The Blind Sword Fairy of Shushan

It's so disgusting. The main character is like a fool. He feels happy and unhappy at the same time. Don't watch this.

The plot is getting more and more clumsy, the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, and the villain is always let go for various reasons. It's okay to come in once in a while. If you write like this often, no matter how many times you write every day, readers won't be happy with it. After entering the fairy world, the protagonist obviously has enough strength, but others still regard the protagonist as a weakling who is squashed and rounded. Every time he shows his strength, he is misunderstood, interrupted for various reasons, and the villain is always let go. I skipped watching the plot after going to the fairy world. I just hope that the author will make it clear that he is writing a good article. Even if he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, it is not written in this way. If he mixes with pigs every day, he will really become a pig. Even if the protagonist reveals his identity in the latest chapter, the author may feel happy, but I feel unhappy because in the eyes of the villain, the protagonist is still weak compared to the villain. He only survives because someone protects him. However, the protagonist clearly has the strength to kill the villain, but the author suddenly arranges a so-called opportunity and lets him go. Reading you writing like this every day is really painful.

Speaking of blind girls, I think of Toph from Avatar

It's only 15 chapters, but hundreds of years have passed, and cultivation in the mortal world is about to come to an end. It's very similar to a short book. Although it's cool, how can the author arrange the plot later? Stick with Xiao Xian'er and then go to the fairy world? 👻👻👻👻👻

Although, we are destined to meet again 😠✌️ I can no longer brainwash myself to convince myself 💔💔💔

Awesome, today is another 100,000 words. I wonder if the author has coded the entire novel before publishing it, or there is a system.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a... Such a classic pretentious novel...

This book gives people the feeling that there is no difference between changing the map and not changing it. The world after ascension has a very market-oriented atmosphere, and there is nothing like that. . . . I am the only one who dominates the nine heavens and ten earths. If this world were all aborigines, it would be barely understandable. However, as the ancestors who ascended to the upper world and ascended from other worlds were not reserved at all, it would be too petty. All the characters in the book are too stereotyped, and there are no characteristics that people can remember immediately. The villain is also a character who simply needs to trigger an event to appear. A young man appears for no reason and wants to take action against the protagonist or the protagonist's world without any logic. I won't go into the cultivation aspect, but the setting of adding invincible characters to the system is unnecessary. You can read this book when you are short of books, that's all.

The first big story, the Immortal Realm Chapter, was suddenly different from the protagonist who practiced silently + showed himself to others as a saint + the boss behind the scenes. I was threatened from behind + had my relatives and friends kidnapped (I can't even feel at ease in cultivation) + was hunted down by everyone in the world + was chased to improve my cultivation level. Instead of silently trying to improve with peace of mind, I felt like giving the enemy a hammer behind my back. From leisurely walking to breaking through the limit all of a sudden, there is a sense of suffocation and suffocation. What's more, relatives and friends are always being teased 😒

Watch it with your brain: Subway Old Man Mobile Phone. Jpg Watch it without your brain: It's a bit weird, I took a quick look and finished it firmly. The author is too lazy and it's not the protagonist's fault.

Originally I just collected it and haven't read it yet, but it ended up being updated with dozens of chapters in a few days. This kind of author must be supported!

I tested it, it's so exciting, it's only been a month and a half since I started the book and it already has 900,000 words, what kind of human flesh printer is this?

Oh my god, 10 updates a day

I updated someone else's volume for half a year in one week. That's awesome.

No, buddy, where's your tentacle monster?

The ending of Fairy World is too hasty. I just wrote a few big holes and then ended it hastily.

Damn, the second story is great. It is recommended to jump directly to the second story. Cool!

I can't stand it after reading more than 200 chapters. It's said that it's a one-part show and there aren't a few female characters except for the first one. That little fat guy Meng Buyu writes every day. It's really annoying when I see it. If you like it, write more.

This book is just about being invincible and pursuing the highest road. If the protagonist inexplicably falls in love with someone, he will really become a poisonous person and scare away many readers.

I remember the author also has an account, can you @ him?