We Started Kissing, but After We Kissed, Did You Say We Were Familiar with Each Other?

The following passage is a reader's heartfelt words when he was browsing the book circle to discuss and reply to a person. It is also a heartfelt suggestion for your book: Alas, I don't know how you can see the ambiguity. I am speechless until now. The author refuses to give us any ambiguity, and even the dream used as a gimmick in the title of the book is pitiful. The protagonist actually got into trouble with the heroine's sister who she couldn't deal with. I already regretted chasing the book. When I came to Douyin, the first dozen chapters were really good, but after I met a certain Wen in the library, it started to go awry. The author is afraid that Riqing has written too much and treated the campus romance novel as a harem novel. He is afraid that he doesn't know that most of the readers of this kind of article have pure love views on love. It's weird that you dare to write this book like this and it's not pornographic. (Previous reply to discussion) Everyone is here for this heroine. You said that everything was laid out from the beginning, and the two of them knew each other in their dreams. The only thing missing is meeting in real life. Why did you have to make this meeting so difficult to write? You can just make up a story and use the reason to reveal the relationship between two people in their dreams. For this matter of taking the CET-4 exam, you can also design the heroine to be a talented person who also understands English! Even if you continue to have an affair with Wen Qu after this, after the relationship has progressed, you will have no problem, because the readers have already seen that the relationship they want with the heroine has progressed, and they can tolerate it. But you just refused. Instead, I wrote about Wen's feelings first. You have completely failed to understand the essence of this harem. Even if there are multiple heroines in a harem, she must come first, first served. Otherwise, how can you start a harem if the relationships between multiple girls are at loggerheads at the same time? What's more, this is a campus love story, how can it be written about a harem so easily? I initially thought that your original intention of writing this sister was to bring out the heroine's family relationship. I thought the same way at the beginning, so I was still chasing her at that time and I didn't say anything. But what you wrote later is completely off-base, right? Are you going too far? You devoted all the emotional description part of the article to a female deputy. Then are you trying to sell dog meat on sheep's head or what? People come in to read this book only after reading the title and introduction. What you write is equivalent to cutting off your own livelihood. You have offended all readers who are interested in the story in the title of the book. There must be a main line when writing. At least improve the relationship between the song and the song first, and then you can write about the female deputy. And looking at this book review, I am afraid that many people have already raised this question when you wrote the first dozens of chapters. The result is now. Have you changed the plot? I didn't see it anyway. In addition to the new chapter tonight, I can see that you have indeed written another ambiguous relationship with the heroine. But the poisonous points you wrote earlier have exhausted the readers' patience. While happily writing Wen's emotional line as the heroine, he also flirts with the heroine in dreams from time to time, so as to fool the readers, right? Well, you have two choices now. Or just cut the book and go back to write about it. Or just listen to the advice and round up the emotional line. Don't do this stupid thing where you have an affair with the heroine and then switch back to Wen's emotional line. Watch the readers' appetite, so you can make money from your words? Let me talk about what someone said in the book review, saying that he was tired of reading traditional campus love stories and wanted to read Shura. My opinion on this is that no matter how clichéd or traditional the story is, it is still a proper way to develop a relationship with the heroine. The details of the plot are also revealed in the writing process. The book really revolves around the heroine. But the writing of this book gives me the feeling that I can't tell who is the heroine Wen Songqu. Even if you set Wen as a villain, a character who interferes with the relationship between the male and female protagonists, you cannot overdo it. If you want to write about the Shura type, you can't write it like this. I haven't seen you write about the struggle between Wen and Qu on the surface? You Wen is simply the biggest flaw of this book. I don't see that he has any significant role in the plot of this book at all. Not only did he not assume the responsibility of Shura, but it also affected the relationship between the heroine and the hero. You are like writing a green tea with a golden body. The disgusting kind. I... Sigh I can only say that writing about green tea is a taboo in the school romance genre. Unless you can handle it well, treat her as a stepping stone for the male protagonist and the female protagonist to advance their relationship. I have a guess now. I feel like you wrote this. It has a vague sense of guessing the reader's feelings. Because I just switched to campus writing, I don't have much experience, so I want to write out the relationship between the protagonist and Wen and Qu first, and then decide which one to rewrite based on the readers' reaction, right? Then if you think so, I can only say that you are really stupid. Why don't you look at the title of your book? The most basic thing about a novel is that it cannot go off topic. The title of the book determines the reader's attitude and interest in reading the book. You chose this title, and you still want readers to buy it? Do you still want to make some extra money from this book? Then you might as well daydream. That's it. I am willing to spend so much coding time talking about a long story here with a book that has nothing to do with me. Because I think your writing is really good. If you can round out the plot, you can actually continue writing. You should write Ri Qing before reading the book review. The portrayal of emotions is really good. It's a pity that it's just the plot, tsk Hey I hope you can understand what the readers want to see after seeing it. You can't be too proud of your achievements, right? If you don't listen to readers' suggestions, you'll be ruining yourself. One last sentence. If you can't keep up your reputation, I'm afraid it will have an impact on your judgment. Then you can delete my post. As if I didn't say it. You can also continue writing like this. Just think I wasted this half hour. A waste of good intentions.

It's not the book's problem, it should be my own problem! Because I watched the video recommended by Bilibili and read the title of the book, I thought the setting of advancing the emotional line in the dream was quite interesting, but it turned out that there were two female protagonists, which felt like someone was trying to sell someone else's love! The background of the story is similar to the modern earth, which means that our realistic legal worldview rules still apply here. If you want to break this rule, unless there is a situation beyond the rules, let it be rationalized! For example, supernatural, a large number of achievements, breaking time, breaking away from the original world framework, etc. Otherwise, like this kind of urban romance, you will definitely face a situation of choosing one or the other in the end. You can hesitate in front of you. What should you do when you reach the critical point of marriage? You will definitely have to deal with it! If not handled well, the book may be ruined. There are conflicting settings, self-conflicting worldviews, and deliberately vague emotional lines. I thought I could eat this dish if I persisted, but it turned out that I was not suitable for eating this dish, so that's it! Maybe someone likes a dish, but at least it's not to my liking! 🙂🙂 (Personal opinion, please don't jump in the face, respect each other, leave it here)

Suggest changing the name to "School Beauty Looking for Mom"

I've given you all the monthly tickets, hurry up and update them.

Do college students really get together to see school beauties? I feel like watching ants moving together is more real than watching school beauties get together.

It's not a disappointment, I think Ri Qing wrote it well.

Welding a circuit board tin point is actually a miracle, aren't you embarrassed? ! ! !

Sure enough, I can't read novels related to my major. It seems so embarrassing!

Brother, come back and write Riqing, I can't do it without you {"TopicId":"1078804303240298496","TopicName":"The love game system is loaded"}

Does anyone know where the author is? Open a trumpet account, change sites, or stop writing?

Come back and write about Riqing😭 My favorite is Qingmei Maid😭

Is there any possibility of resurrection of this book?

It's been 7 months, brother, I've been waiting for you. If you have anything to say, it's fine. Just send me a message. Something can't really happen to the author.

It took me a while to read the latest chapter, but when I came back to look at it, I found that it had been sent 😅

I said something in my dream and immediately started running in both directions, but it turned out that neither of the college students had the brains. After seeing the latest 51 chapters, I am still playing with the ambiguity.

Today is June 26, and updates have been suspended for a whole year.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing is pretty good and seems to be somewhat skillful. But I still can't stand it. The author doesn't have the common sense to write it. The protagonist is an electronics major who spends all day welding boards, and then he almost turns soldering boards into an art form. Please, what do you study in electronics? Advanced mathematics, line algebra, probability theory, miscellaneous mathematics, physics, theoretical mechanics, miscellaneous physics, circuit basics, analogue electricity, high frequency, miscellaneous electronic theory, signals, signal processing, information theory, various information-related courses, C, Python, various programming languages, and there may also be microcontrollers, radars, antennas, satellites, and others. There are so many miscellaneous things, and most of them are theoretical knowledge. Soldering boards may be just a practical course, but the protagonist becomes a genius at soldering boards. In electronics, we just solder boards all day long. You can also do some circuit design simulation or something. The summary is that the writing is actually good, but the author writes too deeply about things that are shallowly understood, making the protagonist not like going to college, but like studying in a secondary vocational school, which is difficult to read.

It can't be said that the writing is not good, but it started with a dream date with the senior sister. Everyone instinctively thought that the senior sister was the heroine. However, by the end of the writing, the senior sister was almost hidden in the clouds. What the hell is the sister-in-law turning over and becoming the master?

Author, I advise you to change it to a single female protagonist 😆 1 With Jiang Shuci's character, he won't be bothered, he is very single-minded 2 As a girl, I don't like Wen Qiehui 3 Qu Yunshu has been dating him for a year, which is more suitable 4 If Jiang Shuci has to choose one, he will definitely choose Qu Yunshu

I don't understand. The protagonist has neither superpower nor strong entrepreneurial ability. Why can't it be enough to have two heroines and just write a single heroine? The image created by the second heroine is so good, and it directly overwhelms the image created in the early stage. Isn't it okay to have a pure love with a single heroine? It is also popular now. It has to be this kind of neither top nor bottom. It's uncomfortable to watch. It's really useless to write like this 🙂🙂

The more I wrote, the worse I got. After a year of nursing, I ended up dying.