Naruto: The Yellow Flash

The concept of the Eight Colors of Konoha is so outdated; it's from several years ago.

Water Gate

Minato is a ninja who thinks three steps ahead before acting, similar to Itachi. After going to Boruto, his actions in the Fourth Shinobi World War were completely out of character. Think about it: in the original manga, Minato said he was willing to die for his son. Now, watching Naruto die, if you truly love your wife, would you be unmoved by the death of the fruit of your love?

Speaking of which, the "Eight Colors of Konoha" is fan fiction, right? And in the story, Minato hadn't yet earned the title of Yellow Flash, and Might Dai was still just a genin. I think Might Dai invented the Eight Gates, otherwise he wouldn't have been a genin before he died, and Madara only learned about the Eight Gates from Might Dai's defeat of the Seven Espada of the Mist.

When did Nawaki acquire Wood Release?

To be honest, when writing Naruto fanfiction, don't change the established settings, especially the events before Naruto's birth. Although the original anime didn't describe them much, giving a lot of room for creativity, you still have to be careful that any secondary settings don't contradict the original anime. Actually, the novels I'm currently reading, like Naruto: I Can Give My Disciples a Cheat Code, are pretty good, but there aren't enough of them. I'll add more later.

The writing isn't bad, but some settings aren't from the original work, which makes it a bit jarring and difficult to immerse oneself in the story.

I suggest the author watch more anime before writing a novel; it feels too awkward.

Infrequent updates and lackluster content; I really don't want to subscribe anymore.

Honestly, the time-travel plot is really uninteresting. I'm not subscribing yet; I'll wait until you finish writing this part. I've been burned by other authors before. I want to play it safe and wait a bit before reading further.