The Martial Arts Master in Naruto

Those who wore Naruto in the late Qing Dynasty were not modern people and had never watched Naruto.

I thought I wouldn't be able to accept "The Time Traveler Doesn't Know the Plot," but after reading it, I realized that it's not that the time traveler doesn't know the plot, but that the time traveler doesn't know the plot but copies it. This article is well handled, and the logic is self-consistent and self-explanatory. It's pretty good, but the blessings of a group of ninjas are not blessings for you to implement your own ninja, but blessings for martial arts. It's quite embarrassing. When I saw this, it came to my mind. When I was young, there was an old Chinese saying that a wise man is a man who knows the current affairs. .

When I saw the latest chapter, the main character was pitiful when he was weak, but when he became stronger, it had nothing to do with him. It was also my fault. I shouldn't be angry with him. I just thought of so many living children entering the root, and even your childhood friends were harmed by the root. How could I describe it in a simple way: The root has a bad relationship with most departments. I am reminded of Lu Xun's words: I only find other people's joys and sorrows noisy. I also remembered why other authors don't like to write about friends and relatives. Cause and effect are difficult! The writing is very good, and the protagonist's main focus is to survive, but I didn't really like it.

It's about preaching, teaching, and solving doubts. The protagonist is just a selfish seeker and does not deserve the name of a master.

I feel that as I get to the end, I am not writing about Naruto, but about cultivating immortals. I would like the author to first understand Naruto clearly, and then analyze it based on the fundamental spirit of cultivating immortals. Don't do it mechanically. Secondly, celestial arts appear in Konoha's forbidden books. If you, the author, don't understand the original work, then don't write it blindly. Withdrawn

Eat the meal one bite at a time. Are you promoting the plot? Are you writing an essay? Your protagonist's plot development hasn't reached that level yet, so why do you write so much? You write so many settings for the protagonist. Your protagonist can't even reach that point. Why do you write so many settings? Ignore the plot and advance the role. Your plot hasn't even gotten there yet, why did you write so much? Write this thing for a while without writing it, let the protagonist practice it. It's all theory. What's more, your current plot is in the middle of a war. There is no way to practice! On the battlefield again. There is no way to practice.

If you read it as an original, this book is okay, but if it is a fan novel, it won't be so good. The classic "little things can be changed but big things remain unchanged" basically maintains the original plot. It was said earlier that the character was not strong enough, and only one participant was the main character, but nothing changed. In Night of the Nine Tails, in order to comply with the original plot, Minato was allowed to die. Looking at the subsequent plot, he gave way to the protagonist Godai. Minato Minato only knows one ghoul seal, which is awesome. Moreover, when writing about politics, one has to write well or exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. Just as the protagonist hates stupidity, readers hate poorly written ones even more. .

In the final analysis, national martial arts is actually the use of the human body. It is summarized by the ancestors. There is no reason that you can summarize others but not others. There is not much difference in IQ, and others have chakra and may have a deeper understanding of the human body. Therefore, soft fists and strong fists are not necessarily inferior to national martial arts, such as Tsunade's violent fists. Therefore, the biggest bonus of national martial arts may also be the bonus of ideas. The skills of low-level magicians will definitely not be as good as those of high-level magicians. It should be said that the peak technology of national martial arts should not be as good as the peak technology of the chakra world. However, any skill that is outstanding and superb will trigger the attribute of enlightenment. After enlightenment, the structure can be built based on the current conditions. For the protagonist, this attribute of enlightenment is the most important. There are many people who write about the national martial arts Naruto, but it is not advisable to blindly promote the national martial arts.

It's not like you to waste money. Do you think readers are fools?

How come the author always likes to deviate from the main line? Who cares if he deviates too far? I have skipped all the recent ones.

The flaws are not hidden from the front, but after becoming Hokage, the operation seems to be childish and boring. After becoming Hokage, the protagonist is given a set of group intelligence buffs, and everyone around him becomes mentally retarded. The construction aspect is also very empty. The author completely abandoned the part he is best at, turned around and wrote a bunch of stuff, and it hurts.

It's a good idea. The plot of the modern ancient martial arts master's time travel is very creative, and the author's writing style is also good. However, I feel that the author's lack of creative experience has a big problem in handling details. At first, I feel that the author's plot creation ability is too low, and he has written too many stream-of-consciousness things. It is uncomfortable to read. After all, it is a two-dimensional fan or the second creation of Wangdao Comics. This way it reads very emo. Although there is not much emo plot, it feels very emo when reading it. The second protagonist does not know the details of the film world. The author advances the plot from the protagonist's perspective, and then makes critical comments on the character from a god's perspective. It feels very disconnected, especially when the sudden critical review of the Third Hokage may not be from a god's perspective, which would be even more depressing. How could a kid who had just arrived in Konoha and was still intensively trained in the early stage get so much information about the village leaders. The plot in the third part is intellectually subdued, especially the part where they are in contact with the Akatsuki organization. It feels like none of the three parties are talking to adult ninjas, which is a bit childish.

The time traveler doesn't know the plot, but he is not stupid. If one can reach the realm of Baodan in Chinese martial arts, he will be the best among people in any era. There is no lack of talent and perseverance. I hope the author will not write too much in the future.

It is recommended that the author condense the previous 255 chapters into a prologue, because it will have no impact on the plot.

I think it is better for the author to write about martial arts. The author is really not suitable for fan fiction. This novel is a bit overwhelming.

It doesn't look good from outside traveling. Because the focus is not on myself. When writing about a person like Itachi who is inherently evil, you might as well write about Danzo's reformation.

The 4th generation is still dead. What is the difference from the original plot? What is the role of the protagonist?

The more I thought about it, the more I felt that things were going too far here on the Night of the Kyuubi. Even if Minato was to die, there was no need to weaken Minato. The whole intelligence was poor, the Jinchūriki would die without the tailed beasts, Minato didn't want to live and die for his love. I began to think that to save them both, the protagonist would give a new idea and put half of the Nine Tails into Xin Jiuna's body. . .

The writing is indeed good, but the content is too watery and suitable for skipping.

Let's read dozens of chapters later

No, you wrote at least ten chapters later when you broke through a new realm.

I think it's okay. Why are book reviews like this?

Ah, don't write anymore? I read the novel during a limited-time free period. What a coincidence?

Finished? Liu Daoming🐷, don't fight?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

This book would be perfect if it were replaced by a modern martial arts master who has never seen Naruto and traveled back in time! The protagonist has upright views, positive energy, and a somewhat funny plot! Anyway, it's suitable for me, an old bookworm of more than 20 years, come on!

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Hail Mary. I agree with the protagonist's force system, but I'm curious about how much coins the protagonist earns per month! If you fight so hard and retire due to illness after a few battles, why are you risking your life? You can't develop without fighting! Wouldn't it be better to quietly practice and surpass the Otsutsuki clan and then have a battle to decide the outcome?

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing and has many joys. "The old man in time travels picks up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious...

A small monthly ticket gives encouragement... Come on