Liver Experience Begins with Marrying a Wife

It's almost 100,000 words, let's talk about my feelings. 1. The author's writing is good and the emotions are on point. Although he writes about the death of his father, it also highlights the protagonist's increasingly difficult situation and the feeling of danger. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot of the protagonist breaking out of the siege and rebuilding the glory of the family. 2. Overall, the plot logic is relatively smooth. There are some minor flaws, but the new author can understand them. In the future, he can write better and better, so that he can continue to read them. 3. The author is very obedient to the advice. He has corrected all the jokes in the past. Almost all the spellings in each chapter are correct. It seems that he is very careful. I would like to praise him here. I like this kind of author who listens to the advice carefully and writes the book carefully. You must work hard! 4. Update more. The more you update, the more people will read it. You can always recommend it. Only when it is put on the shelves can you get good results. New authors cannot compare with old authors, so they can only use their popularity to increase their popularity. I hope that they can be more popular and more people will read. I hope that the author will become famous and popular. He must rise!

Today's authors seem to have to pray to their parents before they can write a book, and if they don't, they can't write a book.

Establish words as evidence. The book has been widely read and recommended, and it has been updated every day since it was released! !

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A few suggestions: 1. Time travel is not as good as rebirth or the mystery of the womb, otherwise the logic is unstable. 2. The arrangement of the death of the father is unnecessary, and it is still very poisonous. 3. The family conditions of the hunter in the village having land are very inconsistent with the character of the protagonist's mother and wife who practice martial arts every day. She is a landlord and an old wealthy person. The logic of the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters in a good novel must be perfect, and the details can be worked out.

No wonder it seems a bit unreasonable. The protagonist traveled through time and joined the Demon Slayer Division through a plug-in. Although he could barely develop, he joined the team with the highest death rate. It felt like he knew he would not die. Even though she is about to have a child, the protagonist doesn't feel like a modern person anymore. Normal people would think of staying alive to protect their families first.

First let me talk about my opinions and what I think is unreasonable... ① The protagonist's master said that he could not defeat the tiger demon even when he was intact, which proves that the tiger demon has the least strength as a martial artist, but the protagonist relied on the so-called explosive seeds to cross a realm and a small realm with the second level of martial arts. Killing the Tiger Demon ② When the warrior's Qi and blood are first refined, the strength is only enough to lift a thousand kilograms, but the protagonist's strength shown by the second martial artist refinement when he was in the Demon Suppression Department can lift an iron ball of sixty or seventy thousand kilograms. What is the purpose of this small realm that has increased his strength dozens of times? In addition, his junior martial brother, the first level warrior, is also here. Does he have the confidence to carry an iron ball weighing at least 10,000 kilograms? Did I see it wrong before? Is it possible that it is standard for a warrior to carry tens of thousands of kilograms in one training session? But his master is not that good. The martial artist and the second level of the martial artist are two realms apart. According to the author's setting, the starting strength is tens of millions of kilograms... It's quite speechless. It has been withdrawn. It is too unfriendly to a numerical person like me.

But the poison was poisoned, and there were two dragsters. In the early and middle stages of this kind of novel, the heroine is bad, and the talent

It feels like the monsters and weirdness only target the protagonist's family, and everyone else is fine.

The protagonist seems to be very filial to his mother, but now that he has the conditions, he doesn't want to give his mother a few maids to enjoy the blessings, and lets his mother do everything.

I can't understand. There is a panel. I don't practice much. Why do I have to run up the mountain?

There are a lot of minor flaws. The modern style is too prominent. Shouldn't I say these things? What the hell is the intermediary? 😥 Try to be more ancient in your sentences.

How did you improve your level? Doesn't it have anything to do with the exercises? Why is it that even though the skills have reached the level of a master, the protagonist is still in the realm of an apprentice?