I Became Enlightened Through All the Tribulations in the Heavens

A thousand people went into the mountain to surround and suppress the protagonist. More than 50% of the enemy's soldiers were killed, but they still refused to break up. After fighting again, they managed to escape completely. There were still 500 people left after coming out of the mountain. What kind of iron discipline is this, what kind of fearless spirit is this? In order to make Shangguan rich, these soldiers even risked their lives. Their own trivial lives are definitely not as important as Shangguan's wealth. (￢_￢)

I'm sorry, it's you, the old Taoist thief again! Why do I feel that the beginning of this book is so familiar? In every book, people can't stop reading the first half, but the second half is just like chewing wax.

As you write, it's better to directly increase the composition of gunpowder. For example, although you don't know the proportion, but you know the specific composition, you will try the proportion bit by bit. Then use the ballista and trebuchet to match the elite explosives, no matter how powerful they are. Facing the front attack and the rear being constantly bombed, they will collapse. This is only for infantry, but best for cavalry. There is no other way than to make cavalrymen who are not trained with bombs. The horses will be frightened and run away when faced with the explosion. In fact, according to the development of the protagonist, the best way to deal with the disease is to build an industrial steam engine, similar to the constantly moving fortress in the cartoon, and rely on the temperature of the steam to survive the cold winter of the grassland.

This is too fake. The earth is billions of years old. You will reopen the world in just a few hundred thousand years.

Brain Storage

There is a problem with the exercises arranged by the author for the protagonist. Sutras about becoming enlightened through tribulations, scriptures about experiencing tribulations and becoming enlightened. What you should practice is the way of tribulations or major tribulations. From small tribulations, the gods of the great road measure the tribulations. After experiencing catastrophes, understanding catastrophes, using catastrophes, and finally becoming the source of catastrophes, this includes everything including luck and tribulations, good luck and bad luck, rather than some Tai Chi Wuji.

Such a big hanging, such a crotch-stretching pig's trotters, learn about energy conversion, learn about industrial starch

Isn't it unhealthy for the protagonist not to have a child to inherit the throne?

Just looking at the cover introduction, I feel that the content of this book may not be interesting!

This ancient world is not even a fraction of the age of the earth. We can't afford to lose this person.

This introduction is written in such a high-level way, look at the results!

Take a quick look around. You don't know what you wrote

Forgetting your loyalty for small profits, your portrayal of the protagonist is too useless, withdrawn

The creativity is there, but the writing is so bad that it affects the reading experience. Brother, if it doesn't work, just use AI to polish it, or read more books. This writing is really eye-catching.

The first story of the Three Kingdoms in the world. Exactly the same as this one. (I am not an ant in the Three Kingdoms).

That's okay. The further you go, the more you learn about spiritual practice. The main reason for reading novels is to read the plot. Very few people will read them when they keep talking about this spiritual practice.

Infinite Heavenly Lord? He is a liar as soon as he opens his mouth, and only liars are the Infinite Gods. The serious ones all talk about the immeasurable blessings or the three immeasurables, or the Immeasurable Blessings, compassion, etc.

What is the main theme of your good title? Let's just write about taking drugs and killing monsters, upgrading, what's the first and second levels of Qi training, what's foundation building, it's just a group of urban people with special powers attached to them.

Many colleagues' novels written by Yang Shen are not good, and they all died in Yang Shen.

To be honest, this Yuanhui is a bit low 🙂

The protagonist of the first world, Goldfinger, is a fragment of the main god. Why did the golden finger disappear later?

This time is too short. I suggest you take a look at Honghuang Xuanwu. It costs a few hundred yuan to travel there.

Is this the evil-repelling sword manual practiced by the protagonist? That's fine. You can just write it from the evil-repelling sword manual to Taishang Wangqing.

The protagonist is 1.44 Meters tall?

You are not suitable for writing a book, your writing skills are too poor