Imperial Edict: Immortals!

In the age of the end of the Dharma, there are still people who can take away the luck of the leader. I hope you are the second Wen Chao Gong and stop being a eunuch.

The writing is a bit stiff and a lot of things could use some explanation. For example, the general situation of the protagonist, the overall context of the past life, the classification of luck levels, etc. The protagonist has the ability to act, but it seems a bit unclear to only write about the actions but not why. The Qing Di, Yi Ding, and Wen Chao Gong's books are all very good luck flow, you can refer to them.

The time traveler becomes cannon fodder and starts over again. This is the classic way of writing...

Classic family waste. Brothers and sisters in a classic family are all selfish and short-sighted people. I think this was the way it was written 20 years ago.

Your writing is good, but it's fair to get poor grades. Not to mention the updated ones, there are also some that are still watery. The process of forming an elixir alone lasts for 15 chapters. If you include the preparations for forming an elixir, you will have to go through 60 or 70 chapters. The male protagonist has five perfect virtues, three top-level medicines, and top-level magic arts. He almost got an eighth-grade golden elixir. A small supporting role in the early stage was just a seventh-grade golden elixir. Not to mention, he suppressed the male protagonist and suffered for 15 chapters, which was more than a week. Readers' appetites have been whetted, right?

The protagonist has not yet completed his Qi refining, so he rushes to participate in Yuan Ying level fighting, and even cuts off the ground flower of one of Yuan Xing Zhenren's three flowers. What level can be promoted to which level? The genius praises some small level battles. The protagonist has already surpassed many levels. There must be limits to relying on external forces. Setting the realm level in this way is the logical reasoning of the specification book itself. If you mess with it, the later writing will collapse and the book will be ruined.

One chapter shows self-deprecation and helplessness. Such a waste way of thinking. After seeing it, I had no choice but to return it.

This book is too hateful and full of resentment, just like the Qingdi Book of the leader. In fact, the otherworldly world. Everyone has matured with age, especially those heroes who basically live long lives. How could they be such a big family with no brains? . Think about it. Assume Cao Cao and Liu Bei. Guan Yu, right? Those trendsetters in history all live forever. Damn it, so the main author's writing skills cannot be written well, so he can only lower the average IQ.

Introduction: The villain is imbecile and the protagonist is pretending to be a slap in the face.

In what era are we still playing this kind of rebirth? Isn't this a story about losers who keep coming back? As long as you are a waste, even if you are reborn 100 times, you will still be a waste