Hogwarts: a Witch's Educational Handbook

The problem is that I personally am not very interested in the occasional dialogue in the original novel. Regardless of the word count, it feels quite fragmented to me, and I can clearly feel the difference. The good thing is that it is quite interesting to look at the brainstorming, the author is also online, and the writing style is quite good.

The flying phoenix and the bat are gone, leaving only the flightless cat, and today, the flightless cat also went to heaven.

Regarding wizard education, a young wizard is a wizard, but an adult wizard is not a wizard? I think they also need education. I suggest adding Umbridge to the female protagonist column. I think it will work!

The author must have gone ashore. Are there any works that you can recall when he went to sea before?

Luna

This writing style doesn't look like a newcomer's. What kind of extraterrestrial demon is this? Reincarnation in dirty soil? 😡😡

The second volume starts to go downhill a bit, what about the education of witches, and then pure love? Or did someone else write the second volume? The protagonist is like a little virgin, timid. In addition, it is necessary for Hermione's daughter to travel through time to help. What does the protagonist eat? The style is completely different from the previous one. Before, he took the initiative to educate Tonks. When we get along with each other later, it is like the first time. The system also seems to have disappeared. More importantly, the second volume of Sirius is all written from other people's perspectives. If I want to read this, it is better to read the original work.

Harry is the same as Harry, and he trains Bella in the beginning. This scene is very coquettish, and the car is very enjoyable to drive. It's just that the number of words is too short. Is the big pen name tonight a tribute to the one with the umbrella?

I'm convinced. What are you writing at the end of the first volume and the beginning of the second volume? The most annoying thing is that people with no skills insist on making time travel. It's not good at writing. If you skip it, you won't be able to follow the plot. If you don't skip it, you'll have to read history.

Hermione Granger

Luna Lovegood

Susan Bones

Nymphadora Tonks

I can't understand the plot recently. What's going on? Suddenly the wand incident, and then back to the past.

In fact, what I want to see more is the plot where the protagonist has "friendly exchanges" with students while teaching. If you really want to write some original content, you can also choose to write it during the students' vacation time. Just like the title of your book, rather than these weird process developments now...

Daphne

I seem to have played this type of game, called Training Hermione, a game cracked by Leng Yue White Fox.

Is there a change of character later on? Why does it not match the previous article at all?

The big guys in the game recommend some Harry Potter harem fics, the ones that get the most. Why do all the starting points have no heroine and only one heroine 😭? It's so hard to find a harem for this book.

It's a lot of crap. Time travel is bad enough. The author is also a god if he came up with the idea of ​​having the protagonist pretend to be a stranger to defile the heroine.

I would like to ask if there was no follow-up to the protagonist's backdoor development of Hermione's stuck water pipe in the Ministry of Magic? It's not that Hermione was looking for a future protagonist to replace her, but it seemed like nothing happened in the end?

What's the name of the new book? I remember pushing it before the end. It was placed under the title "Fat", but I can't find it.

Serve it quickly

Selena was not found in the book

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I was given two monthly passes. What is the VIP group number?

Group 4 has been harmonized, what should I do?