Reincarnation in the World of Heavens

I feel like the writing is pretty good. In fact, it's fine as long as it stays in the ordinary world. If it slowly turns into a fantasy world, I feel like it's easy to collapse. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

There is indeed something wrong with this book. If you write a cool article, be thorough. If you don't write a cool article, just be realistic. If you are realistic in a cool article, the consequences will be to make people angry, and the protagonist has no IQ at all. There are spies among the bandits. You should take some action at least. Should you kill some to scare the monkeys, or let them supervise each other, and kill them all if there is a problem in the group. You have not taken any action at all. Can you blame others for constantly betraying you? Reading novels should bring happiness, rather than making the reader angry and unable to vent. No wonder I can't sign the contract. I have written so many novels and I still don't know the needs of readers.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, why haven't I signed a contract yet?