Low-Key Big Star

It's the first time in my life that I have a reward of 12,000, and I just want to add one more, is it okay?

I just finished watching the ending, and I skipped the middle part. How can I say that the first book I read by Chen Da was "Champion's Arrow". After reading it, I couldn't put it down. Then I read the author's previous books, "Star Summoner" and the original version of "Low-Key Star", and then I felt that the writing was really good. Chen Da's writing was not commercial and had no starting point at all. Books like Qidian's that focus on daily life and romance are basically for harems (not to say that harems are bad, after all, everyone is usually under pressure, so there is nothing wrong with reading them), but Chen Da's book gave me a very realistic feeling. Qianqian and Lin Xuan were influenced by secular morality. Obstacle, Liang Chen's entanglement between Su Luo and Su Luo gave me a lot of practical significance. I personally feel that Chen Da knew that writing this way would lose his subscription, but he still wrote it, just like I knew he would feel uncomfortable after reading it, but I still support him. Many times, tragedy does have a kind of Special beauty can be appreciated repeatedly. Of course, when I write this, I do not want to advocate a tragic ending. Forcing tragedy is a disease of literary youth. I just want to say that as a niche author, Chen Da is trying hard to write some personal and unique thoughts that belong to him, even if These thoughts are sometimes very realistic and uncomfortable, but in an environment like Qidian, he is one of the few authors who dares to write like this. Just like Zhao Qingshan's sister and the sister who sells newspapers, they have the ability and their own ambitions, so they are worthy.

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As soon as I saw the beginning of Chapter 6, I didn't want to read anymore.

Please choose to accept the host. Because the protagonist does not accept the system, the system stops being a dog licker and leaves the pig's feet. From then on, the pig's feet disappear from everyone. He lives his life in an ordinary way. This book is over! It's great, I've read another book😁😁😁

There is a saying that the description of the characters and the emotional entanglement and the plot design are quite good, but the story is so long that I can only watch it without following up. If you don't pursue it, I'm afraid you'll feel like you've failed and you'll give up. Harmful

Although the front part is a bit long-winded, the back part is quite interesting, and it's quite a good piece of urban writing.

I seem to want to free up some too... Wow, there are too few!

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I hope that the system will not interfere too much with the protagonist and can be used as a dispensable auxiliary. If the system interferes too much with the protagonist, there will be many inexplicable poisonous points. When reading novels, basically the main character is introduced, and few people are willing to be suppressed by the system. Once the system is intelligent, it will always have various thoughts, and it will definitely conflict with the protagonist, which will become a big poisonous point.

The system was really trying to persuade him to quit. At first, the system and the male protagonist kept talking about things but didn't get into the topic. The system said that the male protagonist only had more than 800 days to live, but in the end it did not provide any help. It asked the male protagonist to learn music theory, read more poems, and search for poems that did not conflict between his past life and this life. I don't know what the system is used for. The male protagonist is a high school student, and he has to learn so much, but there is no help. If he has not learned enough, he is probably dead. I feel that the male protagonist is a puppet of the system. The author recommends that you skip the previous part and read it. If you haven't read it yet, I suggest you skip the previous part and read it.

Chenge is an old pigeon The soup tastes delicious if you cook it for a long time It just takes too long to cook it Automatic subscription is very good, very good

This book is a bit literary and youthful, maybe it's the author's habit. Urban novels are basically the same after Perfect Life, so it seems that they can last more than 100 chapters. When there are too many similarities between 200 and 300 chapters, a lot of people will abandon them, so the author should prepare for the disaster in chapters 200-300.

The key to writing a book is digging and burying holes. A well-dug hole will make readers fall into it, and a well-buried hole will make readers return to their hearts. From my personal point of view, the current book Low-key has the following major pitfalls. The first is the relationship between Yang Yuting and Zhang Yang. At present, Yang has officially made her debut. Based on the old book, Chenda has added the must-die-at-20-year-old version, and deleted settings such as the goddess Yin Chao and Princess Chu Chu of Danyang. This pitfall is mainly related to its future development. It is directly related to whether the book has a single female protagonist or a harem (supporting single female protagonist 😁), and has been discussed by many book friends. The second issue is the identity of Luo Shen. Since the appearance of Luo Shen, his identity has been speculated by the majority of book friends. There are endless speculations about the future, the still in another world, and Yang Yuting in the future. It is currently known that he has complex feelings towards Zhang Yang and Yi Yi, and his stance on their relationship is complex. The third issue is the identity of Uncle Zhangyang. From being initially regarded as an evil son by his father to Zhang Wei's father and then to Zhang Yang being targeted recently, this line has been constantly expanding and extending. I personally speculate that he may have done something illegal and got into trouble for Zhang Yang. Chen Da may have taken the opportunity to reveal Yang Yuting's identity, such as the old version of the Riverside Scene during the Qingming Festival incident. The above are the three major pitfalls. Of course, there are also some small pitfalls such as Tang Yanqi's attitude towards Zhang Yang (this little girl has a certain fondness for Zhang Yang as soon as she appears on the scene, maybe some bloody incident happened in the past), etc., So I won't go into detail one by one.

Looking at the introduction, the routine is very old. I have slept in vain for so many years. There is no need to be so aggrieved.

Why do daily articles have to add a system flow...

To be honest, I was quite confused, no, I was very confused. I first started reading this novel not long after I broke up with my girlfriend. I felt very healed when I read this novel. Every word, deed, and expression of Lin Yiran was very touching. I like her very much. As for Zhang Yang, although his profile seems to say he wants to be a scumbag, he is actually very single-minded. I have ordered all of them, but I haven't looked at them much recently because I don't have time, but I will look through the catalog. Looking at the chapter title, I know roughly what happened. Really, I felt very happy when I read the chapter about the engagement. I don't know why. Maybe it was because my regrets were fulfilled in the novel. I also guessed at that time that it might be about to end. But this is your ending. . . . Really, so uncomfortable. I originally planned to wait for you to finish writing and then read it in full, but suddenly I lost interest because no matter how good the previous writing is or how deep the love is, it is not sugar falling on my heart, but salt sprinkled on the wound. Actually, I don't know what to say in Crackle, but I just feel uncomfortable. This is the first time I have said so much in a book review area. The first time I read your novel was Star Summoner, the second time was Champion's Arrow, and now, my favorite is Champion's Arrow. Not for anything else, just for the perfect ending. Maybe many people don't like it, or don't think there is a happy ending in reality. But I think maybe it's because there are so few of them in reality that I like to see happy endings in novels where everyone is happy. When I read novels, I generally like those that are overall positive and optimistic. This does not mean that dark novels are not well written. Rather, I want to find more warmth. However, thank you to the author. Although I don't like the ending of this story, the sugar in the middle is very sweet, really sweet. It would be nice if there was no best chapter.

Looking at it all the way from the Arrow of Champions, even if it breaks into a dove, as soon as a new chapter is released, I will still chase it as soon as possible. But I really can't follow the recent plot. I can't say what's wrong with it. It doesn't feel that interesting anymore. I used to see people laughing and rolling around on the bed. Now, no matter how I watch it, I just can't get enough of it. Even if I turn on the automatic subscription, I don't want to open it and read it. Maybe it's a transitional period, but I personally feel that the character creation is beginning to become more facial-like. Whether it's Lin Yiran, Zhou Fan, or his parents and sister. They all lack a memorable point. I haven't read the previous original work. I saw book friends saying that Zhou Fan actually has a long plot. There may be various reasons, such as preventing harmony or something, but why can't we use more space, even if it means changing it or rewriting something else? When I mention Zhou Fan now, I just feel that "oh, the male protagonist brother" is gone. Since it is positioned in the city, why not add a little more daily life to flesh out the characters. If we are afraid of being scolded, daily life and daily life are two different things. Which book in the urban category can be remembered by old bookworms that is not very good at daily life? I don't know if it's because of the daily plot that people complain about, but I want to say that it's really because of your delicate emotional descriptions that readers like to support you. I'd be even more disappointed to see something like this that follows the outline. Lin Yiran is the same. It lacks the feeling of slowly falling in love. It feels like the progress is very fast and she becomes a girlfriend soon. So when I think of this person, "Ah, the male protagonist's girlfriend, she has a lot of sexy tricks, and the family is rich" (maybe it's because of backwards... When I fell in love with Qianqian, readers were really anxious). I still prefer the previous work. All the female characters, including Mu Wanli, who was widely criticized by readers, all like it. I am not writing this to criticize anything. I can't write this if I give it a pen. I have just liked Chen Gezi for a long time. I must be unhappy if the results of my new book are not good. I just hope that I can express some of what I feel. It would be better if I find it helpful. It's okay, I'm used to it anyway, I just wish the quality of each chapter was better, or if I want to start a new book, it wouldn't end up like the previous book. Thinking about the people in the book, it's quite sad. Also, come on.

I feel that the author is a young female writer. I have several big problems. The first point is that she is not a great writer, but she does not have three golden chapters. She has reached the main topic in more than 20 chapters. I don't know what she thinks. The second point is that the emotions are delicate but not rich enough. To put it bluntly, she does not have the writing power. There is no excitement and not many poisonous points. The plot is bland and flowing. It belongs to You can guess the second one after reading the first one. The third one is very pretentious about relationships. This should be a common hobby of female literary youths. The setting at the beginning is a failure. Literary copycats need experience to plagiarize. Singing also requires experience in singing. Unless you follow the setting, you will fall in love and break up, and reincarnate endlessly? It would be better to directly learn the sealed memory of the global actor and enter the virtual world, and then you can sing sad songs. Or directly establish a relationship with the heroine, and then mainly focus on ancient styles and sweet love songs, supplemented by literature, such as confession balloons, snow between eyebrows, string-stringing scenes, and writing about Jin Yong, Gu Long, Huang Yi, etc., They can be plagiarized, and they are well-known. In fact, I feel that I can directly plagiarize Dou Po Cang Qiong, or Douluo Dalu. There is no need to plagiarize those people, a Journey to the West and a Douluo Dalu. I feel that most people still like Douluo Dalu

Author, do you still remember me? Three years ago, the only book that gave out red envelopes ended up being lost.

I went to those big book lists to give the author a shout, and the author came to praise me! ! ! ! 🤓🤓🤓🤓

It is very comfortable to watch, there are not so many cliché pretense, but no matter which character is written, it is very realistic, whether it is the protagonist's family or the heroine's family. Moreover, the interactions between the characters are all very interesting, allowing people to calm down and read word by word instead of just reading at a glance. A small suggestion is that the author seems to occasionally have unclear references. There are two people in the previous sentence, and "he" in the next sentence often makes people confused about who they are referring to. In this case, just use the name. In fact, this happened occasionally in the previous book.

I have listened to and read a lot of new books recently. It looks like this book is out of reach. If it weren't for people praising my various chapters every day, I might have forgotten about this book. In fact, subscribing is a kind of support and an investment, but... So I was confused because I asked Chen Da in the book "Champion" if he would consider rewriting this low-key book. He told me that he also had the same idea, so I felt that I should never give up on this book, but... On my way home today, my son asked me: Who was the last emperor? Was it Qin Shihuang? Then I told him it was Aisin Gioro Puyi, and my son asked me: Why is the name so long? I said they are ethnic minorities, Manchus, and privet people. If there are not even ten thousand privets, they will be invincible. Historically, privet was very powerful. From the Jin Dynasty to the Liao Dynasty and the Song Dynasty, to the Qing Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty, they always defeated more with less, and defeated advanced productivity with backward productivity. The son asked again why they were destroyed in the end? I say that no matter whether it is a person or a country, we cannot slack off. If we sail against the current and do not advance, we will retreat. Then I thought of Chen Da, Sister Jiao, and Da Gou... Finally, I hope that every work I listen to and watch in the future will have an ending... PS: I despise Himalaya. Unfinished works are often signed as finished...

It's stable. After Sanjiang is promoted on the homepage, it will be almost ready for sale. My prediction is pretty accurate. 😁{"NickName":"Yuxue Zibingchen","UserId":214991566}

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Personally, I feel that it would make more sense for Chu Chu (Yang Yuting) to be similar to the protagonist's girlfriend in his previous life only in name. Because the first meeting in Chapter 11 was amazing, when Zhang Yang first met Yi Yi, he felt that it was difficult to find someone comparable to him in his previous life. And in this book, Yang is defined as no less than still. If Zhang Yang really had been dating such a person for ten years in his previous life, it would be difficult to find out. Instead, he would subconsciously think of his girlfriend in his previous life. Similarly, if he had really been dating someone of that level for ten years, he wouldn't have been a bit gaffey when he first met Yi Yi. After all, there are some similarities between Yi Yi and Yang in the settings of this book, although the author seems to have changed Yi Yi's character... Well, let's be honest, writing so many comments that cannot stand up to scrutiny is really just to make trouble. I just want to read more sweet plots about Yiyang. This request is not too much, right? 🥺🥺🥺 I just hope to read novels to relax my mood for the whole day. (Say important things three times: support Yiyang, support Yiyang, support Yiyang. The rest go to Antarctica 😡😡😡)

A new book has been opened, and there are many vacant roles. You can post what you want in it, and I will choose from it. It doesn't matter if you choose a name that doesn't sound dramatic. It's uglier and more leisurely than the protagonist. The standard for girls is the opposite....

Harmful, how can I put it, as a graduate student, chasing novels every day is really one of the few pleasures I have. When I first started following Arrow of Champions and continued to chase this book, I actually had some expectations, especially when I was eating sweets, I was really happy, but from the beginning You can probably tell from reading between the lines about half a month ago that it is probably almost finished, because from the sloppy writing and the meaningless scrolling of the plot, you can see that there is no motivation to continue writing, but there is still some hope, after all, I want to find someone. It's not easy to write a novel with a fresher style and less clichés. Unfortunately, this day has come. To be honest, my biggest feeling after reading the ending is that I don't feel anything at all. It's that my heart no longer follows the direction of the story and continues to have waves. It was then that I realized that yes, not only was the author no longer motivated to write, but the readers were also mechanically chasing updates, as if they were executing a fixed program every day, rather than trying to resonate with these words full of longing. So be it, since Chen Da himself felt uncomfortable writing about it, and everyone would feel uncomfortable chasing after him, it would be better to stop there. However, it is quite uncomfortable to have glass stubble sprinkled all over the floor. Personally, I have had a lot of fluctuations in my mentality during this period of time due to stress. It seems that I will not have a good night's sleep tonight. I don't know what else I can be touched about. So let's leave it like this. I still want to thank Lin Yiran. She once appeared in my life. Although it was short-lived, it can be regarded as bringing a trace of my yearning for beauty. I hope that no matter when Chenda writes the next book, he can still maintain his original intention and writing style, at least not to fall into the cliché. You must know that some people like your writing style, please don't give up easily. If it ends like this again next time, I really may not be able to hold on. Coming from an unknown reader who reads books silently and rarely posts any long comments.

Why does it have to be written like this? Isn't it good for the protagonist to travel alone? . . When I write about multiplayer time travel, I feel uncomfortable every time I watch it. Does the protagonist's life have to be in the hands of others? . . Even if the old man wouldn't do anything to him, how could he still pretend to be so mellow? It would be a little embarrassing to think that someone in this world already knows about the protagonist and knows that he is not that capable. . . .