From Wild Mage to Wizard King

It only took me an afternoon to read it, but one chapter of this book is as good as three chapters of some books. The satisfaction it brings is completely different from that kind of parallel import. The writing has a clean and crisp feeling. I like this very much. I will update it soon.

It's a free-to-watch, the structure is fine, the plot is fine, the characters are interesting, and the story development is okay. Some small plots or clever tricks can make people smile, but it feels too dry, like a paper mixed with jokes, and like a big pot of water with a small amount of sugar added. It feels like the plot and dialogue that can generate a lot of emotions have all become dull after the author's wonderful writing 🙂🙂🙂

Notes about this book: 1: Why did the battle for lords begin just after writing this? Answer: The tone of this book from the beginning is a Western fantasy hegemony novel. This is also evident from the title of the book. The [King] in the title [From Wild Mage to Wizard King] has already indicated the direction of the book. Two: Since we are writing about a fight for hegemony, why is there such a plot of travel and adventure in the front? Answer: This book belongs to the same line as the previous one, and the previous book started directly to compete for content, but failed to sign the contract and was killed. Therefore, after absorbing the experience of other authors, I changed to a beginning that is easier to sign. Due to the change of the beginning and the lack of strength of the protagonist at the beginning, the first volume is mainly about the wandering and development of the protagonist. Due to the lack of experience, the transition may be a bit stiff. The second volume is the official start of territory management and hegemony content. Three: Why is there a single female protagonist? Moreover, the heroine is not the same person as the heroine of the previous book. Answer: Originally, based on the character setting of the male protagonist, this book should not have a female protagonist. However, in order to avoid possible male-male drama, we decided to write a single female protagonist. The reason why the female protagonist is not the same person is because the world line has changed. The male protagonist in this book has a different start than the previous book, and the female protagonist's choices have also changed. Four: Why not write about the harem? Answer: I have never been in love, so I don't know how to write a love story. Five: If you don't write about the harem, why are there so many female characters? Answer: The author believes that gender is not important in the extraordinary world. Moreover, I heard from other people that female characters are more attractive to readers. Therefore, male characters must be written, and female characters must be written. Six: Worldview Questions Answer: This book draws on part of the world map and settings of [Ambennar], and stitches together some classic Western fantasy settings, but the plot of this book is not the official plot of [Ambennar]. In addition, [Thousand Years War] is the name of the game that the author came up with. It has nothing to do with the real game, and this book does not use any settings of the real game. Seven: Why can playing games bring mage knowledge to practical use? Answer: They can copy the settings of other games and other worlds. So, I think I can do it too. I don't need to be so clear about the specific settings ( 8: The question of combat power Answer: The male protagonist is invincible. Just think about it or not. If you are willing to pay the price, there is nothing you can't do. Nine: Copper smelting problem Answer: There is no content about copper smelting. Please do not misinterpret the normal communication between the male protagonist and his subordinates. I have never written about the age of any person in detail. The appearance and clothing of the smaller girl are just a general description of her appearance. Please don't think wrongly. This book is a single heroine. No matter how beautiful the other female characters are, they are just supporting roles and subordinates. Ten: Why didn't you reply to the reader at the beginning? Start replying now. Answer: I asked some other authors and they thought it would be better for the offending author to reply to readers' comments when they have time, so I started to reply. 2024.8.10 17.27 To be continued.

I was asked several readership questions. Think about it. If there are 30 likes or 20 comments, I will open a reader group.

After reading 20 chapters, I can only say that you are enough for an average author to write more than 100 chapters. Flow batch! ! ! I hope to write a little slower later, I am afraid that you will make too little money and run away. The paid chapters can be more watery before, but it will be very good to write them like this later.

I hope there are no players, but first-level mages make most third-level spell scrolls, which is a bit outrageous. Hiss, it seems to be second-level.

Speaking of which, the more I read this book, the more familiar it becomes. Author, have you ever played Anbenar?

The first chapter of the sacrifice flow looks familiar. The names of the supporting characters have been changed, the names of the sacrifice items have been changed, and the plot is basically the same. I looked at the release time and found that your first chapter was posted later than others. I don't know if everyone has the same template or just imitated it.

Good guy, it feels like I've read the synopsis.

After reading the first ten chapters, I felt that it lacked a spiritual energy, a feeling that I was reading the outline of the book. I think every living person has flesh and blood, but I only saw the skeleton in this novel. This is not because I am good at anatomy, but because I feel like I am missing something.

Is the protagonist's physical strength really improving? I've been writing for a long time and it's still in the same place, and there's no sign of it.

The rhythm is very smooth, smooth, and peaceful. It's a bit like a narrative. I feel tired after watching too much.

It's readable but there aren't many highlights. The novel is more like a game guide. It's straightforward and straightforward and has no emotional color. It's a direct copy of the real system and puts it on a Western fantasy. It's a bit nondescript. There are many things that are unique to our socialism.

Generally speaking, those with more chapters than comments are not good. Is there a Shen Nong 🙂

Originally, this kind of novel relied on plot prophets to become stronger, but you are making it seem like the strong man is reborn. You can roll scrolls by hand without a game panel? ? ?

The wizard transfers the lord to farm, which is not easy to evaluate. You should write it as the path from mage to floating city (╬≖_≖)

It would be better not to write the emotional line of the protagonist. There is no sweet feeling at all, and I don't even feel many emotional fluctuations. It feels dryer than a blind date during the Chinese New Year. Moreover, the character of the heroine is not lovable at all. I feel that it is always holding me back. It is not a hindrance in ability but in emotions. The negative emotions are too heavy and cannot have a positive impact on the protagonist at all. It will only make the protagonist keep saving her, helping her, and coaxing her, over and over again. It makes me feel tired just watching it.

At present, no one reads Qidian's wizarding novels. This may be due to the proliferation of imitations of "Wizard World". Since Qidian's recommendations also have problems, I see this book as a "Wizard" type of work among those similar recommendations for wizarding novels. Would the author consider changing the title of the book? It's better to avoid the word "wizard", because the protagonist is obviously a mage, and the background is also traveling through the game world.

How does the protagonist feel in the main plot? A woman sleeps in the same room every day. The protagonist is Liu Xiahui. Then the aristocratic children who have no inheritance rights buy to kill you. The protagonist kills those killers and leaves. I feel that it is not recommended for those who want to kill decisively or to build a territory and fight monsters and upgrades. This book is enough to endure. The general plot is that the teacher leads the students.

The protagonist is a professional player/master who plays games. What he learns in the game, such as meditation methods, spell models, runes, etc., Are all things that players need to actually learn? Then there should be very few players playing mage in this game, right? Or are there two types of mage players? One is that the protagonist actively learns the knowledge in the game and can create and change meditation methods and spell models (game skills). The other is that he does not learn knowledge and relies entirely on the game system? Then there is a problem with the game components. If it is just a game, then it is normal that the knowledge in the game cannot be used in reality, because it is fictionalized by people in reality. But after the protagonist travels through time, the other world is exactly the same as the game. With the knowledge learned in the game, the protagonist can understand and modify the sacrificial rituals. He can also use the knowledge learned in the game, meditation methods, spell models, writing scrolls, and manufacturing gadgets. This game is just for the protagonist to travel through time, right? The "god" of another world predicts/deduces everything that will happen in the other world, and then makes a game for the real world to play. When the time of the other world develops and before the game plot begins, the protagonist is pulled to the other world. In this way, the protagonist has the history and knowledge predicted/deduced by the "god", and can benefit from it. The "god" can also gain something from the protagonist's activities in the other world. Probably. To be honest, this kind of traveling from the game to a different world that is the same as the game. You said that the subsequent historical development of the different world is similar to the direction of the game plot. I can understand it, but the breathing methods, meditation methods, Qi training methods and other things that need to be learned in the game can be used in the different world. If you want to say that there is no problem with this game, then there must be something wrong.

I would like to ask the author, can the protagonist really learn spells by playing games? Regardless of whether the spell is true or false, he must remember a lot of knowledge after traveling through the spell. If there really was a game in the world, and the prerequisite for using a skill was to memorize a book, how many people do you think would play this game?

You still need to practice writing this introduction. There is nothing attractive at all. It is the best to write a golden finger to draw a big cake.

Looking for books, the protagonist can finally decide whether people in the game world can come out. The game is also a real world. The protagonist's first copy is in the historical elf city. The protagonist is a slave in the elf city. The elf uses the protagonist as a pet to teach him various knowledge. Later, he thinks that the pet cannot be controlled and plans to kill it. The protagonist later changes the protagonist. An elf kills the night in the city. After passing the dungeon, he joins the university. The protagonist seems to devour everything with holy light or pale flames. The Holy Light Religion invites the protagonist to join them but he refuses. He is still in the university. The protagonist is invited by the Holy Light Religion to participate in the Pale Holy War. The protagonist has always been ranked first in the game. Does anyone know what book it is?

The introduction looks the same as the Shepherd's Tantra

The author's writing style Continuous "Le" endings Continuous "But" transitions Alas

Let me provide you with some thoughts and ideas The first thing that comes to mind is the pit that I traveled to the former Blue Star. It has not been completely filled yet and I feel that I can dig deeper The second thing is that, after unifying the world and entering the interstellar era, how will the political system change and develop? How does the military evolve? The people's ideology stretched again. The third force has not reached the highest level in all novels. First, there are creation and destruction of the world, as well as multiple settings of travel. Fourthly, optimize the first half of the novel. You can feel the author's writing skills improving in the later period. Yes, you can optimize it appropriately and add some word changes after optimization. The fourth thing is that the author is not diligent in updating. After all, the data is not good-looking. There are no logical errors in the front, but how can I put it, it cannot seduce people's emotions and make people excited. It can be seen that the author is already working hard. Alas, since you don't want to open a new book, then you should work hard and get more updates. Maybe he can come back to life like the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms and become a big boss. The previous chapter of his author Baihe must have also been changed and not marked. At least I feel it is smoother than before.

It looks pretty good to me. I'll support it with 5 votes.

I started reading this book in 2024 and have voted for it many times. I've voted 13 times in 25 years alone. To be honest, the first few hundred chapters were really well written, but after reading it, I felt that it was a bit uninteresting. Gradually, the writing became a bit watered down, especially the chapter about the founding and development of the college. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on, author😆