Who Has Any Regrets After Being Reborn?

It's well written, but I still support the author's decision.

Just write the emotional drama that you are good at and outline the career line in detail. Deliberately writing the career line is a replica of the previous book.

If the author writes less about business, I feel like he can become a god

What you wrote in this book is far different from the previous one, Xianxia. There are so many interesting things. The childhood sweetheart wrote the same thing as the male protagonist owed her. She also said that the male protagonist is like a dog. You have deleted it now, but I have read it. She casually takes the initiative to have sex with the male, directly. I asked the male protagonist if there was any handsome guy in the dormitory. I wrote that he secretly likes the male protagonist, but also regarded the male protagonist as his best friend. I really vomited. The male partner had the same last name as the male protagonist, and the male partner was written as extremely handsome and a rich guy. , YY Yang Wei, YY the senior sister, the two female protagonists have been written all over, Qingmei still wants to know him, I really broke my guard, is this really the first few books that only have commercial writing and bad pigeons? I really can't help it, originally I thought that I should be able to find my familiar rhythm in the back of the pigeon, but the latest chapter showed me that I have broken my guard, pigeons, did you bring in the male partner? What kind of literary youth disease is it? It's harder to stand than when I saw a Japanese manga family with a girlfriend, the original wish of a scumbag, and the abyss of a young man.

The author is very stubborn, career line is really not your strong point, don't amuse yourself with it, people won't like to read it. If the male protagonist needs status, just let him establish an investment company, use his foresight to make angel investments, and hold shares in various famous companies. Write a good love line and you can become a god.

The character Cheng Gang is so annoying. There is really no need to write this. This character is so annoying to watch.

Why do you have to worry about that bad WeChat account? Why use tens of millions to compete with QQ for traffic?

I'm impatient. The protagonist feels very pretentious, but in fact, as a reader, I hope to know some of his monologues instead of relying on guessing. The more than 100 chapters so far are really boring. I originally thought that I would have some money to buy lottery tickets and watch the concert, so I could pretend to be a foreshadowing. Also, the character of Yang Wei is outrageous. It's really boring to keep fish with each other like this all day long. Why did you reject it in the previous life? Do you want to find regrets in this life? It doesn't seem to be the case. I really don't know what the protagonist wants to do at the moment. To realize self-worth, just copy an APP? I know a few rich second-generation ladies, and then invest in various ways. I really don't understand. Since I have invested tens of millions in rebirth, guaranteed my parents' health, and everything goes well, since I achieved nothing in my previous life, I probably never fell in love. In this life, I should fall in love seriously and enjoy a happy life. Brother, you have an 18-year-old body. Even if you are an 80-year-old soul, you are still a 1 With an 8-year-old body, I really don't want to start a business after seeing tens of millions in my pocket. I would rather see him buy a blind box and make something small. At least I think he is currently unable to realize any value in life because he has no money. In short, he has been reborn until now. In addition to engaging in ambiguities and leaving other passersby speechless, plus being admitted to Peking University, it is really not that exciting at all. If he wants to write a light novel, why bother to be reborn and win tens of millions in the lottery?

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A man who didn't even have a woman in his previous life is reborn and surrounded by a bunch of supporting actresses. I really admire your settings.

Li Shishi can't deal with someone like this, the protagonist is such a fucking loser!

Ah? This was too bloody at the beginning, I really can't stand it anymore

I support rewriting. I basically liked the 2005 book from the beginning to the end, but this new book is really unsatisfactory. I skipped through the subscription chapters, let alone the subscription chapters. To be honest, I skipped many chapters even in the previous free chapters. (I have to say, rebirth + lottery + first pot of gold = I am tired of reading it, because 2005 also has the same plot setting, after all, it is a new book! The plot of you copying your own old book makes me somewhat speechless. 😅) I read this new book intermittently for two months. The following is my personal evaluation: Regarding the previous book in 2005, this one is much different in both the emotional and career lines. Rebirth is more enjoyable and it is cut in half. 💔 Especially in terms of the emotional line, the progress is currently completely stuck on the character setting of Bai Yueguang, Yang Wei. Yang Wei is too calm, too rational, and does not have any special settings (such as the strict control of the official father and the rich mother, which is common in novels, and the rebellious psychological setting) Judging from the current plot, Cheng Xin cannot form any bond with Yang Wei beyond the normal relationship between men and women, such as giving favors and sharing hardships. The other three female protagonists appeared frequently in Yang Wei's circle prematurely and developed into best friends + roommates. How could a calm and rational rich girl like Yang Wei accept Cheng Xin's scumbag behavior? ? ? 🤔 Tong Tong has not finished her studies in high school and has been invisible for a year. She only heard text messages but never saw her. 🤔 Candy is set as the roommate of the doctor Yang Wei, and the difficulty level for Cheng Xin to eat the grass next to him is at least six stars. 🤔 Qian Yan has basically not had any ambiguous interactions with Cheng Xin so far, and has only dug a plot hole for her cousin Li Shishi. 🤔 There are hundreds of thousands of words, but there is little progress in the four love lines. Cheng Xin doesn't even have a female character that he can kiss, let alone communicate in depth. 😭. (You may not have seen it, but the person in charge of the book next door has already welded the accelerator, and has been racing seven or eight times. 😏) The career line of this book is not good, and it is completely uninteresting. Lingxi is currently in a wretched stage of development, and there are no business rival scenes arranged. It is completely incapable of showing off. If it really wants to be written down, it will take two to three hundred chapters. (The mobile phone business in 2005 was still more enjoyable to watch) The supporting roles are also very few, and there are no small roles that I can remember. In general, this book is too dull in all aspects so far, without any explosive points. Although it is a daily style, it cannot be a daily journal! You have to occasionally add a few little fun points, a little ambiguity, a little welfare, a little Shura field and so on. Rebirth, multiple female protagonists, and a scumbag! The routines are actually the same, but the author's writing skills are different, and the works presented are naturally different. 2005 is one of my favorite rebirth novels I have ever read. It is different from a certain legend of a scumbag (Chen Hansheng). It is much better than those novice rebirth novels written without brains and logic. The current new book is really unsatisfactory, the writing is delicate, but the plot is dull I also think that it is difficult to improve if you continue to write it. Rewriting may lead to nirvana and rebirth. I also wish and hope that the new book can be reborn from the ashes. ✊ (The above are just personal opinions that I stayed up late to write. If you don't like it, you can discuss it, but don't curse.) 😒😒😒

Write less emotional scenes with supporting characters. It's meaningless. What about Wang Chuting? Why did you write it?

At the beginning of the book, the characters have a complicated relationship and are persuaded to quit. Or maybe this is the author's personal experience, and he can't empathize with it, so he gave it up.

Obviously you can copy the creativity of your previous life and make mobile games to make money first, but do you want to be successful in social networking? 😅 WeChat is slowly getting started with the help of QQ, so business writing must be logical!

After seeing my roommate appear, I was shocked by the plot mentioned in the comment area. In order to prevent being poisoned, I decided not to read it for the time being. This monthly ticket will be regarded as a supplementary ticket for the championship. The pen name of Yuxue Zibingchen has always been the t1 of urban writing and the t0 of rebirth writing in my mind. Come on.

It's almost 600,000 words long, but my little hand is not pulled, and it keeps pulling back and forth between the heroines. You can just write some physical contact, but it's not interesting at all 😅

Can this be a harem? The two heroines in the previous book and the previous book are completely enough. The harem collapsed in the middle of the first book. I lost the book in the middle of the previous book. In the early stage, so much writing was used to describe the relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. The character description of the two female protagonists was originally good, but in the middle period, any cat or dog would be accepted. The key point is that the two female protagonists can still accept it. Doesn't this overthrow the male protagonist and the two female protagonists in the early stage? In the beginning of this book, the male protagonist is a pure love warrior. He uses a big signature to describe the relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. In the middle and second chapters, he transforms into a central air conditioner. He is a scumbag. His character is completely broken. I don't want to read it at all.

Fortunately, I liked it, otherwise Zhang Zhuo wouldn't be able to be a bachelor.

I feel like the male protagonist is a completely ordinary person in terms of the relationship between men and women, and I can't stand it if I want him to do everything. Now I can't stand it anymore. .

It's a state of mind. Then it's all in vain. I really don't treat my brothers as human beings 😭

The next book is absolutely free 😅

I have all bought this book so far, but it really doesn't look good. The heroine is not attractive at all. Yang Wei, Zhang Tong, Candy are far different from the heroines in the previous book! Also, change the name of the heroine. Such a simple name really doesn't make sense!

The quality of this book is indeed not good, but your eunuch is outrageous. The first book of Xian Xia ➕ Love Elements is also good. Originally, there were very few people writing it since the Queen of Immortals. I thought it might be very good. Then it was also eunuch. You have made two eunuchs in a row. Who dares to read it later?

I hope the next one will be well written. This one felt a bit too flat when I saw 106. I couldn't read it.

The author feels that he has been repeating the same routine for several consecutive books. Maybe you will say that others write like this, but few authors keep writing about the same theme and the same main line. It is recommended to change the main line to different main lines. Don't just start a business. It is too aesthetically fatigued. And the comment section is right. Writing career lines is really not the author's strong point, like The Sword of Sister Control is very good. Playing games is a main line. Let's take other authors as examples. Let's take Jasmine. One book is about urban superpowers and the other is about urban weirdness. Each book is not very similar. It's very comfortable to read and the expectations are high. Your advantage is that the characters are well established, but you just keep writing boring and repetitive content here, and there is no sense of expectation.

What's going on, after reading more than 100 chapters, the book is finished? Fuck, I'm all lonely

After raising it for a few months, I came back and saw that it had died 🤔

I originally wanted to gain weight before reading it, but after a hundred chapters it ended just as I was about to read it?