Mystery: Sequence Wars

Well, it looks good, and the logic is very clear, unlike other mysterious fics, very nice👍👍👍

Protagonist: A model that is more stormy than Master Biro, has a player mentality than Russell, is as "favored" as Xiao Ke, and has a path to death that is bigger than Source Castle.

I can't stand other mysterious fanfics because of the recklessness and stupidity of the protagonists, but this one is different. It's definitely played by people playing Storm. This logic is very reasonable.

Isn't this a mysterious fanfic? The wonderful thing about the mystery is that it is written with flesh and blood, and the supporting characters all have emotions, just like a real world. This is also the basis for the existence of fan fiction. What then? Have you flattened this real world and turned it into a game? Have you turned all living characters into NPCs? How should I read this book? cannot understand

That Elud looks very inexplicable, which greatly affects the perception. The events that the protagonist encounters are all arranged by people. No matter what identity Elud is, it is very boring to look at it this way.

Now that I have read Chapter 9 of Volume 2, I would like to share my current suggestions. Contains spoilers, read with caution. The first point is that the protagonist's transformation is not complete. Generally speaking, if you want to read a transformation story, the protagonist will basically change his gender directly, using his original appearance to become the opposite sex, and then give him a name. As for the protagonist of this book, I prefer to call it a gender transformation. Of course, I can also predict that the author will also completely transform in the future. It just gives me the feeling of a person in a leather suit at this stage. Of course, this is not the point, the point is the second. The second point is that most of the protagonist's creation remains in description and is not reflected in actual events. For example, the protagonist has always been described as a skip player, a reckless and direct player, and a very strong PVP player. However, many specific plot performances only reflect the protagonist's recklessness and lack of understanding of the plot, and do not reflect how powerful he is in PVP. How to reflect the performance of pvp, there are generally three ways: 1. The lower level defeats the upper level; 2. Invincible at the same level; 3. Crush the lower level. The first item may not happen every time, but the second and third items must happen every time. The only one with better performance in this book is Killing Mrs. Sharon. Let me talk about the problems in other pvp scenarios: 1. Kill the serial killer. Based on the main character's screen at that time, and with a sneak attack, he should have taken the lead and then killed him very quickly. He shouldn't have had anyone else do the follow-up. 2. Kill Lancelot. The protagonist only identifies his identity after hearing the voice, and Lancelot does not take the initiative to fight back, and then kills him. A better description is that the protagonist discovers his identity in advance → Lancelot pretends to be innocent → Lancelot realizes that he cannot pretend anymore → Lancelot fights back → The counterattack is ineffective → The protagonist still crushes and kills him. This will further give readers a feeling of "the protagonist has delicate fighting intuition and is usually reckless, but he is very powerful as long as he gets into a fight." 3. Get away from the pursuit of demigods. According to the configuration of the protagonist at the time, this was originally a perfect opportunity to arrange a "down to defeat the upper", but the protagonist not only broke through the opponent's defense when the opponent was seriously let down, but also ran away. What I mean by "under to defeat" is not to kill, but to destroy the opponent's blocking ability, and then leave in style. What I'm talking about is just that the plot details are different, the ending is the same, but the perception given to the readers is very different. These are all based on the premise that the author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is a "pvp master". I guess the author may want to create a contrast through "reckless plot + fighting strongman", but at present, the image of skip player is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, but the performance of high pvp player is average. There is no contrast, but the perception has become worse. Of course, what I said may not be right, they are all my subjective feelings. This book is already very well written among the mysterious reprints. It is really amazing. Come on, author, please update more.

To be honest, it's pretty good so far. Although the protagonist and his system are a bit out of character, it's more like a system novel than amber flow, but it doesn't have the weird feeling of writing a fan system novel - you have the original work and you still need the system to not believe in your own writing power or how much you don't believe in the ability of the protagonist? In other respects, given that the number of words is too small and nothing can be seen, it is a good idea to add your own original content through the so-called gamification mystery. The relationship and conflicts between the protagonist and all parties have not yet reached the breaking point, so it is impossible to see whether the author is really capable of controlling his own setting and plot. Finally, regarding the issue of sexual transformation, the path to death obviously has no corresponding elements. I think the possibility is probably an item similar to the witch's gloves, which means temporary transformation. If this is really the case, I guess it is an unflattering idea for both sides, whether it is the traditional male protagonist audience or the sexual Fans of the book will not rate this point higher than "flaw". In other words, it is a mistake on both sides that depends on your writing style. If you are a master of online writing, then it will not make your readers give up the book, but just endure the discomfort. If your writing style happens to be not very good, then it will become a breaking point. As a person who has changed from reading male protagonists to transformation, I only read this book because it is confirmed that he is single. On this basis, my attitude is: it is good to have a permanent transformation; if not, forget it, I don't have to endure the mentally retarded emotional lines of the male protagonist to affect the plot. As for when to change, I personally don't care. I have read so many books. Even if you write a million words and then change, it is just a special case to me. The question is, is your novel worth the million words I have to wait for? If you can use your own words to show your readers your level of proficiency and the protagonist's charming character, of course I would be more willing to tell a story that the protagonist will experience after the transformation, which is more to my liking. In addition, I don't know who the poisonous point of the author's heart is for. Based on my guess about Qidian's readership, readers of orthodox male protagonist novels will not accept a gender change for any second, and they probably will not accept being single. They will not regard this as a poisonous point, because they will leave after knowing this plot and will not read it at all. The audience of this novel is either single or transformed, so from my standpoint, the advice I can give is: change as soon as possible.

I say that your forced marriage essay, which you did not hesitate to stop updating, is not as good as this book. Do you understand?

Look, if you write a change order that smells like a change of marriage, some so-called CP clowns will appear.

I have read nearly half of this book. My understanding of the protagonist is that he has no IQ and no fighting IQ. I used to play Storm Path a lot, but now all the stupid kids have become smarter. This story tells us that we must not come to Storm Path as it will lower the intelligence of the baby 🙂

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I have read more than 200 chapters so far, and the biggest problem is something that is often mentioned in the posts. The protagonist is constantly being manipulated and can only be incompetent and furious. Especially because Zangwill could kill but failed to kill him. The deus ex machina made him run away. This made the protagonist just a clown no matter how strong he was at the same level, and he continued to be a clown for at least 200 chapters.

Who would have known this was a secret fanfic just by looking at the introduction? Give you a punch 👊

It's been a long time since I read this book, so I'll give you a few words. Don't belittle yourself in the author's words. We have bought and read so many paid chapters. Those who thought it was not good left long ago. Those who are left to read your words at least think that this book has merits. There is no need to say this. In the final analysis, your disparagement of your own work is also a disparagement of the perspective of us readers who see it now. And I am still relatively confident in my own vision. I have also written novels, and I can probably understand the mentality of "wanting to tell readers the author's own mental journey in the words of the author." However, based on my experience as a reader, all the author actually needs to do is to serve the work, just like the previous dish. There is no need to tell the diners how to cook each dish, because they, we, only care about whether the food is delicious or not. But the current situation is that when we diners who have eaten until now think it tastes good, you have to tell us that this dish is not done well here, and it is not done well there. The process is not followed here, and there is not enough salt there. Is this necessary? And by the way, the author said that this kind of thing will destroy the reader's immersion no matter what he writes. Write according to your own ideas, those who are dissatisfied will always be loud. I haven't read the comment section of this book for a long time, but I guess it is just the same old routine of the transformation book: first, the weak character who asks why he doesn't go to the female channel, then the white puffer fish whose nature is similar to the audience of the harem male protagonist, and then the transformation marriage who is suppressed by the first two and dare not speak loudly but secretly makes small tricks and suggestions to bring in private goods. It's normal that you don't dare to read this kind of comment section. I'm also afraid that if you read it for too long, your IQ will be lowered. Whether you prefer to believe these roadside grumblers who don't even buy a paid chapter or those of us who don't talk much about full subscriptions, it's up to you to judge for yourself. Ha, but the premise is that you can really see this comment. After all, this is also posted in the comment area.

The first sixty chapters were pretty good. After the sex change in chapter sixty, the protagonist's various thoughts and emotions changed inexplicably. The setting was actually interesting, but the writing was really unacceptable. He died of poison and left.

The protagonist is now pushed into a helpless situation where she is almost alone and has a broken heart. I still hope she can come out on her own. Don't do anything. Klein makes a flash appearance and acknowledges Rachel. Rachel is so moved that her good feelings surge.

If you want to see the male protagonist (female protagonist) being played with, it's best to use tentacles (and get pregnant), without emotional factors, it will definitely be super interesting 🤓

If the protagonist goes on like this, it is exactly in line with the accommodation method of the City of Disaster. Yin and Yang are harmonious, disasters accompany each other, and it's still early. The Witch and the Red Priest both have a chance. Adam, Xiao Ke, and the Goddess can help kill Chick. I heard that the city of disaster is an endless sea of ​​blood. In the past, was it the ancestor of Styx or the king of Asura 😁

Yes, I hope that the protagonist's witch path will be followed to the end and that he will do it himself after being the original witch. Many witch path novels have been discontinued.

Among all the mysterious novels I have seen, this is the most enjoyable, refreshing and immersive episode. There are no complicated details, no love or hatred, and the identity of the player brings a new and different experience to the plot development of the mysterious novel.

Brother, if it weren't for you, you should change your marriage, otherwise this would be too weird. Look, the position of the protagonist can't be moved up or down.

The author said that this book was originally about marriage and then changed to marriage. I personally think that the biggest point of disagreement is that Klein did not tell Rachel about his identity as a Fool after he and Rachel confirmed that they were time travellers. This incident most directly led to Lei's lack of trust and favorability of Ke, because Lei mentioned later that she hates hiding things. In fact, it is understandable. Ke is [Rachel]'s oldest and best friend in the world, but Ke is unwilling to tell Lei anything. In the early stage, Lei faced the issue of whether her previous life was false and Eleg's identity. In the later stage, she directly realized that she had been the Hades, and most of her friends became enemies, and her old friends (partners) did not treat her sincerely (the reputation of the Hades). Then Lei often changed paths, and even took the path of a witch. It would be crazy if she was not crazy. The author has also mentioned that the marriage change led to some abnormalities in the plot, and the biggest victim was Klein (not that he didn't taste the taste of a witch), because Klein was written in a somewhat fragmented and OOC way. Your sister Rachel saved Ke so many times and gave Ke so many resources, but Ke still didn't tell Lei the truth after learning that Lei was a time traveler. It was clearly written before that Ke owed Lei a favor, Ke trusted Lei very much, and Ke even had budding feelings for Lei, but it turned out that Ke wanted to hide it. And that time when Ai Liuge started a fight, it would have been outrageous to ask Lei directly what was going on and just think about it on his own. The same goes for the Great Plague. At that time, Ke didn't know how strong Lei was, but Ke just asked Lei to solve the Great Plague. Even though Ke knew that Lei might be in great danger, Ke was obviously the kind of person who would take everything on his own. You said that Katsuma regards Lei as a true best friend who can completely trust each other. Then why did you hide it from Lei again? This is very unKline. Anyway, half of Lei's current psychological problems are to blame on Ke. This Ke is exhausted 🙂

After two years of raising him, I started to slaughter The self-destructive tendency of the protagonist after he ascended the level is so heart-wrenching😋 Also, do you feel that the title and preface of the latest volume are amazing? Eight words and two periods can fill the feeling of depression But I still hope that the protagonist can have a good ending. I am too old to watch tragedy😭

The atmosphere in today's chapter has become strange again. Did the character's inner thoughts lead to the writing habits of another book? Let's take a look.

I hope I can at least finish the book! I've given you the monthly pass,

The narrative rhythm has been a bit light lately

Did the protagonist travel through the book or time travel?

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