Tokyo Dangerous Love Game

The biggest problem, let's not mention the plot for the moment, is 1. Useless description and deliberate characterization. 2 Nikkei now has a lot of mass production records, but I have to say that good Nikkei relies on plot, two-way emotional description of characters, etc. What you wrote is just a fake. First of all, the male protagonist has a huge problem. After reading it for a long time, I still can't see the use of adding some IQ. But you are not an intellectual type and I don't blame you. Why is the character description so unflattering? You can't even copy, but you say some incomprehensible words and the girl is attracted? A common problem among many Japanese male protagonists, and the biggest advantage of the character is that the character is sincere, and it is also the best character design to copy. I don't understand. Do you want to imitate the male protagonist of Gray Fruit after writing this? What else? As a result, I learned a lot of different things, which made me look at the male protagonist as strange as the unconscious ghost who created an empty shell. He is a conscious person, but his portrayal is too poor and strange. There are many other questions.

I stayed up all night and just watched Chu Lu. It's very well written. The characters have distinct characteristics. The two-dimensional dimension is combined with reality. It's much better than the traditional Asasi male protagonist. It's better than a book about sadistic protagonists that is also a love game. The feeling of being led around like a dog is too uncomfortable. Reading this can help me relax.

At first, I saw that the male protagonist's personality seemed to match his personality, so I watched it. But when I arrived at Hatsuluno, were I still the same person as the previous male protagonist? It's okay for you to write about a gangster lady or a beautiful girl, but you don't avoid the thunder at all. I didn't feel the excitement of the setting at all. It was just aggrieved. At the beginning, Hatsukano had no charm at all, it just made me sick. This comment is only for before chapter 50, I haven't seen it since. I wanted to see Riqing, but he fed me a bunch 😰.

This book is one of the rare ones in this type of book where the male protagonist is a little stronger. He must be constantly suppressed. There is no difference between having a hook and not having it. And it must be described in a comic style, otherwise it won't have enough words, right? But this book is fine. In the same genre, there are obviously strong and unbelievable characters, so it must be the kind of bodyguard that can hit the protagonist in order to show that kind of beauty, weakness and misery? No matter how great the class gap is, what is the difference between an individual being strong enough to be beheaded and a nuclear bomb? And. . Why. Never mind. This one can at least move. In addition, a certain book ranked first would only be satisfied if the main character was a dog.

The writing style is really good, the character of the protagonist is also good, the writing is free and brisk, and the characters are very distinct and distinctive. It is one of the few good romance novels.

This book feels similar to "The Game of Love", except that "The Game of Love" was finished too quickly. I hope this book can be longer!

The characterization of the underworld lady in this novel is really good, and the protagonist's coping style is also very good. Of course, I loaded up Kujo from the love game and I also like it very much 🙂. Come on, author, I'll support you by watching the video

Knowing that he can't control the male protagonist who is full of business partners, he set up a little gangster for the male protagonist. Before meeting that eldest lady, his character was barely up to par. From peeking up her skirt to smoking and then confronting the heroine, his gangster nature was gradually revealed and his character fell apart. All the emotions of the heroine are inexplicable, and it feels like a systematic urban novel from more than ten years ago covered in Japanese skin. There is no logic for the characters' actions, the plot is driven by the system, the protagonist has no brain, and the heroine becomes pregnant at a glance. The author's cognition is worthy of such a protagonist.

Take the picture away?

It's quite good. It's a domestic school novel in the guise of a Japanese novel. I'm really embarrassed to read more than a hundred chapters. One thing to say is that Hatsuka Nohanazawa doesn't know who the prototype is. I'll try to make it original, but it doesn't make people like it. As for Qingmei, I didn't know how to express it for a moment. At first, she acted like a yandere with a hatchet, but then she didn't. There was no other way to switch forms. This was really numb, so it would be better to stay dark. As for the male protagonist, I can only say that he is a scumbag whether he has a system or not. All male protagonists who have the mentality of not taking the initiative, not rejecting, and being irresponsible are not good even if they have a system. Some people may come to criticize me after posting so many words. Let's discuss it rationally. This is just based on my opinion that I have only read more than a hundred chapters. As for what other plots there are in the future, I still don't want to know. I was planning to run away at chapter 60, but I think the previous chapter is good and I'll give it a try.

Updates have been made, and I personally feel that the writing is quite good If you have read a certain popular book, you may feel a little confused, but the author has handled it quite well. It's in sharp contrast to the book next door that I can't even copy The introduction is a bit subtle. At first glance, I almost thought it was a manga fan, and I almost missed it. The girls wrote quite well. The author will not get sick later (the probability is probably a little lower than being struck by lightning twice a day) + the post-processing will be normal, and the quality is basically impeccable.

As soon as Xiaoxiao arrived at the starting point, all the people who were chasing the update looked at her and smiled, and some shouted, "Xiaoxiao, you have another weak day today!" She did not answer, but said to the editor, "Come on two chapters of Chuluye, and publish an extra chapter." Then she gave out nine starting points coins. They shouted loudly and deliberately, "You must have violated the driving rules again!" Xiaoxiao opened his eyes and said, "How can you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air?" "What innocence? I saw with my own eyes the day before yesterday that you failed to pass the review in two days and were ridiculed by the crowd!" Xiaowei blushed, and her forehead The veins on his face popped out, and he argued, "Is the review just my problem? Everyone has obviously flipped over?" Followed by difficult words, such as "twisting fingers" and "extra", etc., Caused everyone to burst into laughter: the air outside the starting point was full of joy.

Personally, I like this male protagonist better. Even if there is a huge disparity in strength, he dares to go to the first level. The worst is that he will die for one. The next door will turn into a dog at the beginning and be trained. At least there is a system. The worst is to break up with her and restart.

Let me tell you, I have read all of this book, and there are only three heroines. At least with the size of this book, unless the author writes about what happened in the last two years, maybe the author is too partial to the character of love. The plot about love is actually very confusing. It is difficult to imagine that a character who does not account for one-tenth of the whole story becomes the heroine, and the relationship seems to be forced. When she appeared at the end, I just felt that the author was forcing the plot to fit the outline. But other than that, this book is actually very good.

The character creation of Yuki Ai is really a failure in this book. Once it comes to her part, it feels awkward to watch. The other three characters are all very good. Despite its flaws, it's still a great novel.

This book is good, but I don't know why. After reading it for a while, I successfully entered the sage state. I felt that I was running around trying to fall in love and lost interest. 😶😐😑

The protagonist calls himself Neptune, but in fact he has no emotional intelligence. The author writes that the protagonist has made hundreds of girlfriends, but in fact, his subsequent communication with the heroine is just like Brother Chu. Without a system, there is no emotional intelligence. Regarding the system, the system of this book gave me the feeling of a guillotine. Every time you feel comfortable reading, the guillotine will slowly fall down to remind you that if you don't work hard, you will die. Moreover, the author's control of values ​​​​and time is extremely inaccurate, and it is difficult to watch the details. Since the protagonist mortgaged his virginity to the system from the beginning, this led to the fact that even if the author wrote a lot of driving content, it gave me the impression that the eunuch was visiting a brothel and the guillotine was always watching. How could I bring the protagonist into the scene? Introducing a protagonist with a chastity lock? I've only read 100 chapters, so I haven't read the rest to make any comments. Just let it sit on the bookshelf and gather dust. Maybe you'll read it again when you remember it.

The description of the reaction to the love-making in Chapter 98 is so realistic. If the hero's operation was placed in other light novels, the love-making would probably burst into tears with gratitude, and the favorability level would increase greatly. Then the hero would introduce a high-paying job to the love-making through the system or high-level friends (such as Hanyu, or even Hatsukano). , The favorability is directly maxed out, but the reality is just like what is described in this chapter. For a person with extremely low self-esteem like Qian Ai, the more enthusiastic you are, the further away she becomes. It seems like you are helping, but from the perspective of Qi Qi, you are pitying her and trampling on her remaining self-esteem, because she does not need to be pitied! What's worse is that Asuka even revealed that they had never revealed many secrets about their relationship. It can be said that this death is not unfair (from the perspective of the game, Asuka has actually game over)

The biggest highlight of this book is Tomikawa. If you are used to seeing a soft-boiled male protagonist who relies on one face + Yasashi at the beginning, you will think that only a strong and bloody male protagonist like Asukawa is worthy of starting a harem. Before entering high school, Asikawa was more like a perfect cowherd, trading fairly with his "customers". Later, in high school life with the four heroines, he slowly changed his mentality (faced his own desires), and at the same time assumed the responsibilities of a man. In this process, Asukawa will also make mistakes, get confused, and overturn (a little more Shura Field), and it will not always be fun, which makes the characters more real.         ，         ，，， The right sense of proportion is part of its charm.

If you try to write this Hatsuro Ye as a man, I don't know what those women will do to you. I really don't know why this woman can become the heroine. The protagonist probably has a masochistic tendency. Want to copy Kujo Miki's character? It feels like it's a bit much

After reading so many chapters, I came back to look at it when I had nothing to do, only to find that the automatic subscription was turned off, so I had to subscribe to make up for it.

I'm almost finished reading it, and I feel that the male protagonist's emotions are all inexplicable. It's not that there shouldn't be there, but that there shouldn't be so many, or the author didn't write so many. For example, the much-criticized love-making relationship, yes, I understand that she is pitiful, but where does the male protagonist's feelings for her start? And Ye Ying, she was given in vain because she was too emotional, but the male protagonist, who claims to be a perfect partner, was so trapped from the beginning? There was also Kurogane, who said he felt sympathy for his brothers, but he didn't feel it. To be honest, I feel that the author is too young, and his writing always feels weird. On the contrary, Hatsukano, who was the least likable at the beginning, is the most brilliant in writing. The others all feel like tool men with different characteristics.

Some questions about fan titles This book is out of the circle level three! Spreading flowers🌸Spreading flowers🌸 Starting from next month, there will be fan titles (ten per month), but the author of Benbi seems to have not decided on his own fan title name. At this time, he needs the help of Everbright netizens. You can choose one based on the novel. A good name (for example: tweezing fingers), if the fan title name you have conceived is adopted, then you will have a fan title for the next month~ (as of the 31st of this month) An example is as follows:

Seeking refinement

Those who like Japanese-style light novels can be advised not to leave. The culture and life in them are Japanese-style, but the dialogue between the characters has a domestic flavor, giving people a sense of separation. Also, the protagonist's dual business intelligence has been properly reduced after meeting Hatano. Maybe the author is not experienced enough.

Where exactly is the male protagonist's perfect dual quotient reflected?

I've read Chapter 250, and I'd like to share my opinion. There were some bad points in the early stages, such as Kamiya being able to see Hatsuganouchi, wearing a bikini, and being surrounded by many younger guys, and I heard that before the change, the younger guys were asked to lick their shoes. I was more defensive, so I continued to watch it. I had a bad impression of Hatsukano at first. I saw many people criticizing Hatsukano's post about Miki next door. Miki's plot in the early stages seemed much more normal than Hatsukano's. Starting around 100, the plot of Hatsuro Ye started to be well written. I liked the senior sister's plot better, but the part about Yozakura was a bit messy to be honest, and I didn't really like it. The character of the male protagonist doesn't seem to be in line with the author's original description of having a high level of commerce and commerce, and it's a bit scummy in some places. Finally, I prefer a story where the male protagonist looks pretty good and can be slightly improved through the system. After all, your female protagonists all like the appearance of the male protagonist so much, but the appearance of the male protagonist should be very ordinary? It's a little bit toxic to some people. To sum up, the writing is good, some plots are interesting, but still a bit immature and not enough lightning protection.

As a newcomer, I really like this work. I also like Hatsuka Nohanazawa. I want to join the full subscription group. But of course it has been three years, and I am worried that the elderly people in the group will no longer speak much, or that the content of their speech has nothing to do with this book at all, so the desire to join the group will be very small.

Dududu, I usually clicked it to take a look, but I didn't expect that there was a vacancy. I'm so happy^_^

I still don't understand why the relationship was closed, it was very abrupt, and later on I had to force her to join.