, and it's quite funny. However, since the author is a new author, I hope he will keep writing. Even if he writes a million words, he is an author who is guaranteed to complete the book. Besides, the character creation is not bad, and he will definitely get better and better as he writes!

I came in after reading the introduction of the title, but ended up reading the free chapter and scrolling through the subsequent title. Where is your martial arts sublimation function? Why did it become an ordinary experience value plug-in? Why do you have some talents and skills that are different from ordinary people? Why upgrade violently? According to the settings in the introduction and the novel, special talents and skills are only available at full level. As a result, when the skill reaches the full level, it is already invincible in the current map. It is basically There is no need for the talents and skills provided by plug-ins. What settings do you have? Give the protagonist some skills that can be maxed out by just practicing, and some extraordinary talents and skills from plug-ins. Your title and introduction are completely disconnected from the content. It is already off topic, isn't it? Author, when are you going to give the protagonist the skills in the introduction? How come you have to practice each skill layer by layer?

After reading part of it, I thought that with such a dark background, either Goldfinger would be so powerful that he would break the shackles and flip the table to become a rebel. Either the ideal of world harmony is lofty. Don't hold it in for a long time and then just pretend to be slapped in the face. The oppression of the world has not been avenged, and the bottom class has not changed.

I feel like I have been suppressed all the time, and then I was suppressed again after I turned around. I really accepted it. I have always been a pig 🙂. I may change it later, but when I saw that I was accepted by the leader as a disciple and suppressed again, I couldn't stand it anymore. Is it really that bad? 🙂