My Senior Brother Is so Treacherous

It's too watery, and there are too many private goods. It's not worth spending money to see.

Set in the prehistoric world after the Great Catastrophe of the Gods as the background, the protagonist is Wen Zhong's son who promotes the revival of Jiejiao as the main line. The author incorporates many novel ideas into the traditional prehistoric fairy tale setting, such as the Ultron Robot Legion, the fusion of science fiction elements such as the Demon God General's Forced Breeding Armor, giving the plot a The romance brings a lot of freshness, and the protagonist is very individual and has a very flexible moral bottom line. He rationalizes all kinds of fallacies and heresies, making the overall reading rhythm relaxed and humorous. For those who are not too pursuing fairy tales and like innovation, this book is worth reading.

Not enough, not enough at all.

Sudden ending

Author, I'd better write Infinite Streaming next time. I miss the Lord God Investigator so much. It's so good. Even if you don't want to read any dungeon, you can jump to the next dungeon and continue reading. I couldn't stand this book until halfway through, and couldn't even pick it up.

I have been ordering this book, and no matter how hard it is, I will enjoy it. But look at it. Chapter 1214 was definitely completed by AI. You haven't checked the repeated plot yet!

It's the part where the protagonist meets Rick. Since Rick is so powerful, he should figure out how to deal with the system. Even if it is deduced based on the fear of being played by Rick as an experimental subject, at least the time of the endless hell experience should be cracked. But the experience of endless hell is the driving force behind the current protagonist's story. I hope the author can edit it well and plug this loophole, such as: Rick is helpless against the system and so on.

When Luo Feng returned, he found that the Investigator Alliance was secretive and silent. He had no choice but to search for the entrance to the ancient world closest to him and use the incarnation system to guide potential investigators to establish the Avengers Alliance. 😏

He'er went down the mountain and wandered around in a big city in Sichuan. Suddenly he saw a beautiful carriage on the roadside. He'er saw that the carriage was exquisitely made, so he reached out and touched it. Unexpectedly, an old lady suddenly appeared and cursed at He'er: "You bitch, you will be a bitch and low-class for the rest of your life! How dare you touch my car! You must pay me ten thousand taels of silver." Son! My son is the governor! Just wait, I will call someone to arrest you!" After a while, the old lady called a group of government officials, and some of them surrounded the carriage, and the remaining government officials were about to arrest He'er! The old lady shouted arrogantly: "Guard my carriage and arrest that bitch!" He'er was so angry that he laughed and said: "You are really lawless and ridiculous. , You bully the common people like this in broad daylight! Today I will do justice to God!" After saying that, Heer used his flying sword to chop off the heads of all the government officials and broke the old lady's neck with his own hands! Later, He'er rushed to the governor's mansion and killed all the governor's family!

To be honest, it's better to go back to writing Infinite Stream. Your writing style is not suitable for writing in a fixed world. If you don't reset the plot bugs through Infinite Stream map, it will be difficult to get far. Don't worry about the problem of few recommendations for Infinite Stream. First, build up your fans again and then consider this. I haven't written a book in so many years. If I hadn't searched for your pen name on a whim, I would have almost forgotten about you.

The success of Lord God Investigator is the author's very successful integration of various elements. As for this book, to be honest, I thought it was very low at first glance. Infinite flow novels about cultivating immortals in the prehistoric world are usually the finale, because the level of immortals is too high. When I compare it, one word pops up in my mind, low. The protagonist of this book looks like an unpleasant profiteer, and the modern elements are not well integrated with the prehistoric fairy tale, which looks very abrupt. My great god, visually check the rhythm of rushing into the street 😅

At least the basic logic must be consistent. ,,. The protagonist said that because Junior Sister Jindan's physical body was too strong, she would pinch him to death. So no sex. . . But this world is obviously in love with men and monsters, how does Xu Xian do it? ? ? ? It doesn't matter if you use this meme randomly, at least it can't be inconsistent. Speechless. . .

The main focus of the novel is plot. The reason why the later period of Lord God Investigator is not as exciting as the early stage is because there are too many preaching words. It is obviously all nonsense. Just a little bit of nonsense is enough. Everything still has to serve the plot.

The AI ​​picture I posted was just like the carvings on 💩, and I was so proud of it that I actually vomited.

The author can't escape and has reached a dead end. Now except for water, conspiracy theories and the next three roads, there is no other way to solve the problem. I think the eunuch can end up with dignity sooner rather than later, otherwise, I'm afraid Uemoto's reputation will be completely lost.

Goodbye everyone, I have abandoned the book because the author will change later

Author, I've been waiting for you for so long, and you just come back and write about the boring setting routine and world view of the Great Immortal Heroes? ! ! I really don't even have the energy to click and read a chapter...

Just look at the catalog and you will know. People add water to the book, and you add it to it, but someone still asks if it can be eaten? Some people ate it and lied to others that they could eat it. It's so interesting to see the discussion forum now, and I don't have to spend any money.

The demise of Jiejiao was self-inflicted. They all accepted a bunch of shit. The second and third generations of disciples were either cannibals or they liked to kill indiscriminately. They did all the evil things. They had no morals at all. It is not normal to die.

The protagonist actually has only one enemy, and that's the system. , It has always been the system that tortured the protagonist, throwing him into endless hell, various threats, and occasionally giving him a little sweetness to love him. This is a proper deep hatred. Others are just normal struggles. The protagonist really only wants to take revenge on others and is a bit speechless. Is this being stamped by systemic thinking?

You are probably using Ai Shuiwen to defraud Brother Quan Ding of some money. I didn't want to expose you. But with the shit you're writing right now, you're just insulting my intelligence.

In a room in the Yuxu Palace beyond the Thirty-three Outer Heavens, Yuanshi Tianzun thought with a dark face: Nüwa, that bitch, actually had an affair with Tongtian, saying that Junior Brother Tongtian's Jiejiao Youjiao Wulei was kind to the demon clan, so he agreed with her and gave birth to a child. Nüwa, this bitchy maid, just rejected me back then, but turned around and threw herself into the arms of Tongtian. She was really shameless. He actually gave birth to a child for Tong Tian, ​​which really pissed me off! When Yuanshi Tianzun thought of this, he took out his mobile phone and dialed Guanyin Bodhisattva: "Hey Cihang, am I still your boss?" Guanyin: "Boss! Once a boss, always a boss! You will always be my boss!" Yuanshi Tianzun : "Well, please contact me the happy Buddha and ask him to find someone to deal with a little trouble for me in the mortal world~~Hmm~~Yes~~Use his unique way to deal with it" Guanyin: "No problem, the boss will take care of me, I promise to handle it beautifully for you, just take care of it."

Ah Niu needs to add some characters from the multiverse The contrast of some homogeneous characters, such as Qing'er from the Fairy Sword being crossed by the cold Snake Queen. Looking at the snake spirit taking down the scumbag wizard King, there is a sense of dislocation and contrast between the old coin swordsman. The same name but different character connotations are misaligned and contrasted with the image in the rumors. If you write about the multiverse, you will inevitably write about war. After all, there are frictions and disputes between countries for the sake of resource interests. There are too many story worlds derived from the ancient times, including Journey to the West, Lotus Lantern, Later Journey to the West, and God of War. I don't know if I will write about it.

I just want to ask, can I still write about the subject matter of the previous book? I have been reading online articles for more than ten years. My writing skills are better than yours, and my grades are better than yours. There are many, but I like you. My favorite online book is your "Investigator of the Lord God". The red background color does not change even when you are laughing and scolding. I can't put it down. I understand you too, really. For you, writing may be just a hobby or a pastime that arranges your life... Or even just a habit of thinking. Hey... I also know that artistic creation depends on inspiration and talent, and cannot be forced... It's just that I am also an ordinary person. I have frustrations, desires, and feelings, and I have to express it eventually... ... ... ... ... ... ... Finally, I hope you don't get entangled and just write whatever you want. Hold on, I won't forget you. Finally, please always stand on the side of the people and justice, thank you.

Wenrui had just endured the pain of hell once every seven days, and was lying in the cave like a dead dog, unwilling to move. Suddenly, the crane jumped into the house. Seeing that it was her, Wen Rui said angrily: "Senior sister, senior brother, I am too tired today, please come back another day." He'er's face turned red at first, then grabbed Wen Rui's shoulders and chirped: "Senior brother, I am not doing that today. Then, I picked up a strange cat demon outside. It seemed to be injured and a little too strange, so I put it at the entrance of the cave. Do you want to go and have a look?" Wen Rui said weakly without even raising his eyelids: "It's just a cat demon, what's the fuss about? , There are many of them in your school." "Senior brother, this cat demon is indeed too strange! It has no hair, is covered in blue skin, has a short body, a huge head, a round red nose, and a bell tied around its neck~~~" Hearing this, Wen Rui fell off the bed with a thump, and spent a long time Afterwards, Wen Rui, who had fallen badly, said tremblingly; "It~~~doesn't it have ears yet?" "Oh, senior brother, yes, how did you know it doesn't have ears?!" Hearing this, Wen Rui felt that the whole world was not good. . . . . Not continued until finished

I have subscribed so far, and I really want to curse. Author, have you ever used the backdoor called Chengdu Macho Man? That leaking water is everywhere! I can understand and accept that I have no inspiration, or I can't think of the follow-up plot for the time being. But if you put this aside, are you going to write another twenty chapters about the Riddler's encounter with Yun Zhongzi coming down the mountain? This pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot was originally very enjoyable, but now it's so disgusting that you're dragging it down.

My evaluation is that it is better not to write a book. It is really late now and I am not safe.

I have ordered more than 700 chapters, but I can only say that it is too watery. At that time, I was still chasing updates. Show me that I am powerless. The author should return to the main god investigator type. The long script still needs polishing.

In modern times, in a county town, at night, there is a fairly lively night market area, with many open-air barbecues in operation. He'er looked at all this with wide eyes and thought to himself: "Is this the world of Senior Brother Wen? It's so bizarre, but there are many new things." While He'er was looking around curiously, a girl's cry suddenly came from a nearby barbecue stall: "He pulled my clothes "Ooooh~~~Don't hit my dad!" He'er heard the sound and looked over. The girl who was crying was a girl who was only ten years old at most. A group of men were beating a man who was lying motionless on the ground. The girl was crying and howling to stop the group of men from continuing to beat the man on the ground! He'er understood what was going on as soon as he saw it, and he was furious. He drew out his sword and teleported over to chop off the leading man's head! After the head of the leading man fell to the ground, people around him were shocked. The man and his companions shouted tremblingly: "Where are you from? You killed the county magistrate's son! You are finished! He just lost his moral character after drinking, and his crime is not worthy of death!" He'er listened. He laughed angrily: "You molested a ten-year-old girl in broad daylight and beat her father to coma, but you said that you "lost your morals after drinking"?! You are so stupid and incompetent, confusing right and wrong, and confusing right and wrong. What are you still doing!" After that, He'er raised his sword and chopped off the head of this dog-legged man!

After the battle, He'er followed Senior Brother Wen back to the cave. When he thought that he had doubted Senior Brother Wen during the fierce battle with the bald man, He'er blushed and felt ashamed. When He'er remembered that the magic weapon given to him by Senior Brother Wen was so sharp, He'er felt extremely grateful to Senior Brother Wen. He'er was thinking about how to repay Senior Brother Wen. He'er, who was so engrossed in his thoughts, suddenly bumped into Senior Brother Wen in front of him. "Senior Brother, why did you suddenly stop leaving?" Senior Brother Wen didn't answer, but suddenly turned around and hugged He'er! Being hugged tightly by his senior brother's arms, He'er felt like his whole body was numb. "Senior Brother~~No~~~We are going too fast~~~" To be continued