Marvel's Master of Magic in the Heavens

The copy jumps too much, and the emotions and story points are inconsistent. It's still acceptable in the second line, but when there are too many copies later, I don't want to read it anymore. The writing is okay.

Duke, is that you? Duke🥹🥹🥹

I feel like there is too much ink used in the dungeon world. The main line is Marvel, but now I feel that "Harry Potter" is the main line. It would be okay if there were only two worlds for double-travel, but looking at the introduction, it is obvious that there are many dungeons. Speeding up the dungeons and improving strength is the way to go! I also want to see the protagonist use various magic systems to compete in Marvel 🙂 (personal opinion)

The Forbidden Demon God is super single, while DND is a standard multiverse. Isn't it inappropriate for you to call someone a small world?

The city has collapsed, isn't it? Can't the world of Fairy Tail be solved by Heavenly Father? It takes a single universe to deal with the native gods of the planet like Death. I don't know how the combat power is divided!

I saw the latest chapter. The brothers have never had a female protagonist. This book is really well written. It is not impossible to have good grass and fairy grass.

Works with a single female protagonist do not have a wide audience, so everyone can vote for details.

How can I put it this way? This book gave me the feeling that the power shown by the protagonist did not match his realm at all. And many times the adjectives are several kilometers, tens of thousands of meters and so on. Please, we are all at the peak of Heavenly Father or even at the single universe level. Not only can we destroy galaxies or even the universe casually, but we can also destroy planets with a single blow, right?

Perfectly avoiding all the worlds I know, you are the new human being at the starting point

Run quickly, there is a clone who is a woman

Haha, it made me laugh so hard. If you use Professor Does a bald head have hair?

The poisonous point I personally think is about the wand. It's always the wand. Without the wand, you can't perform magic? He can be used as an auxiliary tool, but it cannot be used as a necessary tool. I always think about making a wand instead of thinking about being able to perform magic on my own. Things like wands can be used as auxiliary tools.

The training system has collapsed. The single strong person in the universe behaves like a planet-level person, overwhelming the protagonist to death, compared to the weak ones.

Forcing the protagonist not to know the plot of the anime, just one or two, but the result is that most of them don't know it, which is too outrageous. For example, I have never watched Fairy Tail, but I still know the name of the anime and the name of the protagonist.

Through my conscientious reading of comments, I found the author's personal answer, it is multiple female protagonists

I'm not a fan of the mental castration trend in Qidian in recent years, and I can tell you that no woman doesn't read it (I've been a bookworm for more than 20 years).

It looks great. All the copies are now very good. I hope the newly opened Magic Forbidden can also be maintained! Although it starts in Academy City, I feel like the protagonist will immediately fall into the embrace of magic by pressing the urine button! Looking forward to(✧◡✧) And, has the author run out of manuscripts? There are no five updates every day. It's so uncomfortable and I can't sleep at night.

It's a bit outrageous... Pig's Foot's first clone, an 80-year-old dark wizard, doesn't even have the storage equipment for the Traceless Stretch Spell? Does anyone believe this? A dark wizard who is always ready to run away lives to be 7080 years old. Is it possible

So, since it's a soul time travel and it's controlled back and forth by both sides, why not just forget about it? It's quite stupid.

I have read several of the author's books on and off. The biggest advantage is that the small scenes and details are good. The biggest disadvantage is that he cannot write big scenes. High-end battles cannot be expressed at all. And no matter what level you upgrade to, it will always be the accumulation of energy, laws, rules, authority and the like. Even if it is written, it is not at all relevant and powerful, and people cannot feel how powerful it is.

I have read the latest chapter, and the overall feeling is quite good and innovative.

This book is really well written. I finished reading it in one sitting today. It was so enjoyable. Big boost to the author! Not enough

The pace is a bit slow, what does the protagonist say? It feels a bit like an ancient novel. Others are already about to beat up the protagonist, but they first say a bunch of nonsense, saying that I don't want to bully you, and then they see that the protagonist is just trying to bully you, so they directly come up to educate the protagonist, and the protagonist is willing to take action. How to say it? The person on the other side just wants to intimidate you. He knows that reasoning with him is useless, so he wants to reason with him in order to show that he is kind.

There are three heroines in total... It seems, one is Lord of the Rings, one is Fairy Tail, and one is Marvel's Wanda. There are not many emotional scenes. The first one feels that the protagonist has been holding it in for a long time, and finally released her true nature when she became stronger. This was not the case before. The second one has no emotional scenes at all. The conversation was gone, and we were suddenly together. The third feeling was for Wanda's power of chaos. Since the protagonist finally stopped playing, I feel that the protagonist has changed. The subsequent plots are not as good as the previous ones. There is also the plot of League of Legends. I have been looking forward to it, but there is no plot at all.

It feels like the author just jumps when watching movies and anime, such as Apparition. Wouldn't opening a portal in Marvel be more comfortable than Apparating? Does it still need improvement? The Marvel mage contracts with the Dimensional Demon God because he has no magic power, but the protagonist has it. With this, he can develop followers in the universe, and he still has to fight this and that.

Once I transform into a female, animal or plant, I feel a bit unbearable. There are too few female protagonists. Each avatar needs at least one female protagonist. They live like eunuchs. You don't need to write emotional scenes, but you have to write about the existence of female protagonists. The plot of the three protagonists who don't know the world they travel to is a bit fake.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! A very good novel about the Marvel world. Although the plot and power system begin to collapse later on, the early plot is very interesting. I look forward to the author's next novel being even more exciting! ! ! ! ! ! !

How do you write ✍Eastern Mythology later? ? Would the system really not collapse if it were different? ? ? 😥😥

There should be no heroine

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