Let Me Die First to Add to the Fun.

I don't understand why you are creating a misunderstanding plot? Do you want to pave the way for what's to come? Is there any deeper meaning? Or does the character's growth experience require it? What's the point besides creating conflict for the sake of conflict? Just cut this part of the plot, replace the old father's words about evil cultivators with hiring people, and replace it with accepting the fact that his daughter is dead and returning to live. Although the children are resurrected, their illness has not been completely solved and they must practice in the sect. At this point, you can temporarily forget this part of the plot about her and start something else. Isn't it better to deal with it this way? More reasonable?

The most interesting part is all in the introduction, the text still needs work

It's really ridiculous 🤭

It was so poisonous that even Shennong would die if he came.

I just want to ask a question in the first few chapters. Are you going to test my IQ or my logic?

🥵 Shen Nong has no cure, so the poison should be removed quickly

The plot at the beginning is a bit silly❌. The disciple lost his way, was framed by his family as an evil cultivator, and was punished by others. What outrageous plot? !

Which primary school student wrote a running account? You paid someone to write your profile for you, right?

Yuanying can't even find anyone, it's so disgusting

The start was okay, but I think I'll think about it later.

Goldfinger is good but the plot is too retarded

It's watery and poisonous. At the beginning, the big disciple thought it was an evil cultivator and almost killed the protagonist. However, the protagonist actually accepted such a thing in the end. It's hard to stand up.

Above average level, no obvious logical loopholes, three and a half stars out of five.

The author is a eunuch, pull him out and whip the corpse