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I have been reading this book for more than a month. I read the author's high school summary today and I want to talk about what the author didn't mention: The author should think about his target audience before writing a book. (It's spelled out word by word, I hope the author can read it) If the target is harem readers, you have to understand the requirements of harem readers, such as no NTR, no flirting without marrying (such as Zhang Wuji), and no missing girls (about this, it does not mean that as long as they are women, they must be accepted. There is a subtle degree here. I wonder if the author knows Bian Shishi? This female supporting role is well portrayed, she is mainly through the heroine (her girlfriend) Honey) and the male partner (her boyfriend) come to communicate with the male protagonist, which largely avoids the harem readers' request to accept her. As for the author's story about Song Tang being saved by the male protagonist, the male protagonist is already a light in her heart. I think it should be accepted, but if you rarely write about her later, it becomes very embarrassing). In fact, harem readers are quite picky. You can refer to Ji Cha for details. If the goal is to have a single heroine who loves readers purely, the corresponding needs must be met, such as not speculating in stocks, not having an affair with the female protagonist, and not forcing sex. In this regard, the author can refer to the book that Hua has not yet written. Speaking of which, I also remembered that Sister Hua's book a thousand years ago also had a female partner, and she dealt with it in a similar way to Bian Shishi above. She also mainly communicated with the male protagonist through the female protagonist. This way of handling the female partner is really good. Actually speaking, readers with a single female protagonist are not so picky, so there is no controversy. If the target reader is the kind of person who likes to speculate in stocks, I have nothing to say. I hate this kind of article. Author, your target audience for this book is a little confusing. You seem to mean to write mainly four female characters (I guess they are all probably written around the male protagonist, right?) But you also said to include at least two. So who are your target readers? That's all I want to say. The author still has some writing skills. It's rare to have this foundation. I hope the author can write better and better.

I signed a contract for the novel I invested in today. I earned 2,000 points. I will reward you with 500 points. Isn't it true love enough to steal other people's money to support you? So can there be more?

The author's specialty is obviously emotional drama, so he should focus on describing it. Instead of spending a lot of pen and ink writing about business, it can be used as a passing incident to the emotional line with Shen Mo and Wang Ke, focusing on emotional drama. I think everyone is reading this article to read the emotional drama, not the business article. If you want to read the business article, there are completely better choices. Rather than writing now, it generally loses its own characteristics.

Personally, I feel that there is really no need to write more about the character Song Mei from the beginning, because the tragedy of Song Mei is that the protagonist is reborn but still has no time to change. The general joy of this kind of rebirth novel is that the protagonist changes the past to save the tragedy, but the tragedy that cannot be changed and the characters that cannot be saved, especially the beautiful female characters, are poisonous points for many people. As an old bookworm and a colleague, I still suggest that the author revise the plots of these chapters. After all, there is no doubt that "enjoyment" in urban rebirth novels is what most readers pursue. Deliberately describing tragedies and shortcomings in order to arouse readers' emotions is undoubtedly not worth the gain. Of course, I'm not a great person, the above are just my personal suggestions.

Did you build a building together? 😏 I will build a cheaper one Ten floors on the first floor, one hundred floors, one thousand roofs o not ok😜 By the way, let me have a wife to control the building [fn=31 ] The 100th floor has been closed The 200th floor has been closed The 300th floor has been closed The 400th floor has been closed The 500th floor has been closed The 600th floor has been closed

If it joins the alliance, how many chapters would the author be willing to add?

Shen Mo is so awesome

The end is over. If the grades are good, the story of the four people in college is still very long. It is very easy to write. After all, it is still difficult to reconcile. However, the pigeon is ready to release a new book. Please support me. If you subscribe, you can join the v group and read the beginning of the new book first. Dog food article 😁

It's very interesting. I started writing it in junior high school and it didn't make people feel that the plot is too childish. Instead, it triggered my own memories. I also had several crushes in junior high school. I didn't understand anything at the time. Maybe I liked it, but most likely it was because of sex. 😄 To be honest, this book is no worse than the ones on the ranking list. Among the urban novels I have read, this book is on the same level as I Really Want to Be Reborn and Common People, T0 level. Come on, author, write as much as you want. As long as it's not deliberately cliché, I'll order as much as you want.

I hope that the next book will be a book with multiple female protagonists. Why can't Dog Food be a book with multiple female protagonists?