Shared Talents: Please, Countless Versions of Me!

This is so offensive it's off-putting. It's the first time I've seen someone share the secrets of their myriad worlds with someone more intimately connected to them than their own avatars.

The plot was already messy, and then they added the "God's Space." The author is genuinely afraid that readers will get hooked on something.

There's a toxic element right from the start 😒

Seeing a purely Chinese name in Naruto feels incredibly out of place.

Aokiji already has Conqueror's Haki, so you can imagine how little the author understands the plot. What kind of fanfiction can a half-baked writer produce?

His debut was his peak; everything that followed was history.

Even an invincible novel can't be written properly...

What is this author thinking? It's all over the place, jumping from one topic to another. They can't write about battles, they can't write about romance, so they just write a rambling account of how to get stronger? People will read that. They can't write about romance but force it in; doesn't that just drive people away?

I can accept everything else, but when he encountered Yekura on the battlefield, he was still thinking about taking women while the two of them were fighting. Was he really that lustful?

Starting with One Piece, you can tell the author is starting to drag things out, padded out the story excessively, the dialogue is disjointed and the pacing is slow, and the ending is rushed. You might want to keep it going for now and see how it goes.