A Clan's Rise: Starting with Daily Intelligence

There are all positive reviews and no negative reviews. It seems that as long as there are negative reviews, they will be deleted. Those who give positive reviews are all machines. If I comment like this, it will also be deleted. I don't know how long it will be kept. If you are deleted and unable to comment, you will be permanently banned.

The villains are the ones who are destined to be the villains. The Li family, the Zhang family, and the Liu family are all destined to have their destiny. They are constantly encountering various rare treasures and adventures. Even if they are in danger, they can still escape death. The protagonist's family is quite unlucky. Even if the chance is robbed, the family members are also unlucky. They will die when they encounter any danger. The protagonist has a lot of opportunities and exchanges of information to get promoted to the foundation building. The Liu family and the Lei family get the opportunity to be promoted.

It feels like the author wanted to write a group portrait. The result is that the protagonist has too many roles and the protagonist has accelerated his cultivation. He has been in seclusion for a few years. There are many supporting characters who are very talented. There are more scenes at the beginning. There is no description later. His children do not recognize him. For example, Fu Molan, the intelligence said that he will become a Yuanying in 200 years, so he should be adopted by a Qi training family. As a result, the protagonist cuts off his beard. After so many years, it is still a foundation in the protagonist's family. With these resources, it is difficult for people to believe that he can become a Yuanying in 200 years. Doesn't this delay others? 😳😳😳😳😳

Don't let Shangguan Hongyu down. Don't have a single female protagonist in family stories.

If the Nanman invades, can't you just kill them?

I really don't know what's the point of writing about a family cultivating immortality? People's hearts are selfish, and the family's cultivation of immortality is purely to cultivate enemies for themselves. Are people from the same family worth cultivating? No, only a handful of people deserve it. Even if these very few people become successful in cultivation, they will definitely fight among themselves when there is a conflict of interest! He also selflessly dedicates himself to the family, what are you thinking about?

The first 50 chapters are really encouraging to quit. The author should fix them when he has time. I have already made four or five small mistakes. There is no need to forcefully create conflicts, although you can solve them quite quickly. The first 50 chapters are all trying to persuade people to quit. How many people will stay? Look at how hard you have written 5 million words. The first 50,000 words have a higher weight than the last 5 million words.

The writing of the heroine is too cliché and the plot and details are average. Please write as little as possible.

An abstract family, how can a family be formed with just these few resources? People are much better than this kind of family when it comes to chance. It's outrageous. If you have a huge world to enjoy and have a lot of things, it's okay to say that the king does not see the king. It's okay to have few means and a low rank. A group of people with few foundations worthy of being called a family?

After doing the math, I found that this relationship lasted seven years, so that was the seven-year itch. I also saw Da Da talk about the plot of the novel and movie. Could it be that your fiancé slept with your best friend? If it's just a piaochang, let's go through it. Seven years is not easy. They should be family members. They have gotten along with each other, and they have been together since junior high school. They should all be first loves. Childhood sweethearts are so rare. They are both engaged. It means that the men have no other problems and feel that they still need to give each other another chance.