Rebuild 2005

The first two to three hundred chapters were okay, but after the character Jiang Qinghuai appeared in the college chapter, the whole character of the male protagonist has changed a lot, making it unreadable. First of all, it's not that there is anything wrong with online harem novels with multiple female protagonists. After all, there are many such novels and I have read a lot of them myself. However, the narrative of this book is very disgusting because the author tried to give the male protagonist a layer of worry about the world and a sense of family and country. Under this premise, the most important emotional line of this work was written in a mess in the second half, so that the three emotional lines finally turned into pure lust, and became the story of three derailments of a scumbag, which formed a great conflict with the personal image of the male protagonist that the author was trying to express. To put it simply, the consequence of this conflict is that if this work is a story line design with a single female protagonist, then there will be little conflict with the male protagonist's character. A design with two female protagonists is completely acceptable. It may even be more interesting to read as a web novel, and three The heroine's story line exceeds this threshold, and the conflict with the male protagonist's character directly forms a hypocritical image of the protagonist who has a lack of personal ethics but talks about national justice. The reason for this result is also related to the author's crude method of inserting the third story line. As a reader, my disgust with the male protagonist's character and morals finally reached its peak when I read about 700 chapters. I can only say that if the character design points out that the male protagonist is a scumbag at the beginning, and the plot design does not whitewash it from a male perspective, I think the reading experience will be better as a web novel.

Let's talk about why this book is not popular This book can be seen as the shadow of many novels. The author has always been good at writing innocent and romantic heroines. You can see it by reading Orthopedic Arrow back then. Nowadays, pure love stories from Qidian are no longer popular, and their traffic-drawing effects are not as good as those of systematic texts such as love systems. Similarly, readers, under the impact of white-collar writing (everyone writes but you can only read), do not have high requirements for writing, just pass it. But good writing is not a disadvantage. The reason why his book is not popular Objective reasons: In the current environment, this book's innocent romance with a sense of the times does not have a large audience, and there is no ground for popularity. Nowadays, the pace of rebirth novels is very fast. The main business is like a pot of gold, layout, commerce, Internet, stocks, conflicts and conflicts are all sufficient, plus some pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. If it's about love, the keywords are college entrance examination, school beauty (class beauty), class placement, dating, fish farming, and Shura field, and the pace is also very fast. And what they have in common is that they rarely write about the protagonist's relatives. Parents, brothers and sisters simply don't spend so much pen and ink writing (due to their own writing skills and factors that readers don't like to read). It makes readers feel happy to write something refreshing and refreshing, and it will be faster for them. Not to mention the branch of the rebirth genre, Tokyo-ryu Nippon-ryu, which sucked away some readers. Subjective reasons: The style is not unified. The style of this book is more like the traditional rebirth style with a sense of age. The author should draw on the Orleans grilled fish castle style. The pace is slow and the writing is detailed. A lot of pen and ink is spent on the characterization. Grilled Fish is written by an old literary youth, and the author is also an old literary youth, but he may have written many books. The author wants to change it. This book is more of a refreshing novel, and is much less literary and young. This is nothing, in fact, it is easier to get angry this way. But the business part of the book is written in a way that I don't understand the author's thoughts. Although I said that the author of this book has moved closer to the Shuangbai style of writing on the market, the overall style is still like an innocent love story like a grilled fish. The painting style is naturally inconsistent, and the business part is difficult to describe in one sentence. The characters have collapsed, and the images of the male and female protagonists have collapsed, more and less. The biggest failure of the heroine is Li Miaoyu. There is a big difference between Chapter 200 and the following chapters. Anyone who has read it should know where the failure is. The writing of Shura Field is average. In other words, if you want to write about multiple female protagonists, you cannot write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists in a one-on-one pure love story. The female protagonist must be weak and passive. Referring to "Rebirth of Money", this kind of commercial-focused rebirth story with multiple female protagonists, maybe you really don't want to be reborn. On the other hand, the finale of Grilled Fish's Rebirth and Nirvana has only two female protagonists, while Reignition has a single female protagonist. There are three in this book. To be honest, this is not suitable for pure romance writing. He can only be a hard-hearted scumbag. Instead of trying to instil wisdom for the female protagonist, it is better to write a more realistic version of the male protagonist. It would be too hypocritical for all three heroines to still talk about each other's vows while the heroines have one-on-one pure love. Don't Cry, Don't Make Noise and Be Good Sisters wiped out all the shining points of the two female protagonists in the early stage. Although the final result will be like this, I think it should be due to the accumulation of time, the precipitation of emotions, the fetters of children, and the reality (raising the male protagonist) parents and relatives. The most important thing is the love for the male protagonist. Under various conditions, the harmony between the three people in the end was just about right. Rather than dealing with it like in this book. Look at how Li Miao was written! It's okay to be sisters with Li Wanyi, but later on, in order to take over Jiang Qinghuai, the two heroines fell into a complete mess. Fortunately, when I first read it, I thought her writing was very good, and she was ranked among the top three female protagonists in urban innocent novels that I like, but the result... In the end, it was too watery, and even less. This reason that is common to all novels is also very suitable for this book 😤

To put it bluntly, when I watched the two heroines, I could accept that the middle stage was also very interesting. However, when I wrote about Jiang Qingya, although it was a foreshadowing, I somehow didn't want to read on. I always used the past life as a cover. It may be my personal reason. It may be that the senior sister and Punchline were written so well that they became emotional. Goodbye, I hope the author will write better and better.

How many times have I applied to the group? Who is in charge?

Are you here to pick up girls after being reborn? Nothing was accomplished, so I wrote about two or three beauties first.

Finally, I gave you all the monthly tickets. To be honest, the content of this book is very good, and the previous settings are also very good! It's a bit painful to see the way the two people's emotions are handled. To this day, I really can't stand it anymore! Come on, author, I look forward to your next book.

First of all, let me be sure that the book is generally well written, especially the daily part. It has a sense of life and is very warm The only flaw is that it is too wordy The career part is not that exciting. The author is still a more sophisticated type. He slowly piles up various data. At first, it feels okay once or twice, but I always feel a little tired after writing like this. Secondly, it is too long and contains too much foreshadowing If I keep writing at this pace, I don't know how many words I will write Of course I still like this book very much and I hope the author will get better and better! ps: The extra is exciting, don't miss it

The writing is a bit slow, so I'll save it for now. Come on, author.

This is the first book I have fully subscribed to. I hope it will have a good ending. I have been stuck too often now, and it has always been a boring passerby's perspective. I hope it will end as soon as possible. I hope it will have a good ending. Please start a new book soon.

I haven't left the woman after reading more than ten chapters. Is it interesting?

Internet pictures, The four pictures are all of the same person, only showing the figure, which should be close to the effect of 32E wearing different styles of clothes

Be a hypocritical harem scumbag in the pure love story of Everyother, play family business in the harem story of three wives and four concubines, and mix two grains of pure love into the sea of ​​copied and pasted business stories It is recommended to abandon it after reading the high school chapter.

This book is well written in the middle of high school. The characters, plot, and character of the male protagonist are all classics. However, after catching up on the latest chapter, I still want to mention a few points 1. The way the male protagonist solves the Shura field is not convincing. I wanted to see what kind of tricks there are, but this is the result? There was so much foreshadowing in the front, but in the end, the solution was only solved by words... Anyone with a little bit of emotional experience knows that when encountering a relationship crisis, especially when it comes to cheating, talking to the parties involved will only make the problem more serious. It would be more reasonable for you to ask relatives and friends to give advice. 2. The male protagonist's design is small. Although the male protagonist is a bit carefree in the first half of the story, he is actually very responsible and mature. He is comfortable with relationships and very rational. The arrangement that he has never considered how to face the Shura Field is in line with people's escape psychology. However, after Li's roommate discovered the adultery and issued an ultimatum, he still didn't have any thoughts on solving the Shura field. To be honest, it kind of ruined the character and made people feel very irresponsible. When facing the senior schoolmate and Li Shi, the male protagonist tried to seek forgiveness through a series of self-mutilation and sympathy tactics of little boys, such as getting his hand caught in the door, Cheng Menlixue, and pretending to be pitiful... Emmmm I'm sorry, it's a bit disgusting. 3. The characters of the heroines collapsed. There are two prerequisites for opening a harem: (1) the female protagonists have deep feelings for the male protagonists; (2) the female protagonists have lower self-esteem than the male protagonists. However, the heroines portrayed in the previous article do not have these two points. Especially the reaction of the two heroines after the Shura field broke out gave me the feeling that their relationship was just like this. Their strong self-esteem could not complete the harem plot. Let's talk about the senior sister first. It can be said that everything in her current life was created by the male protagonist. The male protagonist is not only affectionate but also kind to her. Even under this background, she is still extremely determined when facing the male protagonist's adultery. Emmm, that's all. Speaking of Li, I originally liked this character, but now it's just like this. I don't see how much I love the male protagonist. Both female protagonists lack the motivation to either live or die with the male protagonist unconditionally. They would not be able to accept a harem unless faced with natural or man-made disasters. 4. This article is an urban novel and a pure love urban novel. Since it is positioned like this and relies on the emotions of the characters to promote the development of the plot, the incentives for the harem (how bad the male protagonist is, how smooth the female protagonists are) and the rationality of the harem solution (the sense of realism in the story) are all important factors that determine the upper limit of the novel. If it is not handled properly, the reader will feel uncomfortable. At least for now, I am not completely convinced by the rationality of the solution to the harem in this book. Either you just deal with it coldly for a period of time, and then time allows the heroines to grow up and finally give up on this relationship; or you come up with a convincing solution to the Shura field. This Shura field lasts for ten or twenty chapters, which is too long. 5. The author said before that he originally planned to arrange the plot of Li Lupus. Now it seems that if the original outline is followed, it will make the break more reasonable. However, considering the author's bad record of literary youth hair blades, let's forget it 🤫

When I was writing about mobile phones, it was filled with personal information, and it was very serious. The career line was not only boring, but I couldn't find it interesting at all (if you don't know how to write, why not write as little as possible). Although writing a good career line can be more attractive, your career line has been reducing the reader's favorability of your book. This book relies on the heroine's character and interaction to attract most readers. I don't understand why you are so persistent in writing about your broken mobile phone, and why you wrote the so-called production process in detail (not many people want to read it, really) If people want to understand, they will look it up themselves, which will only make people feel dumb and disgusted. ), Maybe you, the author, have your dream of powering the country with mobile phones, but online articles are written for everyone to read. If you keep writing disgusting things, no one will appreciate your so-called masterpiece. I always like to write about who I am competing against and rise to the national level. What is this? And I always like to combine the so-called reality. Why write such a sensitive thing? No one who writes business articles is like you. It seems sensational, and I want to write something tall and majestic. In fact, the more I read, the more embarrassed I am (writing such a sensitive thing, and not being popular with readers, is it to satisfy my own yy)? In the end, it's Miaomiao's wedding. Such a beautiful plot, but will anyone really appreciate such a photo? Perhaps the failure of the mobile phone business line extends to the end. What I wrote is not a career line at all, but a masterpiece that I combined my own knowledge with reality to create my own YY ​​masterpiece. I keep reading because I like the heroines here (I like the cute Miaomiao the most 😍). Don't write sensitive things, blur the career line, and shape the heroine's character through more daily interactions. It is obviously better and can attract more readers, but the author just wants to go to the "tiger" mountain. Finally, I wish the author great success in completing this book.

This is a book that I, a harem party member, can't stand for the first time! The writing of Yi Dad and Miaomiao was so good, and for the first time, I felt that two female protagonists would be enough! As for the business part, the writing is really bad! But the daily writing is good! Later, Miao Miao and Yi Dad were written so stupidly! I really can't stand it if I just give it to the third girl! I was abused once and finally made up with it, and then cheated on it, which made me, a harem party, unable to stand it... I was out of books, and when I came back, I found that I still couldn't stand it. I can admit that the author's character is really attractive to me! But this book is also like this. Many people must have given up on the third female lead like me 🤭

After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. The two heroines were described very well at the beginning of the book, and they had everything they wanted. The protagonist was like a clown, wearing the emperor's new clothes, and was completely unworthy of the two heroines. The next guess is that the punchline changes from a top student to a token girl, Li Wanyi's family changes, and the protagonist is heartbroken. . . When I read the article, I pay attention to a rationality. Your protagonist cannot subdue the female characters at all, so what qualifications do you have to start a harem? As a man, you can't stand cuckolding, but the female characters in the article can accept cuckolding. Are you worthy?

Qinghuai's professional attire

I decided to withdraw when I saw the third heroine entering the palace in Chapter 715. Although I knew it would be three heroines, I still insisted on watching this because the two heroines before were so good. I believe all readers like those two heroines very much, especially Miaomiao. Compared to them, Jiang Qinghuai is really boring and has no characteristics at all. No matter what reason the author uses to exclude this Jiang Qinghuai, it is disgusting, let alone It is said that there is no good relationship line set, it is just a dream. Although they have known each other for a long time, they have not had much contact in these years. Compared with the relationship experiences of the two heroines over the years, these three heroines are purely motivated by sex, which is very disgusting. In the period of obtaining the forgiveness of the two heroines, the entanglement, reluctance, and vows made, compared with now accepting the third one easily, you are very shameless. Although it has multiple female protagonists, I have never read it as a harem novel because the two female protagonists are so well portrayed. With two such good women and such a good relationship, you suddenly accept the third one easily. It feels like you suddenly got the shit out of someone. It's really a failure. It's a good stallion novel.

The logic is a bit buggy. From ancient times to the present, it seems that no woman with financial status can do threesomes, right? The most I can accept is that you have an extramarital affair. The pig's trotters are a bit heart-wrenching, and you bring the woman's family to make a fortune. It seems that the pig's trotters value feelings, but can you still have a harem like this? If you are wholehearted, the relationship between the two families will definitely be very good, but you still have to keep a bowl of water on balance. In reality, if the girl's parents find out that you are doing this, will they accept your favor? Especially Miaomiao, who is an only child, will most likely fall out with you on the spot. All previous investments have been in vain, and the woman's family is now worth over 100 million. Why should people share the same husband? Can the relationship between the male and female lead alone overcome many obstacles? All the urban novels with better grades are not so arrogant. They are a bit ignorant of logic. If you want to have a harem, love is one thing. There is no huge economic gap or status gap. Why should the woman and her family compromise? After all, the milk tea girl is also a registered wife so she can tolerate Brother Dong playing outside. In the case of pig's feet, it is completely overturned in reality.

I saw some people saying that Qingqing and Wanyun should not be accepted, saying that it was not good to accept them. I'm really baffled. It is taboo to miss a girl and give her away. Since it has been described, if you don't accept it, you will miss out the daughter and give away the daughter. Writing a novel like this will have serious consequences. There are too many rhythmic trolls.

Don't be ambiguous all the time, it's better to be more truthful. The true nature of a man, if you want to write a scumbag and a warm man, you can't be coy and coquettish. The pursuit of ambiguous pure love is uncomfortable, and you feel like a eunuch. It's better if the protagonist thinks he is a scumbag, so that he is not hypocritical and does not act too proud.

You shouldn't say who belongs to whom, but would you accept it if Jiang and his sister-in-law were assigned to Feng? I've already collected two of them, why do you still watch them as a pure love? You don't know that the most taboo thing in urban harems is giving away girls, right? Because this trolling of the author is unreasonable. Can you really accept it in your heart to describe Jiang and his sister-in-law in such a glamorous way, and then leave it to nothing, or give it to a supporting character like Feng?

I would like to make a small suggestion. I hope that the author will try not to give birth to boys when writing children in the future. It doesn't matter if he calls his brother a monster or a crazy person. He can't stand his son being among a group of female protagonists. Forget about his biological mother. There are three unrelated female protagonists. (This is a novel, if you want to scold me, please don't talk about reasonable reality)

Booked it all in one night. There is no shining point in the whole body. When I look at the urban rebirth outfit, I don't see it. I don't see it. I just saw an author who wanted to write about fast business. The title of Chapter 281 is very well written. A medium-sized event stuck in the md for thirty chapters, which makes me feel suffocated to death. Just thinking about building a career, I bought two houses in Beijing in two years and made 700 million, but I couldn't buy a car. For two years, his classmates didn't see him going out to eat with his partner. They met after making a phone call at a traffic light. It's really amazing, I feel like the writing method of "Zhou Mi Next Door", which is stuck in the plot, can't be written faster. If you want to scold me, scold me quickly, I can't write either After watching it all night and paying for it, I'm really angry 😊

The author has a special ability. He always disgusts you when you are comfortable reading it. If I hadn't adapted to it three or four times before, I would have run away. What role does this Li Chengan have besides disgusting people? If I didn't really like this book, I wouldn't want to subscribe to Li Chengan's part.

I was obsessed with Liu's plot for a while, so I turned back and read the updated chapters today, and I was deeply moved. The chapter where Liu and Jiang reunited was well written, far beyond my imagination. It really showed his skill. It can be said that the two characters of Liu and Jiang were established at once, and the overall plot was not unconventional. It was really high-level. When I read that chapter, "Walking on the Road of Life" sounded in my mind. Jiang Qifeng was a loser in life, so was Liu Yubing. The last scene was indeed the greatest retribution for this woman's evil. For this character, I actually think that if we arrange for her to divorce Liao Daqing, it will be a good ending for her. This has nothing to do with Lao Jiang's emotional arrangement, nor is it simply that evil is rewarded. It is purely my sympathy for this hateful and pathetic woman - the moment it is revealed that she is a plaything, a vassal, and an abuser, I hope that this woman can stand up again and complete her own redemption. I think the author actually has some thoughts on what the significance of Wei Qingfan's rebirth is. Not only did he change his life and marry four wives, he probably also hoped to bring a little light to the bleak world through rebirth, so he changed Wanwan's unfortunate youth, saved Miaomiao's fate of death, and opened a company to make mobile phones and chips. So here in Jiang Qinghuai, how can he redeem Jiang Qinghuai? I think it should give a family that is torn apart by social reality a chance for spiritual reconciliation and self-salvation. It's just to renew Lao Jiang's string and let Liu please Qingqing. What's the difference between this and the previous life? I think for Jiang Qifeng, the core is how to reconcile him with life. For Yu Qingqing, the core is to reconcile her with her family. So for Liu Yubing, what is the core? I think it is necessary for her to reconcile with herself - to have herself again, to live like a human being again, rather than a vine twisting herself to cling to others in order to survive. Therefore, ending her marriage to Liao Daqing was not only retribution for her cowardice and selfishness, but also an opportunity for her to regain a new life. Broken mirrors cannot be reunited, but at least at this level, Qingqing can truly get redemption from her family - her father is no longer a delusional person who burns everything for his ideals, and her mother is no longer a villain who abandons everything for life. Although the broken past cannot be reunited, at least Qingqing has a chance to be truly saved. And I hope that Wei Qingfan's rebirth can achieve this - giving comfort to the victims, relief to the persistent, and giving the cowardly and selfish a chance to awaken themselves.

My drug detection radar went off when I saw the plot of Yi Dad finishing the college entrance examination. What is the role of Yi Dad in the subsequent plot? Is he just a vassal of the protagonist? In the front, the protagonist even raises his hand to the passing dog, but he has not made any efforts in dealing with Yi Daddy. I feel that there will be poison in the back, and Yi Daddy's character will probably collapse. The brother who chases behind will give you some spoilers.

Come to the revised version and read it three times When I saw the chapter where Jiang became a secretary, I still felt like I was being force-fed💩. There is also the matter of the sister-in-law in the back. The author wrote it very well before, but these operations are really confusing. There is one protagonist and two female protagonists. It is as disgusting as if I really don't want to be reborn. I really don't understand what the author was thinking at that time

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There is always one problem that cannot be avoided in urban harem novels with modern plots, especially if the female characters are vividly written. Having a harem is a trampling on the dignity of the female characters. I like to watch the male protagonist hide this and that from the beginning, and the female protagonists are in trouble, but once the female character accepts the harem, the character immediately loses her personality, and the plot becomes boring.